Dark Fallen Sword Healing Collection

It's so cute and warm, I was almost persuaded by the name at the beginning x... Whether Mikazuki is finally confused and awakened, Jin Jian is worried that Mikazuki will become the person he hates the most, or he is comforted by his sister and never lets down his pride, the sister is working hard to fight for everyone's future! I'm a little curious about the real cause of death of the previous judge, other than the scumbag who abused the swordsmen. It doesn't seem to be what it seems on the surface. Did he die from the power infighting of the current regime or commit suicide because of something his parents did (random guess) However, I was stupid enough to see it a little confusing. Apart from Sister Bao, does Honmaru currently have only two judges or three? Judging from the memories, the last one should have parents, so he is not a machine like Sister Baby (is that what you say), but when the last one died, his blood was blue, which was a bit confusing😌😌 Anyway, I look forward to the happy ending where everyone lives with Meimei🥺

Tomato has read all the way to write the best sword novel about Dark Fall. The original character design is very charming, and the original characters are not OOC (by the way, even the OOC Dark Fall design is very charming. I really like Gohu and Hasebe in this article). The plot is very smooth. The three lines of the first three generations of judges are handled very well. This is particularly valuable. The deconstruction and analysis of the Dark Fall setting are also very novel and smooth. No, I really like the plot and characters of this book. Everyone has flesh and blood. The reviewer is no longer the stereotyped villain protagonist in ordinary stories, nor is he the clichéd reviewer who inspires everyone with love and purity. . . As a new author, your first book is really great. Sir, I will not allow anyone to disobey you. . . Please read it, everyone. The writing is good, the plot is good, the characters are good, why is such a great article not popular?

Looking forward to the follow-up! The interaction between the judge and Fox Nosuke is so cute. A judge like a cherry blossom www. I like the shaping of this judge. Hidden under the surface of joy and joy is the dark background. I feel that the stage for the plot has been laid, and all parties are on the stage. I am increasingly looking forward to the next development. After reading it, I'm eager to read the original work. In fact, I only know Tsurumaru Kunaga and Yamato Moriyasu (but I heard that the national server of the game has been discontinued). The characters appearing in just a few chapters are complex but not complex, with distinct characteristics, the plot is not confusing, and the dialogue between the characters is very interesting. Chapter thirteen is still too short. . ! When you meet a writer you like, do you just call me "Master Mommy Kami"? This is too inferior! So, if you are a man, just strode into her comment area and bark loudly. You have personality and can make your favorite writers interested in you. How about it, Kakuyi deixiu? Come on, give it a try!

It is very surprising. As a novice, the continuity of the plot is very good. Because the examiner is a non-human being, the logic of the confrontation with Mikazuki needs to be written very clearly. This is more difficult but handled very well. However, sometimes there can be a big shift between chapters, but it doesn't hurt.

That's great... It's really difficult to find good-looking articles on Tomato. I'm glad that the teacher can bring us such excellent works! The setting of the third generation of judges is really novel. All I have seen before are articles about mindless judgments about redeeming the Dark Fallen Knife. When I came across such an article, no matter which generation of judges they are, they have very charismatic personalities and impressive images. It really made my eyes light up. I look forward to the follow-up [Adoration] The current rhythm of the writing is very smooth, and it is not like what a new author can write. The emotional lines, whether it is Zha Shen and HSB (wait for this) or the heroine and An Ding, are very tense. I was twisting in a ball in bed in the middle of the night. I am very happy to find such a hexagonal article and will continue to support it (by the way, I asked quietly, will there be a main story in Liuhua's timeline or is it basically daily life and digging into the past)

Very well written! However, you can break long paragraphs into smaller ones.

Curious and looking forward to the next article

So pretty! I will always support the author with great [love][love]

Look! Show them all to me!

Very good, keep up the good work! A very nice book [a heartfelt gift]

Although I didn't watch it for long, I was really attracted to the heroine. Come on!