After waking up, Qianyu finds himself in the world of Hokage, an ordinary Uchiha on the eve of the clan's massacre.
At fifteen, he still hasn't awakened his Sharingan, and he has no System to rely on. That's got to count as a hellish start. Seeing the turncoat next door, who's about to slaughter his clan, already sporting three tomoe, Qianyu decides to defect and flee the village in the middle of the night.
But before he can get away, he runs into someone who can teleport graves.
There are two pieces of news, one good and one bad.
The good news: he has a System now. It's secondhand, but still eighty percent as good as new.
The bad news: an enemy from another world has set its sights on his life.
Known: Spiritual essence is a combination of the emotions and energy of intelligent beings, and he can only collect it when those emotions are related to him.
Question: How can a Demon King collect spiritual essence quickly?
The story is set in the Hokage world at first, with another high-fantasy world woven in midway. Later on, the story follows the protagonist's counterattack against the heroes in that fantasy world.
Also known as: “I Decided to Run Away, But Ran Into Someone Who Can Teleport Graves”; “Hokage: I Ran Into Someone Who Can Teleport Graves from the Start”; “Hokage: I'm Uchiha, and I'm Going to Beat Up Heroes”; “The Tale of Two Men and a Basement”; “Hokage: The Hero and the Demon King's Basement”; “The Growth Diary of a Villainous Demon King”
(Upper and lower) five-star purple, level 13
Sense of substitution 1, attraction 2, plug-in 1, setting 2, writing 1, imagination 2, rhythm O, main line 1, character O, logic 2
Balance Penalty: None
Personal feelings: It's a group portrait, the protagonist has a low sense of presence, and he is completely like a grandpa who just wants to show off. If it's original, then there's no problem with this setting; if it's a fan, it feels like you're too obsessed with your own creation. There are too many elements. In my opinion, the setting is constantly being thrown away, and the time it takes to correspond to the world in the text has not passed a month.
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#My account cannot leave negative reviews. Negative reviews will be invisible. Anyway, they will all be given five stars.
1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria·Tenth Edition Revised
(1) Evaluation items (for personal reference only)
1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view.
2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading.
3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative.
4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency.
5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot?
6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line.
7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low?
8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal.
9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive?
10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition.
11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge...
(2) Evaluation grouping (for personal reference only)
1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction
2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings
3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation
4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center
5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense
(3) Ratings of recommended evaluation items (for personal reference only)
1. Special recommendation (+4 points)
2. Recommended (+2 points)
3. Acceptable (+1 point)
4. No points will be deducted (O points)
5. Not recommended (X points)
6. Personally unacceptable (XX points)
3. Rating of online articles
(1) Shangshang·Online articles that I personally can't find any fault with
1. Red+: Total score is above level 30
2. Red: Total score is 26 or above
3. Red-: 8 "recommendations" (+2 points)
(2) Excellent Internet articles that most people like, personally
1. Orange+: Total score is level 22 or above
2. Orange: Total score is 18 or above
3. Orange-: 5 "recommendations" (+2 points)
(3) Shang Xia·Personally feel high-level online articles
1. Purple+: Total score is 14 or above
2. Purple: Total score is level 10 or above
3. Purple-: 8 items are "acceptable" (+1 point)
(4) Intermediate to upper level • Internet articles that I feel are of a high standard
1. Five-star blue+: total score is level 6 or above
2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above
4. Five-star green: 5 items are "acceptable" (+1 point)
(5) The next one in the list: Internet articles recommended by individuals
1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above
2. Four-star green: total score is level 1
3. Four-star white: 10 items "no points deducted" (O points)
(6) Middle and lower two • Internet articles that I personally do not recommend
1. Samsung White+: Total score -1 level
2. Samsung White: Total Score -2 Level
(7) Middle and lower three • Internet articles that are unacceptable to individuals
1. Samsung Gray+: Total score -3 levels
2. Samsung Gray: Total Score -4 Level
(6) Xia Shang·Highly Not Recommended Internet Articles
1. Samsung Black+: Total score -5 levels
2. Samsung Black: Total Score -6 Level
3. One-star black +: total score -7 levels
4. One-star black: total score -8 levels
5. Two-star black: 10 items "not recommended/X" (-1 point)
One star is an invalid rating, two stars is the lowest rating
(7) Medium•No rating (lower middle to upper middle)
(8) Inferior • No grading (middle to lower to lower)
(9) Xiaxia·Internet articles that are very unacceptable
1. The first stage: total score -10 points or less
2. The second stage: total score - 20 points or less
. . . . . Why do fans like it recently? It inexplicably strengthens the original characters.
It's good to watch. The behind-the-scenes story of Naruto is very interesting to watch, and the relationship between the characters is also handled very well, especially the chapters of "Snap and Burn". Although the reviews are all bad, but if you read it continuously, it doesn't feel like it is watered down. The foreshadowing of Yukuni looks very comfortable and there is no abrupt feeling.
The summary is much better than Shuilong's Behind the Scenes.
It's very interesting, the concept is clever, and the plot is exciting.
It's different from other Hokages, we'll have to wait and see what happens next.
(Upper and lower) five-star purple, level 13 Sense of substitution 1, attraction 2, plug-in 1, setting 2, writing 1, imagination 2, rhythm O, main line 1, character O, logic 2 Balance Penalty: None Personal feelings: It's a group portrait, the protagonist has a low sense of presence, and he is completely like a grandpa who just wants to show off. If it's original, then there's no problem with this setting; if it's a fan, it feels like you're too obsessed with your own creation. There are too many elements. In my opinion, the setting is constantly being thrown away, and the time it takes to correspond to the world in the text has not passed a month. #The following comments are for personal reference only #My account cannot leave negative reviews. Negative reviews will be invisible. Anyway, they will all be given five stars. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria·Tenth Edition Revised (1) Evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping (for personal reference only) 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Ratings of recommended evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Special recommendation (+4 points) 2. Recommended (+2 points) 3. Acceptable (+1 point) 4. No points will be deducted (O points) 5. Not recommended (X points) 6. Personally unacceptable (XX points) 3. Rating of online articles (1) Shangshang·Online articles that I personally can't find any fault with 1. Red+: Total score is above level 30 2. Red: Total score is 26 or above 3. Red-: 8 "recommendations" (+2 points) (2) Excellent Internet articles that most people like, personally 1. Orange+: Total score is level 22 or above 2. Orange: Total score is 18 or above 3. Orange-: 5 "recommendations" (+2 points) (3) Shang Xia·Personally feel high-level online articles 1. Purple+: Total score is 14 or above 2. Purple: Total score is level 10 or above 3. Purple-: 8 items are "acceptable" (+1 point) (4) Intermediate to upper level • Internet articles that I feel are of a high standard 1. Five-star blue+: total score is level 6 or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 4. Five-star green: 5 items are "acceptable" (+1 point) (5) The next one in the list: Internet articles recommended by individuals 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 3. Four-star white: 10 items "no points deducted" (O points) (6) Middle and lower two • Internet articles that I personally do not recommend 1. Samsung White+: Total score -1 level 2. Samsung White: Total Score -2 Level (7) Middle and lower three • Internet articles that are unacceptable to individuals 1. Samsung Gray+: Total score -3 levels 2. Samsung Gray: Total Score -4 Level (6) Xia Shang·Highly Not Recommended Internet Articles 1. Samsung Black+: Total score -5 levels 2. Samsung Black: Total Score -6 Level 3. One-star black +: total score -7 levels 4. One-star black: total score -8 levels 5. Two-star black: 10 items "not recommended/X" (-1 point) One star is an invalid rating, two stars is the lowest rating (7) Medium•No rating (lower middle to upper middle) (8) Inferior • No grading (middle to lower to lower) (9) Xiaxia·Internet articles that are very unacceptable 1. The first stage: total score -10 points or less 2. The second stage: total score - 20 points or less
. . . . . Why do fans like it recently? It inexplicably strengthens the original characters.
It's good to watch. The behind-the-scenes story of Naruto is very interesting to watch, and the relationship between the characters is also handled very well, especially the chapters of "Snap and Burn". Although the reviews are all bad, but if you read it continuously, it doesn't feel like it is watered down. The foreshadowing of Yukuni looks very comfortable and there is no abrupt feeling. The summary is much better than Shuilong's Behind the Scenes.
It's very interesting, the concept is clever, and the plot is exciting.
It's different from other Hokages, we'll have to wait and see what happens next.
The cat image of Qianju Laogei is very good
Great imagination, very cool operation
Saw this in one breath
So happy, five-star praise [laughing and crying]
Weird, but extremely beautiful