Swallowed Star: Hundredfold Enhancement

Although you can write according to the original work, you still don't want to add the villain's race indiscriminately. Are there demons in Swallowing Starry Sky? And do they dare to go to Chaos City? Even the Zerg race has the strongest person in the universe. No one dared to go to Chaos City.

Just look at the previous point. The golden finger has not been used. What is the point of going to the training camp? What is the use of jumping around? The environment is relatively better if there is a flood. Not all human beings are of the same mind. They say they can't kill the protagonist. Going to the Shenlong frame to absorb is no better than running around. I didn't see a little bit of foresight in time travel. It's all a running account. What's the point of changing the name to the original work?

After leaving the earth, the protagonist's biggest trump card absorbs damage and then the feedback is offline. The protagonist becomes an ordinary genius, but he is targeted by the demons, and all races target him together. As a digression, are there any demons in the original novel?

The combat power is confusing (the Realm Lord can fight the Lord of the Universe, and above the Realm Lord there are immortals, immortal military lords, feudal lords, kings, and Universe Venerables. Above them is the Lord of the Universe. No matter how talented the Realm Lord is, he can't directly fight the Lord of the Universe, right?), And the plot is confusing (the protagonist has already participated in the Genius War in World Area No. 88 And killed everyone in the previous chapter, and in the next chapter he is preparing to participate in the Genius War in Qianwu Kingdom)

This is the first time the author has written a fan novel about Swallowing the Starry Sky, but I did read the first part of Swallowing the Starry Sky (To Transcendence and Reincarnation). There are many differences between this novel and the setting of the original work. Fans of the original work are requested to include this. Coding is not easy, so please support me! One-click three-way connection, add bookshelf + follow + generate electricity with love!

Overall it's okay, I have my own thoughts

It doesn't match the original work, the changes are too messy. 😫

The function of giving back a hundred times energy will no longer be available later. A bit rubbish,

It's pretty good, but it feels like it's a bit unconnected, and the male protagonist seems to have some mental strength without realizing it.

Too much,,