I Lay Low Until I Become an Immortal, Only to Find My Dao Companion Is a Goddess of the Immortal Court

The pace is good, and the foundation is almost established after about 30 chapters. There are no poisonous points at present, and there are no vulgar plots that are pretending to be a slap in the face. The external behavior of the protagonist is also consistent with his identity. The most important thing is that he is not a gangster cultivator, and he looks very comfortable.

He became an immortal, but his Taoist companion turned out to be a fairy goddess. Written by Yue Er The plot is very good, the current setting is very complete, the writing is detailed, the writing style is also very good, the narration is smooth and eloquent, it can be regarded as new wine in old bottles, but it still tells a great story. The character creation is very vivid, with behavioral logic and distinct personal characteristics. Uh, a small point. I didn't understand it. The lifespan of a gold finger is different from its own lifespan. So what's the meaning of this lifespan and points? It's better to just call for points and save me from having more expectations. In short, this is really not a problem. The new book Seedlings deserves five stars.

The male protagonist is at the bottom of the sect and will inevitably be affected by all kinds of incomprehensible upper-level conspiracies. This novel is very vivid and interesting about the various difficulties of the little people. The male protagonist's system is also relatively novel and restrained, without too many cheats, making the various hardships and dangers the male protagonist encounters in his step-by-step development seem very real and very attractive. The only shortcoming is that I have already read the latest chapter, and the male protagonist Taoist monk in the introduction is not even visible. There is no relationship-related plot in the novel. He is a monk practicing immortality. . .

The new book supports it, but it's okay to change the lifespan point to an improvement point or something else. Your lifespan point can easily misunderstand others, and you don't add lifespan 🤦🤦 In fact, this book is quite good, and the rating should be around 9.

There is currently no network, you need to connect to the network to enter the broadcast tone I am a cerebral infarction patient who has been paralyzed in bed all year round. I had the honor to read this novel yesterday. You may not be able to imagine that I am now playing basketball on the basketball court.

It is not difficult to upgrade the protagonist, and there are not many other plots. Logically speaking, the writing would be boring or too fluid, but the author used the sect mystery to increase the plot, so it is not boring to read. The character concept is stable, and the writing is good.

Gou Daoliu, it's a pity that there are too many people making trouble for the protagonist, and the plot is too slow.

It's not 7 points, it's 8.5 Or above. Looking back, it's a bit rough in the early stage, but it's still fun to pretend to be slapped in the face. Keep up the good work later! He pretended to be a pig, ate a tiger and got slapped in the face, but he suddenly got a Yuanying girl from the Jiang family. She was a bit uglier than the younger junior sister. The good guy protagonist was seduced in a few chapters. However, he himself knew that there was something wrong with this girl. He was very suspicious. All the previous slanders were now a joke. The cultivation level of the Transformation God is a joke (without any concentration), and a lot of lifespans are not promoted. Obviously everyone knows that behind the core golden elixir disciples is the Transformation God, and the Nascent Soul disciples must be above it. The protagonist has also experienced it, and has no idea what the meaning of these recent chapters is. Put it here, I guess a lot of people will leave after the follow-up update.

It's beautiful, but two updates a day is not enough 😘😘😘

It's a cool, semi-refined, well-written article. The various characters are described very well and concisely. I don't use a lot of descriptions to introduce various characters, but let you understand the personality characteristics of various characters in various events. I don't have the kind of teaching readers about how to behave at every turn.