When he woke up, Chiba came to the world of Naruto and became an ordinary Uchiha on the eve of the night of genocide.
Being 15 years old with no eyes open and no system around you should be regarded as the beginning of hell. Seeing that the second and fifth boys of the massacre clan next door were all magatama, Qianyu decided to rebel against the village and run away overnight.
Unexpectedly, before anyone could run away, they would encounter a flash moving grave.
Now there are two pieces of news, one good and one bad.
The good news is: he has a system, and although it is second-hand, it is 80% new.
The bad news is: there's an enemy from a world next door with an eye on his life.
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Known: Aura is a combination of emotions and energy of intelligent creatures, and only when these emotions are related to the person concerned can he collect aura.
Asking: How can the devil quickly collect auras.
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In the early stage of this article, Naruto is interspersed with another story about a Western fantasy world. Later, the story of the brave counterattack in the western fantasy world.
This article is also known as "I even decided to run away but encountered a flash tomb relocation", "Naruto: Encountered a flash tomb relocation at the beginning", "Naruto: I, Uchiha, just want to fight the brave", "A few things about two men in the basement", "Naruto: The basement of the brave and the devil", "The growth diary of the villain devil"
Reader comments
(Upper and lower) five-star purple, level 13
Sense of substitution 1, attraction 2, plug-in 1, setting 2, writing 1, imagination 2, rhythm O, main line 1, character O, logic 2
Balance Penalty: None
Personal feelings: It's a group portrait, the protagonist has a low sense of presence, and he is completely like a grandpa who just wants to show off. If it's original, then there's no problem with this setting; if it's a fan, it feels like you're too obsessed with your own creation. There are too many elements. In my opinion, the setting is constantly being thrown away, and the time it takes to correspond to the world in the text has not passed a month.
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1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria·Tenth Edition Revised
(1) Evaluation items (for personal reference only)
1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view.
2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading.
3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative.
4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency.
5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot?
6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line.
7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low?
8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal.
9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive?
10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition.
11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge...
(2) Evaluation grouping (for personal reference only)
1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction
2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings
3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation
4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center
5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense
(3) Ratings of recommended evaluation items (for personal reference only)
1. Special recommendation (+4 points)
2. Recommended (+2 points)
3. Acceptable (+1 point)
4. No points will be deducted (O points)
5. Not recommended (X points)
6. Personally unacceptable (XX points)
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One star is an invalid rating, two stars is the lowest rating
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(9) Xiaxia·Internet articles that are very unacceptable
1. The first stage: total score -10 points or less
2. The second stage: total score - 20 points or less
. . . . . Why do fans like it recently? It inexplicably strengthens the original characters.
It's good to watch. The behind-the-scenes story of Naruto is very interesting to watch, and the relationship between the characters is also handled very well, especially the chapters of "Snap and Burn". Although the reviews are all bad, but if you read it continuously, it doesn't feel like it is watered down. The foreshadowing of Yukuni looks very comfortable and there is no abrupt feeling.
The summary is much better than Shuilong's Behind the Scenes.
It's different from other Hokages, we'll have to wait and see what happens next.
It's very interesting, the concept is clever, and the plot is exciting.
Weird, but extremely beautiful
So happy, five-star praise [laughing and crying]
Great imagination, very cool operation
Saw this in one breath
The cat image of Qianju Laogei is very good
It's quite fun. I like the cross talk of the evil trio. The gags of the protagonist Shisui Tobirama are very interesting.
(Upper and lower) five-star purple, level 13 Sense of substitution 1, attraction 2, plug-in 1, setting 2, writing 1, imagination 2, rhythm O, main line 1, character O, logic 2 Balance Penalty: None Personal feelings: It's a group portrait, the protagonist has a low sense of presence, and he is completely like a grandpa who just wants to show off. If it's original, then there's no problem with this setting; if it's a fan, it feels like you're too obsessed with your own creation. There are too many elements. In my opinion, the setting is constantly being thrown away, and the time it takes to correspond to the world in the text has not passed a month. ─────────────────── #The following comments are for personal reference only #My account cannot leave negative reviews. Negative reviews will be invisible. Anyway, they will all be given five stars. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria·Tenth Edition Revised (1) Evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping (for personal reference only) 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Ratings of recommended evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Special recommendation (+4 points) 2. Recommended (+2 points) 3. Acceptable (+1 point) 4. No points will be deducted (O points) 5. Not recommended (X points) 6. Personally unacceptable (XX points) 3. Rating of online articles (1) Shangshang·Online articles that I personally can't find any fault with 1. Red+: Total score is above level 30 2. Red: Total score is 26 or above 3. Red-: 8 "recommendations" (+2 points) (2) Excellent Internet articles that most people like, personally 1. Orange+: Total score is level 22 or above 2. Orange: Total score is 18 or above 3. Orange-: 5 "recommendations" (+2 points) (3) Shang Xia·Personally feel high-level online articles 1. Purple+: Total score is 14 or above 2. Purple: Total score is level 10 or above 3. Purple-: 8 items are "acceptable" (+1 point) (4) Intermediate to upper level • Internet articles that I feel are of a high standard 1. Five-star blue+: total score is level 6 or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 4. Five-star green: 5 items are "acceptable" (+1 point) (5) The next one in the list: Internet articles recommended by individuals 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 3. Four-star white: 10 items "no points deducted" (O points) (6) Middle and lower two • Internet articles that I personally do not recommend 1. Samsung White+: Total score -1 level 2. Samsung White: Total Score -2 Level (7) Middle and lower three • Internet articles that are unacceptable to individuals 1. Samsung Gray+: Total score -3 levels 2. Samsung Gray: Total Score -4 Level (6) Xia Shang·Highly Not Recommended Internet Articles 1. Samsung Black+: Total score -5 levels 2. Samsung Black: Total Score -6 Level 3. One-star black +: total score -7 levels 4. One-star black: total score -8 levels 5. Two-star black: 10 items "not recommended/X" (-1 point) One star is an invalid rating, two stars is the lowest rating (7) Medium•No rating (lower middle to upper middle) (8) Inferior • No grading (middle to lower to lower) (9) Xiaxia·Internet articles that are very unacceptable 1. The first stage: total score -10 points or less 2. The second stage: total score - 20 points or less
. . . . . Why do fans like it recently? It inexplicably strengthens the original characters.
It's good to watch. The behind-the-scenes story of Naruto is very interesting to watch, and the relationship between the characters is also handled very well, especially the chapters of "Snap and Burn". Although the reviews are all bad, but if you read it continuously, it doesn't feel like it is watered down. The foreshadowing of Yukuni looks very comfortable and there is no abrupt feeling. The summary is much better than Shuilong's Behind the Scenes.
It's different from other Hokages, we'll have to wait and see what happens next.
It's very interesting, the concept is clever, and the plot is exciting.
Weird, but extremely beautiful
So happy, five-star praise [laughing and crying]
Great imagination, very cool operation
Saw this in one breath
The cat image of Qianju Laogei is very good
It's quite fun. I like the cross talk of the evil trio. The gags of the protagonist Shisui Tobirama are very interesting.