Horror Story Meeting

[Pauses face] I read two big chapters, that is, two stories. The sense of horror is not scary at all in the face of chaotic logic. To be honest, the pace is fast and acceptable, but many places are not explained clearly, and the whole story is messy to read, and there are even some poisonous points in each chapter. The story also has little heart and cannot stand up to scrutiny. The author is still good, but it would be much better if he could polish it more carefully.

The progress is fast and illogical, the previous section does not follow the next section.