Master Obviously Doesn't Love Me, How Can He Pursue Me to the Earth?

I have to add one or two lilies to the male channel before I can write it.

It's still very nice to look at, I just hope it won't be folded. 1. As for this book, the previous character is prepared very quickly. I think this is good or bad. If it is good, it can be faster, and it means that you can directly experience Tian Wen. 2 This kind of Internet terminology is also very appropriate to use memes, that is, you can see that it really feels like real life, but many of these articles also use this kind of memes to increase their activity. After all, they are newcomers and need to support them. 3 Follow-up, after seeing this, I think there should be no such thing as membrane resuscitation. After all, he should also be a Chengdu city writer. 4. The characters are pretty well created. You look like the male protagonist and his sister. His sister is made of plastic and can be configured. The emotions are also pretty good. I hope there are some big knives in it. If you want to compare with you, I still want to see some sweet little knives. It's really good. 5. I have a lot of shortcomings. I feel that the change in character is too fast. The front may also dissuade some people because after all, the male protagonist has no hatred for the kind of person who killed him. But if you go back through the author's explanation of the previous leisure world, you can find that the heroine's position is also excusable, so you have to keep reading to get better. Too little is explained at the beginning, which makes people deeply fade away. Then you will get better and better as an author, don't give up

You must educate and train them hard [crying] [crying]

It can be seen that the newbie has good settings. Come on

The content of the novel is very exciting and very beautiful. From the world of immortality to the modern world, this kind of novel is rare. This is the only wonderful novel I have ever seen.

So far, the article doesn't seem to have any harmful points and it's still worth reading.

If you like urban literature, you can try it

Very good, the atmosphere is great, not too toxic, relaxing

Good look love look Don't cool Got it

Not bad, good, come on

Daily writing is okay

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on No longer updated? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

After reading the first few chapters, the emotions are very delicate. I also asked the author to write slowly and look forward to the follow-up plot.

Not bad, quite sweet, with a hint of ginger.