Heartbeat************

It's pretty good, but the heroine feels like her life is miserable.

Seeing so far, first of all, I want to praise the author! The author is great for being able to persist in writing so many words! Fortunately! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Then, my personal opinion is that it is driven by the plot. In other words, there is very little psychological description of the male and female protagonists, but I feel that some interactions are like two robots following the plot (for example, the president asked the heroine to sleep in the same bed with him. Logically speaking, as a president, he should also know that he has mysophobia, and he inexplicably treats an ordinary person. It's okay if a girl is interested, but why did she book a room and sleep on the same bed without any preparation? [What] Would it be better to describe the CEO's psychological changes in this place? For example, he just wants to know why this woman is so attractive to him, so he takes the initiative to approach the heroine to test the influence of this "love at first sight") Then there are a lot of irrelevant plots. It doesn't mean that the heroine's life must revolve around the male protagonist, but many plots are not necessary to promote the plot. The plots that can really promote the emotional development of the male and female protagonists are not detailed enough (for example, the female protagonist is selected as a lucky audience to go on stage to interact with one of the male protagonists, but it ends very quickly, as if it was written just to let you know that there is such a thing) The heroine's personality is quite submissive. She lies down if she can't resist. She doesn't take the initiative or refuses. In addition, there is little description of the psychological changes of the male protagonists, and the male protagonist is particularly proactive. This combination is more like two robots acting. Finally, the above are just my personal immature thoughts. I may complain a bit too much, but there is no malice. I just say it because I want to express myself. [Sending my heart] Please don't feel bad because of this. I hope everyone can become a better version of themselves! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] I have to praise you again, it's really amazing to be able to keep writing so much! It's so frustrating and tiring to read. It's not that the author is bad, it's just the plot. Of course, it's also my personal opinion. Everyone's reading experience is different. The heroine is indeed a very ordinary girl from appearance to ability to personality. However, due to the mission, she has to be with various Draconian male protagonists. This process is really awkward. The heroine is definitely better off alone than with these men. These men, because of their certain heartthrob aura, can't help but fall in love with the heroine and get entangled with her, but in fact, they despise the heroine from the bottom of their hearts. They don't really love her, they just regard her as a favorite toy. It doesn't matter what the toy thinks, as long as they are happy. [Anger] As for the heroine's attitude towards the male protagonist, she is very reluctant. She wanted to live alone but was forced to be tied to the task by these dragons. She never thought about letting these men fall in love with her. She just wanted to live a good life by herself. Under the premise that the heroine is unwilling, all the "forcible robbery" of the heroine by men is harassment. The heroine doesn't like the man, and the man doesn't really love the heroine, and the heroine doesn't want to be a so-called "guiding lover" to teach the hero what love is, so she is the one who suffers from being robbed from him [crying] It's really just that people who don't love each other are bound together because of the system and torture each other. The man can't get the love of the heroine, and the heroine can't live the life she wants. (The above conclusion is what I feel after reading it now. It may change in the future. Don't criticize me. I am just expressing my own thoughts. It is not easy for the author to spell out the words. It is still worthy of admiration)

Actually, I'm a little angry. I feel that this Shen is not a good person. Let's see if there are any foreshadowings later. I always feel that the heroine is particularly wronged by Shen and feels a little uncomfortable. As well as Shen's friends, I would be really angry if something bad happened to her. It can be inferred that they should have done something to the heroine at that time, but there is no result now. Anyway, this Shen is just normal. No, this novel makes me uncomfortable to read, teacher. Did someone else write it? The front part is quite good. Or is it that the foreshadowing has been buried for so long and it's still where that dead man Shen is?

The author should not read other people's bad reviews. The writing is very good and very touching. I have read the novel and I like the evil male protagonists. I like the way the male protagonists look down on others (reality strongly rejects and condemns it). It is this kind of forced feeling and it is so cool. I love you so much and I will always follow you!

Okay, I understand the reason for his low score.

So pretty! ! ! I'm almost spoiled by Tomato's popular female heartthrob. This book can be ranked in the top 5. The author writes it very well! ! Recommended! ! It's just too short and not enough to see! ! Update online! Until now, he has been abusing the heroine. . . . . . I can't wait for the reversal. I feel like vomiting blood. Run quickly.

The author's writing is good, but I hope that the heroine will be beautiful in the end. It feels like anyone can bully and control her, making her unable to resist. The heroine must be frightened, please [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] It feels like the heroine has been passively following the plot, and every man treats the heroine like a toy, attacking lightly, like a domestic violence man, a super hero [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh], the heroine is the same, only blindly angry, and then calm down [smile][smile][smile], it is really frustrating [laugh][laugh][laugh], crazy [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Although the details stated that it was not love at first sight, the actual setting was that the initial favorability was very high, and several of the men looked a little sick. However, the overall feeling is that it is just right, and the author's writing style is not bad, so I picked it up! Faster and faster!

At present, both men look down on the heroine, especially Shen. The heroine is being slandered by people around her and I don't care. At the moment, the little star is better.

After reading the latest chapter, I had completely different feelings than I did at the beginning. I was very excited when I started to cp. But when I got to Ji Yanshi, I realized that Susu was a child who was restrained from beginning to end. She was very suffocated. I hope she breaks out of the cage and gets free soon.

This book is the only one I have read so many books about ordinary women of the same type that I have read to the end. I feel that this heroine is the best. She has upright views, is kind and has a sense of justice. She is a little obsessed with money but does not worship money. She is not the kind of scumbag who only loves herself or only cares about money in the books I have read in the past. He is neither humble nor arrogant in front of the powerful male protagonist. He can maintain his principles as long as he can, just like the tenacious and growing grass. So far, this book seems to me to be the best one of this type.

It looks good, but the heroine's life is a bit miserable. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... I haven't watched it for a long time. When I watched it, I thought the heroine was miserable and boring.

When is the Shura Field? Hehe What? The man said he wanted to train her, so he arranged for her to make hotel linens? Do you like it or not? Why did the heroine give up on the previous one? Watching this one now is too frustrating.

It's chapter 127 now, and the heroine is still very unlucky. When will she be able to counterattack [face covering]

The writing is very good, especially the emotional pull between the male and female protagonists. But many of the causes and consequences of this book are unclear, and people who read it are confused. It is also possible that the number of pages is too small, and many foreshadowings have not yet been explained clearly. I hope the author will update it soon.

It's very good-looking, and the male protagonists are all as annoying as superheroes. Generally, I can't help but feel that there are too many boys in heartthrob novels, and there will be too few girls. This article doesn't work at all. I can't wait for a new man to come on board soon. I've really had enough of these idiots. But the crazy guys also have their own charm. Now I see that they want the heroine more than they love her, so I can understand the low love value. A group of crazy guys who don't know how to love are looking forward to the day they fall in love.

It's nice to watch. I really want to know what I went through when I was in school. I want to see the bad guys punished [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] I feel so tired after seeing what happened next. This Shen is very powerful. Why can't he find out what happened in the first place? She also wants revenge. This heroine's life is very miserable. She looks so aggrieved [face covering]

It's quite interesting, so can the author update 10 chapters a day [rolls eyes] [smiles evilly]

I have one thing to say, this book is well written, but there is less description of the inner changes of the heroine. I like to see the delicate emotional pull and the collision of hormones during the ambiguous period of men and women. I hope the author can write better and better.

The author's writing is good, but I don't understand why the heroine always refuses all kinds of contact since she mainly attacks the male protagonist.

I think it's pretty good-looking. I don't know why the score is so low. Personally, I think it's much better-looking than some heartthrob-type articles that are rated 9.12 Points. It's not greasy or dramatic.

The writing is very good, and the plot is eloquently told. I particularly like this style of writing. It has a charm that attracts people to read. The male protagonist's emotions are handled very well. Through many micro-expressions and details of interactions, it is very touching and touching. Anyway, it is not a loss after reading it. Thank you to the author!

It feels so good-looking. The image of the heroine is vivid and vivid. Ling Qing looks cold on the outside but still likes the heroine on the inside. There is a contrast between cuteness and cuteness ^O^

It's very interesting, the first book I've read in a while. I'm just sad that the reunion is not the end. I especially hope that when I wake up the next day, I can see the author blowing up 1,000 chapters [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

What's going on with Xia Kiss? ?

It's beautiful and the details are well described.

It really suits my heart very much [sends my heart], dear author, please don't stop updating! I am willing to follow you all the time! What do you mean, you feel confused at this point [curls] (cold face). Sir, please love me. This is really not enough.

It's very interesting. The heroine is very good, both in terms of personality and outlook.

Super, super, super, super good-looking. The male and female protagonists are getting along pretty well at the moment.

It's good to watch. I think every male protagonist is quite interesting. I haven't seen such an abnormal one in a long time.