Another Possibility for HP

This book is really good, so good that it's worth using my few brain cells to describe it. This book exceeds your expectations and the quality is very good. I hope everyone can read such a beautiful book. ! The story of this book is not procrastinating and the conception is rigorous, making it a pleasure to read. A great, great book. The writing is very interesting. The characters are also very delicate and the feelings are sincere. I love this book so much. Please hurry up and update it. The fascinating storyline and vivid plot make me feel like I am in the world of the book. I like it. I like it. Please update it soon~

It seems that it will be an excellent story so far. The two sisters Jane and Anna are very attractive. Although it is a pity that little Anna who yearns for magic cannot have magic, she is like a happy puppy and is really cute. I am looking forward to the development of the next story. I hope the author can finish the story and not be fooled. If it is Jane, she should be able to see technology and magic in the future. At present, it seems that Jane is likely to promote the development of the magic world. I am very curious whether Jane will become the third Demon King and take the flexible integration of knowledge and technology to bring new development to the magic world. However, if Jane is so smart, maybe she can also develop magic props that little Anna can use. It should make her very happy.

HP technology + magic is a theme I like very much, but it is relatively rare to be well written and innovative, so I like this book and it will not be a loss to invest in it. At first I thought it was because there was no cp (I was confused when I scanned the article recently). Everyone in the past was just a child and didn't do cp. Then I saw the beautiful moonlight and I wanted to do it with Snape x the heroine. But the heroine was really frigid, so she didn't kiss her, and then silently kissed Sili. I didn't feel right until I read the book review. The author replied that the cp was Snape. Although I got the wrong cp, the heroine and I got the same cp. (?) All in all, the family and friendship part at the beginning is really good, and I'm looking forward to the following plot (Jian, please come back soon) ps: I'm afraid some Leslie CP will say something more. This book doesn't have the Leslie CP tendency, it's really about friendship. I'm just an omnivorous person who eats a few bites of everything [eating melon]

Ahhh, I like Jane so much, please bring Jane back quickly. Yuan Zhen has no feelings. My family and friends still love Jane. Sif still keeps the little snowman. Anna Regulus and Lily. Oh, come back to life.

A treasured article, I almost missed it because there were not many reviews. The heroine, Severus, and Lily have played together since childhood. The heroine's ideas have affected the original character's personality, so the original character is not considered OOC.

Look well, Jane may be the most beautiful star embedded in the night sky, hanging quietly in the sky, flickering lightly, exuding soft brilliance, supporting their dreams and the path to the wizarding world. The heroine of this book is a very gentle and strong person [Like]

Some characters are OOC, but the story is a good one [Love]

The pace of the plot is fast and not draggy.

Highly recommended, very beautiful.

Another perspective of the HP world

The author's writing is really good. I particularly like Jane.

It's very interesting. Based on my experience of reading 50 HP fan books, this one is a very refreshing, novel and interesting treasure. I hope the author can keep it like this and don't end it unfinished [Blow kiss] Such wonderful, heart-warming love. This life is not in vain!

Not bad, compact and well set up. It would be better if the ending is improved

Not bad, not bad. I really like the heroine's daily interactions with her relatives and friends. It's very warm.

The writing is very good, why not many people [what]

It's great to watch, but could the author please not resurrect James?

I love this so much. It has to be pretty good too. Keep up the good work, come on

In addition to the OOC characters, the ideas are great, and the plot narrative is also relatively complete, which is very interesting.