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Chapter 16: Everything is ready to explore, and I just discovered another world.

The beginning is too long. . . It is best to think of Chapter 10 as the first chapter and the first nine chapters as the prologue. Why is no one watching? If you don't have explosive points in the second chapter, you'll run half way through, and in the third chapter, if you don't have explosive points, you'll run half again, and so on.

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! Leave them alone, they look really good! ! ! ! ! !