Water Margin: at the Beginning, You Spend One Yuan as a Gift to Marry Pan Jinlian.

I like this kind of novel that gradually escalates. The plot is reasonable, there are no poisonous points, the description is more delicate, and each character has its own characteristics. I read it in one sitting. It is much better to read the current fast food and brainless novels. Come on, author!

This book is definitely a fine product. The score is now low. I think it is a very good book. The author's writing is very concise. The story is told in a eloquent way, and he expands his power step by step. It is beautiful!

Good luck, now Tomato is Shree Gold Rush You finally found something I can watch [face covering] [OK]

Finished reading. I feel pretty good! I also saw people complaining about the lottery. On the contrary, I think the lottery arrangement is quite good. More reasonable. Otherwise, it would be bad to become invincible all of a sudden. Recommended with five-star reviews! [Cool]

I have read all the chapters. Is it better to add more to the author? It is really good. I like this work very much. The author really writes this kind of world, human relations and sophistication vividly.

The writing is smooth, logical and well written! It was a pity to watch the scene between Wu Dalang and Pan Jinlian when I was young. Wuhan University has feelings for Pan Jinlian, who is righteous but not reliable. But have a question? Is there anyone born in the 1970s or 1980s who has never read any children's books or novels written by the Four Great Classics? Maybe not many people understand Dream of Red Mansions, but how many people haven't read the other three famous works of that era? Except for remote areas, unless the author is born after the 1990s or 2000s, because there was already a lot of spiritual food in that era, it would be excusable not to finish the four classics.

A good farming article, but I feel that there is too little farming content, or the progress is a bit slow. First of all, the author's writing style is very good, and the writing has some flavor. The dialogue is also very sophisticated, unlike some novels that travel to ancient times but use some modern words from the mouths of the indigenous people. The hook is neither too big nor too small, and the protagonist has a sense of self-reliance. However, it can only be said that it has just established a foothold in the county, and the farming part has not yet begun to exert its strength. The only one that is relatively developed is Moutai, and the rest basically rely on the props provided by the system. Personally, I would like to see some industrial innovations carried out appropriately after establishing a firm foothold in the future development. Although in the world of Water Margin, force is very important, looking at this world view, it may be quite outrageous in the later stage. But as a time traveler, it would be a little tasteless if we didn't carry out generational crushing.

It's not too serious, it's a pretty good novel to entertain yourself. Procrastinating, meaningless and forced word count

The writing is good, the structure is okay, the ideas are quite clear, and some misunderstandings caused by hasty searches of historical materials are not concealed. However, I can't stand the subsequent sadomasochism emotional scenes in male channels, and it is not suitable for me. After reading so many books, this is the first male channel + sadomasochism. If you like it, you can read this book

It's actually okay, but the pace is a bit slow. The low rating may be because of Wu Dalang.

This is the only novel with the background of Water Margin that I can read. The plot is reasonable, the logic is clear, systematic, and not too much. However, it is too short. I became addicted after reading it, and it ended suddenly.

Come on, author! It may be a matter of personal taste, but I personally feel that it is better written than other Water Margin fics. The current rating is indeed a bit low, I hope you will give it a try before commenting. General comment: Flaws do not hide the advantages, and the wealth of food and grass is sufficient. It depends on how the author writes next. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it.

The whole process is non-toxic, the author's logic is very clear, and his writing style is very skillful! It's as if you really lived in ancient times. The only thing that is a little bit unpleasant is that the combat power is too much. In the early stage, there is little caution and it is a step-by-step approach, which makes people feel a little worried. There is no physical transformation necessary for time travel and there is no powerful golden finger, but this style is quite good. The golden finger is indeed easy to collapse if it is too powerful.

The writing is pretty good, but the system is a bit funny. The beginning was okay, but the progress in the middle and later stages was too slow, and I kept talking for a few chapters. I only wrote half of it and finally summarized it and ended it. I was considered a eunuch.

I like this kind of plot of gradually becoming stronger and climbing higher step by step. I hope there will be some drama about pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, with the weak defeating the strong. It might be better to add some funny elements. A very good step-by-step Water Margin travel story, please give it a thumbs up to the author [Like][Like][Like]

First of all, the author's writing skills are very good (higher than many Tomato novel authors), especially his classical writing skills, which should be very good. But obviously, the author is older and cannot keep up with modern trends. Now is the era of "Shuang Drama". In other words, readers only read novels with the word "Shuang" in mind, and no one pays attention to the details. . Let me make a few comments: First, you open a restaurant and use kerosene lamps. . Second, cotton coats or work clothes, security uniforms, cotton-padded clothes, and uniforms cost 70 to 80 yuan each. They are cheap and of good quality. Establish a security team in the military. Thirdly, the currency in ancient times was extremely chaotic. You can open a bank and unify the currency. (One yuan is equal to 1,000 copper coins. Then the ocean is divided into two types, one is a large ocean and the other is half an ocean, which is equivalent to 500 copper coins.) Now the silver price is extremely cheap.

I scored many 9 points or more. The writing is very good and I am not a novice. I read it in one sitting. Don't read it, the ending is eunuch.

Yes, it's very interesting. It's been a long time since I've seen a good book. In the recent book shortage, I usually don't review it because it's too troublesome. This is indeed okay. I'm afraid I'll die if I don't review it. Then, the author updates quickly and his writing is good. When will Wu Song come out?

I have read more than 100 chapters, and there is nothing that I can pick out. Except for the lottery, which draws a lot of strange and weird things, it makes me feel like reading the old novels in the past. Everything else is very good, much better than some of the 9 or above.

It looks great, but updates are a bit slow. Come on! Stop sucking

It's pretty good to watch. Except for the writing of the force value which is a bit broken and the combat power needs to be forcibly suppressed later on, there are no problems in other aspects. The plot development should be consistent with the protagonist's combat power. However, it can be regarded as a fairly well-written ancient time travel system novel that I have read.

The best one written by Dalang👌🏻You can read it👀 I think it's been a long time since you've occupied three-thirds of this acre of land. It's no use for Shi Qian to have a puppet occupy these three acres of land.

The writing is really good, but the probability of getting something good in the lottery is too small. At least give him a military radar map, storage space, and communication with small animals. It would be better if he was given another soul that could possess the evil person and kill the evil person, such as possessing the evil person's younger brother, and then the younger brother could stab him from behind when the evil person is not paying attention.

Yes, but the plot is draggy and not exciting enough. This book should take 2 million words to complete.

If you really don't have to watch it, you can watch it.

Come on, author! It may be a matter of personal taste, but I personally feel that it is better written than other Water Margin fics. The current rating is indeed a bit low, I hope you will give it a try before commenting. General comment: Flaws do not hide the advantages, and the wealth of food and grass is sufficient. It depends on how the author writes next. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it.

The content and plot are very novel and very interesting to watch. At least it keeps me watching. But the shortcoming is why a good novel must give so many scenes to women, marrying wives, and taking concubines. I have read several chapters describing the relationship between husband and wife. If the relationship with one's wives and concubines can be written less, I think this novel is still very good.

Very well written, currently the best Soul Chuan Shui Margin system text

It's very good-looking. The character of the protagonist was a little flawed at the beginning, but it gradually became more and more righteous later on. There will be no conflict between the left and right brains. The three-dimensional view is good, and the plot is not boring. At least I feel that the more I watch it, the better it looks! [Eat melon] This book is different from the original work in many places, and the author has already warned it in the book. It is really conspicuous to still refer to the original work, and the overall plot is actually very good. The writing is very delicate and makes people feel that the development is slow. Many people may not be used to it, but in fact so far Just over a year has passed since the 400th chapter. The protagonist has achieved a gorgeous transformation from short and poor to tall, rich and handsome, and has taken control of the military and political power of a county. Although the plot feels slow, the development speed is not bad, and the plot is very delicate. It really is a type that gets better and better the more you watch it. Highly recommended! [Laughs] (Are you trying to commit suicide? The length of time will prove it)

Hahaha, I finally found another good book. The rhythm is well controlled, but some foreshadowing plots require a little patience.