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It is recommended to skip to after the meal and then review the make-up lessons. There was a toxic hole at the beginning but it was filled in before and after dinner. In fact, this novel can also be written using a narrative technique - starting from the "unregistered marriage" stage in the middle (the first part of Chapter 70 is used as the prologue, and the part after Chapter 70 is used as the beginning of the main text). During the narration of the central event, the original plot is temporarily interrupted from time to time to insert relevant memories, background, and explanations (most of the content before Chapter 70), and then return to the main line to continue the narrative. In this case, readers will not be turned off by being said to be poisonous at the beginning. In terms of describing special plot triggers, the author prefers to use the method of adding a break to the beginning to replace the process of starting a meal. Such as: At the end of Chapter 70, men and women begin to eat for the first time, and at the beginning of Chapter 71, the meal is completed; At the end of Chapter 71, the meal is started after shaking it manually. At the beginning of the next chapter, the meal is completed and the meal is mentioned to be relatively large; At the end of Chapter 76, the person at the dining table seems to be wearing armor and manually shaking it forward to start eating and replenishing food. At the beginning of the next chapter, the meal is completed and it is revealed that the 20-minute meal was completed in one hour; ... Will be added after the update. As for the meal preparation part, everyone understands it [laughing evilly] What is worthy of praise is that the male protagonist in the author's novel has a normal physique, and there is no exaggeration, which is more realistic. Friends who went to college and only drank water can use Laiyun to supplement their meals. [Eat melon] There is a midnight snack in two-thirds of Chapter 80~[Eating Melon] —— In Chapter 93, there is a transition that reveals the mystery - it turns out there is no such thing, but it has always been the case. The male protagonist rotates attacks one by one at the crossfire point of the fortress, attacks one by one in the encirclement, and feints at gaps in the battle line. And it became clear that the time to launch a general offensive had not yet come.

You'd better just write novels and not really have a senior [smile][smile]

I'm quite fond of you, as long as you don't really have a senior sister [get it]

Author, I hope you don't really have a senior sister [laughing evilly]

Thousands of people have the same tea but different tastes. Thousands of people share the same views but different opinions. In my opinion, it is quite interesting, so I give full marks. Come on, the author, and keep updating.

The Tai Chi bar looks great! It's just not enough [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry]

Not bad, keep up the good work

Suitable for spring viewing [Thinking]

Good-looking, love to watch, must-see

Aside from the beginning, I think the back part is quite beautiful.

I have read a lot of this article now, so I only read Chapter 71. The writing is already very good and has its own innovations.

Very good novel

It's beautiful, I love it, it's so sweet

The author writes in big words Hurry up [Sending Hearts]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very well written, keep it up

Very special and beautiful

Looks good, love it

It's best for your boy not to have a senior sister [smile]

Why is it over?

Can I meet you too?

Super invincible and honorable

Seeing this, I just want to be brainless and support it fiercely.

Hehe, there is no reason, I just like it❤️

The kids, very clean, pushed her! ! !

Very good, I feel okay

Preliminary identification is the same as next door, but I don't believe that his senior sister is real.

It's very interesting. It's interesting to get through the beginning.

I'm used to fast-food love, so it would be nice to have a slow-paced one.

Although the front part is a little bit toxic, the plot is quite good. I give it a five-star rating [rolls eyes]