Building a Holy Dynasty, Starting as an Advisor

I have been reading this book, and it can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. There is a lot of suspense from the beginning but there is always no goal or result, giving people a hazy feeling of being in the clouds. There are not many ancient texts of this kind nowadays, so it is a very good entry point and very innovative. But seeing the current data of only 6.6 Points, I personally feel that it is caused by four words-"too much is not enough". There are many suspenses and puzzles, but there is no ending. The tasks are also riddles, but there is no explanation. Readers will feel tired after reading for a long time, and feel that the article is written procrastinatingly, and the result is that it is too late to finish. It is probably a situation that the author did not expect. Therefore, the author should think carefully about some problems in his creation. Flexibility is very important, isn't it?

Everything is fine, but I don't know who the heroine is. Either you are being plotted or you are on the way to being plotted, newcomers should not be chased and feel very aggrieved...

This is a female channel rebirth novel. The heroine is Xia Yurou who is reborn and is determined to avenge her sister Xia Yulian. Then she breaks up with Yao Qilian in her previous life, Bai Yueguang. She first breaks up with him, then makes him irrecoverable, and finally takes back what I lost step by step. The first step is to deal with the troublemaker Yang Zhen.

The writing still needs to be polished, some people are too fluent, but the plot is novel and interesting. I have read a lot of historical articles, and even though there are many articles on taxation and policy, this article gives me a new perspective. I think it is very interesting, both interesting and scientific. It is really good. It has the potential of a good book. I hope it will be updated more, but the word count is a bit short now. The author works hard, you will be the next star of tomorrow✨✨✨

This power play is no more grand than the female channel's mythical novel Langya Bang and The Legend of Zhen Huan [Thinking] I finished it in one go and updated it. The writing is really good. So far, I think the 99 chapters have been very impressive in the early stages. I am looking forward to the follow-up. I personally think this book and the noble prince of the Southern Dynasty are the top tomato time travel books at present, but the ratings are 9.7 And 7.3, Which are outrageous. It can be seen that The general audience of Tomato is readers who want to read straightforward stories. Those who need to think about it are generally not lovable. In the fast-moving consumer electronics era, the same applies to Next Door. What's on the list are all rotten fish and shrimps... In addition, can the author refine it? There are too many typos and wrong writing of characters, which makes it difficult to read smoothly...

After reading up to this point, the story is rich in content, but it is a bit far from Machiavellian. It is just one-sided and then resolved, which is relatively passive. Five stars are given to encourage the author. I hope that the protagonist can make plans later and not passively take action unilaterally.

Every day, I have the urge to keep this book, but after thinking about it, I forget it. Most good authors want the support of readers. If conditions permit, who doesn't want to be proud of the spring breeze, horse hoof disease, and trampling all the Chang'an flowers in one day? The advantage of this book is that the characters are very real, some are smart, some are honest, and some are scheming, but the conflicts in the novel can reveal people's characteristics very well. For example, Qin Mo is a sunny and cheerful boy, and the novel can be appropriately profiled. Otherwise, how can he remember so many tasks in a book with a million words, but it cannot be fully profiled. There are also flaws. For example, how could no one test Yang Zhen's martial arts so high? Even if the chief officer of Yizhou is poor, someone should be able to understand his true level... However, the flaws are all in the details. The book is generally a good book, and it depends on the subsequent development.

Each faction has its own calculations. It looks good and has a lot of foreshadowing. I hope it can fill in the holes from time to time. With the restriction of identity, the protagonist's resourcefulness can also be used. The battle is also fun. I hope I can compete with the masters and win. But this prince is really a bit lazy [laughing] I hope he can grow up quickly.

It's so well written, the ideas are clear and interconnected! Make persistent efforts!

How should I put it? I have read the latest chapter of the entire book, but I feel that the plot has not been laid out yet. Overall, it is good. It's just too Riddler. If this book had been updated to 5.6 Hundred chapters, I would have given it full stars, but there are too few, and the plot progress is very slow. I still hope to speed up the progress or make more updates.