When Daiyu's Exquisite Heart Is in the Right Place

The writing is super smooth and feels very comfortable for readers. The plot is connected smoothly and the characters are not OC. It feels like Daiyu's life in a parallel time and space. For example, it is a chapter-turn genre, and each round is narrated in chapters. The chapter names are summarized in one sentence, which is concise and clear, with ancient charm and full of charm (in fact, I secretly looked at the table of contents halfway through the book to guess the plot development later, haha). The plot flows smoothly and connects smoothly. If you read a long chapter in one go, you won't feel that you can hold on. Every sentence starts with xx (character) and Tao (content), but it doesn't feel abrupt at all. It's used appropriately. I was fully immersed in the plot and didn't pick out words or pay special attention to them (I discovered this after reading the previous chapters again). The characters are introduced very clearly in just a few chapters. I like Lin Hai Tuogu the most. I feel that it really describes Lin Hai's feeling of being a father who is seriously ill and reluctant to leave. It followed the original plot of Dream of Red Mansions, but not entirely. It was another development possibility that allowed me to follow Daiyu's God's perspective to see Dream of Red Mansions. As for the character tension, emm, I read it relatively quickly. If the characters appear more clearly or if the original text of A Dream of Red Mansions is introduced to deepen the character design, it will be clearer and the characters will be more three-dimensional. Some details are not handled very neatly. Can you outline some details of the characters in more detail? However, I feel that if it is too detailed, it will appear to be procrastinating (I don't have enough writing skills, so I can't tell you exactly how to do it, just a few suggestions). The pace of the whole text is really steady! ! ! Ah, my wife, I should publish it. I'm really happy to meet such a delicacy in Tomato! I haven't finished reading it yet, so I'll write a five-star review first! Come on ٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ

The author's writing style is really good, and it has an ancient feel and is very natural. It's really worth watching, and he basically doesn't lose touch with the characters. It's the character design, and it's very natural and smooth, and the plot is very understandable.

The author's writing style is very good and very ancient. The subtitle is also very good ㊗The author's works are very popular! But it may be a preconceived notion, although I like Daiyu the most. But I always feel that the life of surprises, joys and sorrows of the Twelve Beauties, Vice Chai, Vice Vice Chai, etc. In Red Mansions is the main plot of The Red Mansions. So I greedily hope that a good author can write about Portraits of the Red Mansions and give these golden girls a good ending.

This is fine chaff and must be watched over and over again

The author is really talented. Every title is carefully named, and the content is allusive. I feel that many sentences are poetic. The article seems to be dissatisfied with the mountains, but the ups and downs of the plot really bring out the feeling of Daiyu. Every character is vivid, and the novel is written with great care. Come on! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's really beautiful, the structure is clear, the literary talent is very good, many things feel good, just like the Dream of Red Mansions, the writing is superb, it is really Daiyu, Daili is angry, and the character is not broken, she is a childhood sweetheart, very touching, so sweet, it makes up for the tragedy of watching Dream of Red Mansions, Daiyu is alive and well, very wonderful [Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

It's super beautiful, the writing, plot and characters are all excellent. I enjoyed reading it. Daiyu only went to Beijing after her father died. This time she is not as cautious as in the original work. The male protagonist is a pure kisser, he loves kisses so much, the young couple sings poems and makes up so sweetly, and their daily interactions are also sweet, the author is super good at writing

Very good, Tomato's best Red Mansion fanfic The writing style is really great, and the words used in the poems and essays are very antique! It is one of the best among the Red Mansion fans I have read. I must not stop updating it.

Super pretty, so sweet

Beautiful, well written

Looks good, sister Lin

Beautiful. The author writes well.

Changed the character of being treated harshly

Why hasn't anyone read it? The author's writing is really good [Sending my heart to you]

Good literary talent, not white and delicate. Write the charm of the characters without being OOC. The male protagonist is very kind to Daiyu. This is a sweet story that you should read! !

It's good to read, but as for Xueyan, why haven't I read it? When Daiyu got married, she mentioned Grandma Wang. In theory, there shouldn't be no Snow Goose.

It's nice to watch, and it doesn't sound like a drama at all. I feel like I'm reading "The Story of the Stone"

The author is so talented and his writing style is really good. It is very similar to the writing style of Dream of Red Mansions. It is a good read.

It looks good and has a rare sense of freshness. Come on, come on

The writing style is really great. I hope the author will not give up and will keep reading [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

This author's writing style is really awesome. People who go to college become very impetuous. It's rare to read a book calmly. After I got married, I almost drowned in the article... Like it👍🏻

It's really beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it?

The writing is so good. The best writing among Red Mansions fans! ! ! ! ! The meaning is still not finished [cry][cry][cry]