Love Apartment: The Super-Tech Inventor

My brother! Malignant tumors, acute myocardial infarction, sequelae of stroke, end-stage renal disease, chronic renal failure, uremia, loss of multiple limbs, malignant brain tumors, decompensation of chronic liver failure, sequelae of encephalitis, sequelae of meningitis, deep coma, Deafness in both ears, blindness in both eyes, paralysis, severe Alzheimer's disease, severe brain damage, severe Parkinson's disease, severe third-degree burns, severe primary pulmonary hypertension, severe motor neuron disease, loss of speech ability, severe aplastic anemia! Read a few more chapters before letting him go!

I came to comment after seeing the author saying that not many people had read it yet. The following are personal suggestions and opinions. Please read them at your own discretion. 1. The main body and outline of the author's book are good, and it revolves around cancer cells, immortality and technology (machines). In my opinion, Love Apartment adds some spice to the plot so that the plot does not seem too dry. However, from watching to the end, I found that cancer and immortality are not prominent, or even very little, and most of them are technology. After watching it, I personally feel that there are a few points that can be adjusted. 2. The aspect of cancer can actually be adjusted, such as speeding up the setting of immortality and ending it early. Now it seems that the protagonist is no different from a normal person. Rather than acting like a normal person, it is better to make him a normal person. Immortality is actually not suitable for the current situation in the book. Of course, it is not ruled out that the author will add the setting of mechanical ascension later. I personally think that the protagonist can be "immortal" faster. 3. The plot, there are not many problems in terms of the plot, it seems smooth and not too boring, but what I want to say is, have you forgotten the game you mentioned before? This setting is very good. Since there is technology, why not write the setting of the virtual warehouse? Although this setting is terrible, you have the setting of Aegean Apartment. It is also a good plot to make Pokémon or virtual world copies for people in the love apartment to play. 4. Regarding the heroine issue, this is purely a personal suggestion. If you have a single heroine or three heroines, if you insist on having a harem, it doesn't matter if you are good at writing and can write well. Overall, the plot is good, I hope I can continue writing it

A good book, I feel like it just wants stability. Don't be like other books, where if the writing is better, you will start to go crazy and die, without fear of exposing the whole world guided by the golden hand to mess with you (yes, I am talking about the Chunxi Road God of War) It's been a long time since I've read such a good book.

The writing is very nice. Can the protagonist reproduce the armor in Armor Warrior later? The sun, moon, stars, Xingtian, Nava, and generals can arm the police and the army.

It's a good scientific article, but it's a pity that it's covered in a variety of movies, so you may have to take both the left and the right, 👀The author wrote 🤔, but the article is still very good to read, and there are some small pleasant chapters 👍

This book has four stars in my heart. It's well written so far. Keep up the good work. I hope there won't be a plot where the protagonist's mother comes over to recognize her.

It is estimated that it will become a patriotic science and technology article

There are currently 60 chapters. The writing is pretty good. Keep up the good work. I hope you won't suddenly change your character. If you want to change it, you can wait until you recover from your illness and then slowly cycle through it.

So far, there aren't too many bad points, and the plot is also innovative. It's a novel that can be read. I would like to give you some suggestions. You can mix the interesting plot of the original novel with some related black technology, and don't make it all about technology [Chigua]

It's really good, a breath of fresh air in the movie city!