Al Outpost

Tomato's new book, Al's Outpost. I was reading a lot of books in my spare time, and suddenly I came across this book. I suddenly felt happy and put it on the shelf, waiting for a decision. I saw that my husband's bookshelf was full of books, including those written by colleagues and original works. Colleagues mostly use formulas to rewrite them, and there are few new ideas. If you look at them for a long time, you will feel boring and have a sense of waning interest. However, there are also some people who have many ingenious ideas, so it is not appropriate to generalize and generalize. There are so many original books that cannot be discussed in detail. Although some books are not as powerful as written, they still have new ideas. Their ambitions should be commended and should be encouraged. Although the author's book contains only a few chapters, it can be called a rare book. The world he draws is majestic and majestic, attracting people's imagination. You can see the city by looking at it, you can know the emotion by tea, and the craftsmanship can be seen in every word. Don't belittle yourself, be formidable, and you will be able to look forward to the future. We should also keep improving, weeding out the old and bringing forth the new, and reaching new realms. Those who are excellent in studies and work, and who are also outstanding in writing and writing are called authors. Who is called the author? They are also atomic exclamation marks. This is the first time I write this kind of comment. If there are any grammatical errors, please correct them. Good looking and recommended.

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I really found a treasure! Super pretty! I entered it after seeing the cover hahh. I originally thought it was some cute furry article, but after reading more than a dozen articles, I lost control. The plot is very smooth and the writing is very good! It feels a bit like a published book, giving me a feeling of Paul Korchagin? The author is really great! It turns out that I have had the idea of ​​writing novels since I was a child! I'm really optimistic about Dada, and I'm paying close attention! 💕

It's a pretty good book, and the author tries his best to tell an interesting story. The control of the main body of the story and the protagonist is good, but the lack of description of the background, environment and third-party perspective is a relatively big flaw in this film. There is basically no interaction between Al and the environment. It is a pity that we did not see the wild or cute dynamics of small animals. In addition, I kept changing the map in the early stage, which made the protagonist always seem to be in a living fog in my field of vision. ) The shortcomings of the plot are the emotional arousal. It would be better to add more short stories before the big time points. The background and foreshadowing of the small daily explanations would be more vivid. By now Deus Ex Machina, the protagonist has almost become a little dream, and has been cut off from Al and the outpost (つ<.) At first, I actually wanted to come in and see the daily routine of small animals farming and fishing to become stronger w) Come on author(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

I am so lucky to have come across such an excellent book by accident!!! Why are high-quality new books not read?

Traditional fantasy is combined with technology, and technology is developed in the context of fantasy. The characters are vividly created and have distinct personalities. Each character has his or her own characteristics. Everyone has his or her own experience, either unbearable or thriving (is there any thriving?). Each character has flesh and blood (with a little knife, at least I think it is a knife). There are a lot of foreshadowings in the plot. Everything is so confusing, but there seems to be a trace. The last bit is clear, and the plot has ups and downs... In short, it is very interesting (I can't edit it anymore)

It's very good-looking. In my personal opinion, although the plot is a bit fast, it doesn't hurt. Another question, did the author just write this book? It feels a little short. The author must update it quickly 😳 The protagonist is cute and adorable, I like cute stuff the most\(//∇//)\

I usually read a lot of books. I have read the setting of "The God of Play", the brain-burning "The End of Ten Days", and also read "Insects", so I am very picky about the writing style of the book. But the writing in "The Miracle Worker" is really good The characters here are all flesh and blood. The protagonist is not brainless (^_^;), and the supporting characters have their own stories, and they are not the kind of tool people who just throw them away after use. There is a little knife or something in the middle, these are very well written. (^~^) The rhythm of the plot is also comfortable, with a lot of foreshadowing buried in the front and revealed one by one later. . . . Well. . (ﾉ*ﾟｰﾟ)ﾉIn short, it's good-looking. Bros who are book-hungry, don't worry, I've already updated it. Okay, I'll give it another 100 million points. I hope "Miracle Worker" can be seen by more readers and become really popular! I hope that the book review area will be lively and full of fireworks every day. ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ I hope that the author can always maintain this enthusiasm for creation, not to be knocked down by Cavan, and to write smoothly every day. I hope you are in good health and live a happy life. After all, only when you are in a good mood can you write more exciting stories. I also hope that our group of readers who follow the update can accompany you until the end. (^ω^) I hope that the subsequent plot of this book will remain steady and expand the world view even more grandly. I also hope that I can follow the protagonist on the adventure in the story and continue to experience the touching moments of laughter and tears. (∩_∩) Finally, I hope that "Miracle Walker" will become a miracle in the online literature world like its name. Anyway, I will keep chasing it, and I hope all those who love this book can gain strength from it! Big cheers for the author!!!ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ The rest was stolen by the King of Silver∽

For me personally and even most readers, the animal element of this article should be an important plus point. In addition to this element, I also have opinions on other aspects of the article. As far as the advantages of the article are concerned, the author's character description is excellent. Personally, I think this mainly focuses on the characters' actions, expressions and psychology. This is definitely a big plus for the author. As for the downsides, here are some humble opinions. I think this book has obvious problems with its worldview. The themes of this book include both fantasy and science fiction. How to unify the two major themes is a problem. How the setting content is well combined with the text content is also a problem (it does not mean that the article deviates from the setting, but the mixing of the two contents affects the look and feel). Both of these problems directly lead to a sense of fragmentation in the article. The author and I are both high school students, so I understand how difficult it is for the author to find time to write articles. Finally, I wish the author's writing skills will be greatly improved in the future, and his inspiration and ideas will continue to grow.

It's very nice to read. The life at the outpost in the first chapter is very well described, and the characters are relatively fleshed out. The emotional considerations in the escape at the end are very good. The daily life of the Dreamkeepers in the second chapter is slightly inferior to the first one, but it has a good continuity. At the same time, the world view is constantly unfolding (directly from community combat to space combat), and the protagonist's combat power has also begun to increase rapidly.