The Beautiful Girl Who Traveled Through the Herrscher Was Treated as an Elf Guide

The writing is quite good, but I also agree with the previous point of view. There are too many words about settings and system settlement, which really affects the viewing experience, so I can only give 4 stars. The plot has great potential, but the viewing experience is not good.

It may be a little awkward at the beginning, but starting from the cooking showdown, I felt it was very well written [Love] I feel that the forced performance of the core transfer of Lili in the back is too deliberate, and it is a bit embarrassing, but the rest of it is still quite interesting [laughs]

I haven't read the battle, but the character setting of Tohka in this book was so good that I cried. When she said with tears, "This... Is Shido's world. He likes this world so much... I can't destroy him," I was really deeply touched. The contrast between the protagonist's "performance" and his true feelings after his "vest" is broken (whether acted or real) is also very cute, and the side descriptions and foils are also appropriate and in place. The author has understanding and skills. As for the psychological description, it depends on the person. I think this is one of the few chuuniu descriptions I've seen that doesn't make people feel really embarrassed. Some scenes and catchphrases may be more visual to people who are often exposed to Japanese comics, but if they are just general readers, they will not have a great impact. The protagonist is also strong enough, and there is no excessive plot to suppress his combat power. The knife penetrates very comfortably and is a bit addictive. If I have to talk about shortcomings, I personally think that the newly emerged character Koizumi makes me feel a little overshadowed (I want to see more of the protagonist's life and plot rather than others), and the character of the origami master is a bit unpleasant (every time he appears, he disrupts the situation, and often "does bad things with good intentions"? Although he always says that "protecting Shido is the highest priority", many operations often put him in dangerous situations), other things are pretty good. The last point: when to teach and train when to teach and train when to teach and train. I want to see the protagonist show a shameful and delicious expression and be stood up and bitten! Have you been through it?

The writing is very good and makes people want to pursue it. The author updates it several times a day. The plot description is very visual, and the part similar to Bai E's PV really made me feel deeply involved. The emotions between the characters are described very delicately, and book friends who have never watched the fight can also understand it. The overall evaluation is very good The author writes a bit too much about other characters, and the protagonist often doesn't appear in more than ten chapters, which affects the viewing experience a bit. Can you please let the protagonist appear quickly? The higher the expectations, the higher the disappointment. We may meet again in the future.

The elements of this novel are: The Herrscher of Honkai Impact, The Herrscher of Honkai Impact, and the God of Joy. I came here after reading The Herrscher of Honkai Impact. If you don't know The Herrscher of Honkai Impact, it should be quite comfortable to read. The style of the engagement is like this. The brainwaves are matched. The kitchen battle and the battle are basically very beautiful. Yes, I don't know the Herrscher, so I just think it's a superpower. The God of Fun is probably Hanabi, so I don't have a cold. Then it's right to change the element of marriage. It requires full inner description and a subtle change in mentality. He is not the kind of man who wears a female nickname. It's very good. Keep up the good work. Come on.

I read Tomato's "bianmiao" when it was not yet popular. How should I put it, the current "bianmiao" feels to me like a female video article with a "bianmiao" cover. There are very few descriptions of the core ideological changes. If the label of "bianmiao" is removed, and some emphasized sentences are deleted (although there are not many in the first place), it will not have the characteristics of a "bianmiao" novel. At least this one is okay now. Tohka retorted, I really love the part where the protagonist reflects. This is what I want to see. The transformation is subtle, which makes me look forward to the subsequent plot more. Well done, author, come on, I haven't read a novel in a long time, and this is the only one I'm stuck on. PS: But you should also pay attention to rest. If you work too hard, you still need to balance work with rest.

The plot is not bad, there is really no need to describe so much about the appearance. It is actually better to leave some room for imagination, just like it is better to be vaguely visible than to be fully exposed [laughter]

The author's writing is very good, but in fact, what everyone wants to read is the protagonist rather than the supporting role. There are too many chapters of Xiaosi, and they are all battle plots. Yuehua will use her abilities to change the plot and participate in it personally. As for my protagonist, he just used his ability to abduct Xiao Si. I want to see the post. But I also know that the author wants to write in his own style, so go for it.

Yes, although there are some flaws, the writing is immature, the plot development and the characters are a bit stiff, but it is already very good for novices. Moreover, my entry into the house is to fight, and it comes with filters. At the same time, the characters are not too bad, and some places are barely reasonable. Not bad, average!

It's a good book I haven't seen in a long time [cry] [cry] [cry] Especially the beginning of chapter 400, it's really good to read. This is the kind of marriage I want to read [Adore] [Adore] [Adore]. The rich and delicate psychological description, the subconscious shy little actions of the protagonist, and the process of being slowly conquered and fell into a little bit, are really touching [cry] [cry] [cry]. It's really better than the kind of men who wear the appearance of women or the female videos with the label of changing marriage [crying][crying][crying]. (There are also some shortcomings, especially there are too many elements at the beginning, including battles, Beng San, Beng Tie, etc., As well as some cumbersome special vocabulary and system settlements, which may dissuade some people who have not seen it. There is also the middle Yoshino that is a little flat, and the protagonist has too little plot, but you can really tell that the author The more I write, the more comfortable I become. From chapter 400, I really feel that the author has begun to break away from the original framework of dating and slowly write his own story. As expected, dating is more important! ) Finally, I want to watch the training! ! ! [Shy][shy][shy]

The writing is very good. The original character's personality is restored. The protagonist's relationship with Shido and others is well described and interesting. The protagonist's participation makes the original plot full of uncertainty. The various reversals of the plot and characters are very interesting. Protagonist related Qianyuan: I am a good brother who is both a righteous and cheerful person. I am worried that this character will completely disappear in the future. Chinatsu: Reasonable, arrogant, cold, and complaining. (The name is a bit popular, there are many people named Chinatsu in my mind, but the name is still nice) Quan: A little girl with middle school disease who is ignorant and ignorant. (Complaining, why is the name not called Qianquan? The name formation is messed up) I quite like the descriptions related to the protagonist. Disadvantages: The description of the system part in the early stage was too long, but it got much better after that, and there are some awkward parts. Let's see if you can accept it.

I've reached chapter 163 so far, tell me your feelings. It's really interesting, but when I saw this, I didn't want to read it. Mainly because this book made me confused [face covering] Maybe you need to watch it more comfortably without thinking? I can't count how many times I've seen this kind of description in articles about being refreshed by the protagonist. And to be honest (maybe not so nice) some of the scenes are really embarrassing. For example, in the section about imitating flares, I can understand the author's mood, but the final effect is not very good in my opinion. But the author is a new author after all, and he who can write to this level is at least better than me. I personally look forward to the follow-up. All I can say is, come on ✊Big brother/sister who writes books

The writing is okay, but I want to ask, when will Tohka and Xiaosi appear? By the way Itsuka Kotori. As a human being, I should be able to guess the elf that I turned into. It is possible for a human to become an elf, so I should be able to guess three possibilities of being the correct answer out of the three answers. By the way, although Wuhe's buddy is a bit lecherous, he actually takes brotherhood very seriously. Even though the protagonist later has entanglements with various beautiful girls, he is not really jealous and even often sends assists. The only thing that really attracts Wuhe is Wuhe's female form. And actually I prefer the second dimension! Personally, I think it would be better to have a date with Tomato.

I have now read Chapter 37, and I can only say that the beginning is quite good, and the cooking showdown is also very creative (it may not be very friendly to readers who are attracted by the element of theory and theory. Note: I just read this and one person said so in the comments) I am looking forward to the follow-up development when the CP is married to Shido. I think the psychological activities of the protagonist are also very funny. The friendship between the male body and Shido is also quite awkward. (Praise!! Very interesting [Learned][Learned])

This score is actually on the low side at the moment. The plot is basically smooth. There are some jumps at times, but you can understand it. It doesn't take much effort to watch. It is based on the skeleton of the original plot and creation. Others said it is a bit awkward, similar to the awkwardness of female videos, which cannot be considered a poisonous point. The subject matter is novel and more importantly, the author's update speed is very fast. Some flaws are understandable. Just read it as a cool novel and a love story.

Really nice. It is normal for a woman to fall into a state of decline and change her mentality, and the protagonist does not have unnatural numerical values. The villain Isaac doesn't have an overly heaven-defying setting. I really like this book and highly recommend it. Although the description of the battle is a bit immature, the content is in the T0 range that a battle fan can rank. It would be perfect to reduce the combat aspect and describe the plot more.

It's quite interesting, but I just want to complain. It always feels like it will become a lily novel between the protagonist and Aquan if this continues. Well, let's wait and see for the update [Thinking] Can the waistcoat come off before Chapter 1000 [face covering]

What I saw was getting married [smiling] [covering my face] [giving my heart] [thinking] [pouting] [giving my heart] [petrifying] [punching] [like] [staring] [punching] [punching] [OK] [shocked] [shocked] [awkward laughter] [thinking] [grievance] [face covering] [ Grievance][Send heart][OK][Punch][Punch][Stare][Stare][Hold][Hold][Punch][Get it][Petrochemical][Angry][Get it][Understand][Send heart] The author is so 6 that he updates seven chapters in one day. How long will it take for the protagonist to be captured by Shido?

A very good book, with a low profile and a high profile. The corner of my mouth has not dropped since the cooking competition. It is so fun. I would like to call you the first emissary of Happy. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] The previous plot is indeed relatively unpopular, and most of the negative reviews are due to the previous one. So, believe me, everyone, the second part is really great. Don't stop reading because of these bad reviews. Really start low and go high [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] You must have the ability to distinguish right from wrong. Don't listen to the wind or the rain. You have to read it to know whether a book is good or not [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

The writing is really great. It is no exaggeration to say that it is a first-class dating story, whether it is entertainment or the main plot, it is very well drawn. (I can't think of any other words of praise, in short, it is very awesome) [Like]

It's a very interesting battle story. I recommend it. Although the pace is slow, the interaction between the protagonist and the four elements is very good. The only thing that makes me uncomfortable is that the battle chapter is too long. The battle with the four series of Nai lasts for more than 50 chapters. I recommend that these 50 chapters be skipped a little bit, but when can I break the vest? I hope I can explode the vest before Chapter 500 Did you finally win the Easter match?

Nice! Although there are some flaws, such as the scene where Walter appears is a bit awkward, but in terms of the fight story, it is already pretty good. Marriage change also reflects the inner entanglement of the characters. Unlike some novels that use the disguise of marriage change, there is no sense of entanglement. Another thing is that there are really many words updated in a day, and the flaws do not hide the flaws.

It's good-looking, original and not much modified. The psychological changes of the characters are obvious. You can see the inner transformation of the protagonist. It's not a sudden change, but a slow and perceptible change. Of course, there are also shortcomings: the pace is slow, but the slow pace also brings better description of the characters. Those who can accept the slow pace can give it a try. I admire the author for being able to write more than 400 pictures for the first season of about 10 episodes. At this pace, it is completely enough. Personal summary: It looks good, I love reading it, please update more often! !

I didn't expect that the reason for writing a book review was because the book was urgently needed. Let's talk about my feelings below: I have to talk about the story, the characters, and the psychological transformation of the fandom. They are all very well written. Bro is also waiting to stay up late and read novels to replenish energy. I didn't expect that what I saw tonight was No Elbow Win Shenhe... It's really a pity. I originally thought that I could see more better and more exciting plots, but the reality is that I cut out the clips from if's future clips and released them... (The so-called future that lacks a lot of plots is not interesting at all, kusoga Shenhe) [cry][cry][cry]

The plot is very interesting. I feel like I came up with the outline and plot myself, and then expanded it into a text using AI. However, it's a pity that I didn't refine it manually. The AI ​​flavor is a bit too strong.

I skipped through the following chapters, and it always feels like reading a romance novel, where the male and female protagonists pull each other off [facepalm], but I really can't find other higher-quality fanfics on Tomato, especially since the author has read the original work, not just the anime. Come on, I hope you don't write it down (I feel like there are some signs of it now) Forget it, I can't understand the protagonist's magic operation more and more. Maybe it's just that I don't like the fun setting. Come on, author.

This book can be said to be very good, so I will express my own opinion. There are spoilers below. If you don't want to be spoiled, you don't have to read it. I only read the Kotori chapter. This book seriously deviated from the plot of the original book because of the protagonist Lao Xia, and the story of Lao Xia trying to forge his own identity made the plot very complicated. In the Toka chapter, because the protagonist wanted Shido to follow the original plot, in the Toka chapter, except for the sudden illness of Lao Xia, Lao Xia suddenly fell ill and caused more damage than Toh Xiang. Later, I didn't expect Lao Xia to allow Lao Xia to run around, causing Lao Xia to spoil Yoshino in advance, which gave Yoshino the basis for a reversal, making this dungeon several times more difficult than the original. In the next part of Meijiu, Ike will not capture Tohka for a reversal experiment, because there are already actual cases. Moreover, because of Lao Xia's actions, Kuang San knew the future in advance, so that Kuang San would not follow the original plot again. But I remember that Kuang San has a skill that allows him to understand the memory of the original owner through items or people? Was he banned because it was too easy to identify the protagonist? Later, I didn't expect that Lao Xia actually did a big job and turned Mana into an elf [facepalm]. I thought it was Aha at first, but according to the subsequent plot, it was Lao Xia who did it. Then the relationship between Kotori and Mana was even more tense in this book than in the original book. What I didn't expect later was that the relationship between Kotori and Shido suddenly declined. Lao Xia later took advantage of it and let Shido forcefully insert himself into Kotori's psychological brother-sister position. Now I'm curious how much Kotori's favorability towards the protagonist will drop if he later learns that it was Laonatsu's fault that Mana turned into an elf, and according to the current situation, Kotori is replacing the protagonist with a new brother. Now the protagonist has completely disrupted the original plot. I even think it is a miracle that Shido can still seal the elves now. Next is my pet peeve. It is God's will that such a normal activity like Lao Xia was not exposed. He allowed Lao Quan to move around freely and still live in the protagonist's home and surf the Internet. Qinli and the others did not think of going to Lao Xia's house to check, and they did not find any clues on the Internet. What a waste. [Face covering].

The look and feel of the subsequent plot is okay, but it's just a bit delayed, but that's okay. This kind of transformation novel likes the moment when the vest falls off. The longer it is delayed, the better. As long as it is not too long, the final response will be better. I am currently leaning towards Wei Nian Yang. I will keep reading. I hope the author's outline can withstand it.

I watched the latest version in one go. It has all the advantages that a transformation novel should have, and the twists are delicious. However, the fun becomes less in the end. I just want to say that the battle part should be shortened. Chapter 50 is a bit tiring to watch one battle.

Procrastinating, but productive, it's fun for me to see