Showbiz: From Super Girl to Global Domination

First of all, I am interested in the subject matter. The current pace of the plot is a bit too fast, skipping 5 years after 100 chapters, and many details of growth are not unfolded; and the plot is relatively simple, basically a cycle of "release a song (one chapter for each song during the release period) → become popular → hotly discussed on the forum", occasionally interspersed with variety shows and parties, and lacks industry details, character growth and plot ups and downs in the entertainment industry I hope to adjust the details in the future and add more rich content (emotional life/family gatherings/intersections with fellow singers... Anything other than songs), reduce the homogeneous "singing hits" plot, and add content such as industry competition, career setbacks, interpersonal relationships, etc. To make the story more full and three-dimensional.

How can I put it this way? I like the subject matter of the novel, but the large number of song descriptions makes me a little bored. In fact, I should focus more on the description of the plot. The rhythm of the songs and plot is not well controlled. Forum comments actually do not need to be written in large lengths. One write can be a whole chapter or more. I really like the character of the protagonist.

This subject matter is quite good and very refreshing. It's just that the heroine's songs come too easily. The heroine can be reborn in a systematic way or arrange the sources of inspiration. I feel now that the heroine is not worthy of those songs

The subject matter is of interest to me, but at the time of entry, there are very few people writing about it. Maybe my expectations are too high, and I feel a bit inconsistent when reading it. The setting is in the 2000s, but some of the words used are now hot words and memes on the Internet. It is easy to create drama if the sense of the times is separated. Is the heroine as pale as a chrysanthemum? There is insufficient emotional foreshadowing. Some passages may appear to readers to be deliberately exaggerated, making it difficult to empathize. It may also be that as I read more and more articles, my aesthetic and reading thresholds have gradually become higher. Nowadays, faced with stories with ordinary writing, fragmented sense of time, and deliberately suspended emotional descriptions, it is difficult to have a strong sense of empathy and empathy. It's obviously my favorite subject matter, but I can only skip reading. I know clearly that it's not a bad writing, but I just can't sink in and be moved by the words. It's a pity. Come on, author.

It looks good, both the career line in the front and the emotional line in the back are very good. Although I don't listen to European and American songs, it does not affect the reading. Now the timeline has reached the time of enlistment. Which year does the author plan to write? I hope I can write this year's timeline.

Brother Long hasn't come out yet

It ended so hastily…

Come on, author, come on. I hope that there will always be a dragon behind the male protagonist, and he will not abuse Tian Tian, ​​​​because it is already bitter enough in reality.

Is the male protagonist G-Dragon?

I feel a lot of songs, it's great to watch them while listening to them Because the heroine's songs are released one by one, some songs may not be described, but the songs are all very good. You can search and listen to them. If you have any good songs, you can also tell us in the comment area [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss]