The Path to Immortality Through Myriad Tribulations

Although the writing and plot are a bit green, but as a new author, it is already very good, and... The author must be a pure love warrior, the book is full of 1v1 CP, hahahaha, as a person who loves CP, I really love it 😳 Where is my comment??? [What]

It looks good, but I feel that the emotional development is relatively slow. It's the slow-burn type, right? The male and female protagonists meet so little that I can't stand it any longer.

Well... As the author of this book, I shouldn't give myself too much praise...

The writing style may be poor, and the intensity may not be enough, but the setting of pure love is very popular with me. In short, please work hard, the author, the book can still be followed 🤭🤭🤭

You must watch it, if you don't want to watch me get spanked, it's very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

Although the writing style is relatively green and there are relatively few fighting plots, it is not less sweet than it should be.

The plot is a bit green😍, but it's still very interesting (ง•_•)ง, come on💪

Although it's not quite to my liking, I think it's okay

Although the writing style is immature, the content is interesting and the characters are vividly created. It is a relatively good sweet book about cultivating immortality.

The writing is very good. It is the first time I can read it carefully. It deserves five stars.