Begging for Sour Writing
I've read too many sweet stories, which makes me feel a little nauseous now. I want to read the kind of sour stories that are both sweet and cruel, neither sweet nor cruel. The male and female protagonists have reasons to be sweet and sad for other reasons. I don't want to read the kind of stories that are cruel for the sake of cruelty and sweet for the sake of sweetness.
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"You picked me up from the isolation of Point Nemo with one hand, and you never said goodbye." (This is a sentiment, not in the text) Da Da's writing is delicate and contains many insights into life and death and the unfairness of fate. Those argumentative sentences are revealed in the article spontaneously and are not abrupt. It would be perfect if the transition of those memories were more natural. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑ Xiao hope is frank and brave, but also timid and has low self-esteem. The character should also be contradictory and more real and vivid. He would cut his own glands in order to get rid of the shackles of his mother's guilt and the destiny of a rare disease, and he would also avoid being famous because of his physical disability. But no matter what happens to Xiao hope, Jing Jie Ming will rely on that ethereal hope to take Xiao hope out of the ocean and embrace their common bright and bright future (˵¯͒¯͒˵)
You cheated and killed me [crying], this is too good to cry, the writing is so delicate, the child's pillow is wet from crying, if you take a step back, can the author update a hundred chapters a day? It's not enough, I can't bear to read it all at once
Darling, I think this book is really good. Although I have only read the beginning now, I think the plot behind it is not bad either. But I have a suggestion, Darling, could you please make the names simpler and not so niche? I don't know how to read the names of some characters, so I searched them [face covering] [face covering] [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]It's so beautiful, why didn't I watch it earlier [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]
I failed, even if you are he, you can't cover up the heart-wrenching words. The two little ones want peace and joy in another world [crying] [love]
The writing is delicate and the plot has a long-lasting tranquility that makes people want to read on.
It's really, really beautiful! [Cry]
The writing is smooth and logical, the plot is rich, delicate and touching.