The Condor: Traveling Through Time with Several Celebrities at the Beginning

Come on, I think your writing is okay. As long as your fighting power is not too high and you are not a thief, it will be fine. Fans of the Divine Eagle and the Divine Eagle are quite cliche. I hate those people who traveled through Yang Guo the most and said, "Master, please don't look back. I am Uncle Guo. I can't stand that kind of thing."

The author has quite a sense of humor. Some of the content is funny because of the suddenness. Suddenly, something you don't expect comes up, and it is full of visuals. For example, I went to buy a horse, but the protagonist lost his horse, and ended up riding a donkey on the road. Thinking about three horses and one donkey, I just want to laugh.

Overall, it's pretty good. Of course, I haven't read the Condor Novels, so I won't comment on anything that's too detailed. I don't know what the requirements are for the exercises, so it doesn't matter. As long as there are no problems overall, and there are no common sense mistakes, it's fine.

The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. Two updates a day is too little. As soon as you see the climax, you are gone [almost crying]

Lin Yu [Love] Yang Mi, Guo Xiang, Liu Yifei, Li Yitong, Yang Zi, Hot Scar, Mao Xiaotong, Xiao Longnu, Cheng Ying, Lu Wushuang, Nuomin Zixia, Princess Ruiguo, Gongsun Lue, Guo Fu, System Girl,...

Niu Niu Niu, the novel is well written. If it were told by a real person, it would be even more awesome. The traffic will increase several times. This time-travel novel is so amazing. I haven't read such a novel in a long time, so I stayed up all night listening to it.

I accidentally deleted my previous comment, and it won't be displayed after I post it. It's so uncomfortable. Regardless of whether the author of this post can see it or not, I'd like to give you a good review first. Please support me.

Not bad, sounds great, little dragon girl is amazing👍 Awesome! The author is like a guide through time and space, presenting the complex history in the title of the book in front of readers in an extremely vivid and logical way.

Please keep working hard and take good care of you😄😄😄

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Super good book, I will continue to follow it when I see the end. I have already followed it.

Let's use Qi to control the sword

This type is good and pretty

Looks good😄Does it look good? Oh my God, lolulu

The story idea is very good, and it is rare for multiple people to travel through time. However, because there are too many time travellers, it will be difficult to portray the characters. After all, once the heroines change too much, the story line will be completely disconnected from the original work. This difficulty is not easy to overcome. Of course, without reducing the role of the protagonist, you can try to have several female protagonists add lines, or even let them drive the plot, which would be more reasonable.

Very well written, keep up the good work.

It's better to care about everything and speak well.

This book is well written.

Why such a low rating

The plot is pretty good, but unfortunately the diary system feels a bit unsatisfactory and there are some unexpected goodies later. After ascending the throne and reunifying, you can also hand it over to your children, take everyone back to Earth many years later, change their identities and continue living, and many plots can happen. After almost the end, suddenly the apocalypse came, killing zombies and so on. . Ha ha ha ha

Oh, look at Coca-Cola

Let Yang Mi grow up soon

Personally I like it better

I think it's okay, and I'll give you five points. After all, there's no precedent for group wear. And these women can still accept it

It's very well written and the rating shouldn't be so low. Come on, author.

Well, it's great to watch from the beginning to the end

Good, good, good, good

Shengliu: The protagonist is the strongest in the universe and the author is born in the finale 😂