Gao Wu: My Actor System Is Broken

[Thinking] It's okay. There is relatively little content now. Killing the protagonist's ability can permanently obtain the opponent's permanent ability. To be honest, you can tell the official about this, but I suggest that only the top management should bring at most a few people in the same team with the protagonist to know. If they know more, something will really happen. Not to mention cults, if more people know about this ability, what will others think? After all, the protagonist doesn't know whether the protagonist deliberately didn't save his teammates in order to inherit the ability, not to mention not everyone is rational. If you see your friends or relatives die in the hands of the protagonist, you go to the official to report it, but the official says it is to retain the powers of your friends and relatives, and the cult may also get involved [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

Yes, it is a novel system and the plot is also very complete. The only thing I feel is insufficient is that the protagonist plays the peak game every time. I feel that my teammates and the rear are a bit weak, but the amazing thing is that the overall situation is still stable. This feels very fragmented. A stable situation must have overwhelming power, but it is understandable that the change has only occurred for three months.

The idea is indeed good, but the writing style is not perfect, but it is still readable. As for many people saying that the protagonist's introduction to the ability is a bit poisonous, I think it is actually okay. After all, the ability will be refreshed and copied once, and then it will disappear after a while. If you don't tell it, people will not know it. There is no need to hide it if the target dies and copies it permanently. This is not a trump card at the moment. It is easy for people to guess anyway. As long as the system is not revealed, it is not considered a poisonous point. While watching, you may feel that the protagonist is contradictory or inconsistent. In fact, I think it is acceptable. After all, he is a normal and cheerful person, but he only pretends to be a cold protagonist.

Personally, I think the quality is good and the writing is relatively good, but I feel that the plot is a bit too compact. I think some descriptions of characters and details can be added to enrich the content and buffer it. Personally, I think it is a relatively fast read. After reading it once, the only thing that left a deep impression was the protagonist. The other characters did not leave a deep impression. It feels like they will be forgotten in a few hours. What I said may be a little inaccurate and inappropriate. Please forgive me. The overall feeling is too smooth. There are not many places in the book that mention time. There is no sense of substitution. For someone like me who can read quickly, I feel that the whole text is telling an uninterrupted story. There are no buffers or interludes. There is no problem overall, but I feel an inexplicable discomfort after reading it. Having said so much, I would like to make two suggestions from my personal perspective. One is to add some reminders about time. The other is to add more descriptions of details and characters, such as adding some psychological journeys of the protagonist and some specific shaping of the supporting characters (of course, if you really do this, it will test the author's writing skills) Suddenly I thought of adding one more thing, that is, the protagonist's teammates are a bit too weak, which gives people a strong sense of separation, so that I don't understand the purpose of the existence of the Defense Bureau. It gives me the feeling that only the protagonist is enough to cope with it.

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I have read the latest chapter of Chapter 187. This book is 5 stars for me, but it does have poisonous points, but it did not break through my poison resistance. Every poisonous point has come back one by one, so for me it is almost non-toxic, and there is nothing to fault in terms of plot. Anyway, if it has always been like this You can keep reading. The good thing about this novel is that it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist's combat power. Even if he is killed, he will be resurrected. There are also prophecies. The further he goes, the more omnipotent he becomes. In the end, he will definitely be detached or omniscient. The bad thing is that the ways in which these poisonous points are introduced are quite annoying, but after the poisonous points, they are all cool articles [face covering]

It's okay. It's well written for a newcomer. The protagonist's IQ is online, the writing is okay, and the plot is also good. However, there are a few strong male characters in the book. I feel that the author should add more supporting characters to make the book feel like a group novel. Otherwise, it feels like adding so many strong female characters to the protagonist's harem. Is there any female protagonist who can say [face covering]? If so, be careful when writing emotional lines.

Another book I'm following, The One That Turns into a Summoner , has gone from no rating to an 8.9! Get some energy, brother! ! ! I'm chasing you every day, don't worry! I will go to the book circle to recommend books to you in a while! Try to keep updating as normal as possible every day!

Rating so low? No, it's a very innovative novel, using Gao Wu as an artist. Personally, I think it's okay to score at least 9.5, And the writing is not bad either.

It's very good, but there are too few. Can you update it more? If there are 10 chapters every day, it would be perfect [Thinking]

All right! It feels very comfortable to me! The plot is also compact! It is a rare good grass for tomatoes! I haven't found any shortcomings yet! Come on, author! Keeping updated is not a problem. [Smile] Isn't it touching? Isn't it easy to earn 10,000 words a day?[Start]

Now is the time for the author to publish results. Two updates a day is too little. Many book friends are cultivating books. [Thinking] It is recommended to update four times a day. The results will be very optimistic. [Sending heartfelt wishes]

Come on author! It's very well written, I hope it doesn't end badly.

It looks pretty good so far

It's okay, but it's probably the author's first time writing a novel, so there are a few minor issues

If you take advantage of the situation, I will become the elder statesman [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The setting of the acting is very new and very interesting. I urge you to update it [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's quite good to watch, mainly because the acting is relatively novel, but the content actually has some shortcomings, and it's a bit awkward in some places, but overall it's acceptable. There is currently no clear female protagonist in this article, and there are two ambiguous partners.

@Schrödinger's writer, give me some time, when will the plot of Little Days end and I will come back to read it?

I originally thought it was a shot of the protagonist and a passerby trying to steal the fate of the protagonist. (Guessing wrongly is different than expected) [face covering]

Not enough, the score is low! Come on! ! ! !

The settings and content are okay, but there are too few. You can wait and see.

It can be read. In the novels I have read, counting between grain and fairy grass, some small poisonous points can actually be ignored. They are too small and not obvious compared with the overall plot. I don't know why some people pursue such a little bit of poison. Maybe it's because they have read too few books?

Come on, the author writes very well, but the number of words is too few, come on😊, I hope it won't end badly, come on😊

There must be old 6 in the comment area, it looks good, I recommend it [like] [like]

Resurrection of spiritual energy: I cultivate my camera sense while others practice it Written by Schrödinger The plot is smooth and Goldfinger is more interesting. It tells an ordinary story of spiritual energy recovery. Fortunately, it is full of youth, and it has a particularly clear (?) Feeling when reading it, but it is also too full of emotions and a bit exaggerated. I am not very comfortable with this level. Four to four and a half stars.

The angle is very novel, but I personally don't like plots where many women like the protagonist.

Cool, even though it is a template plot, it does feel like the protagonist is growing up and fighting bloody battles.

It's still very good. The plot is very novel. It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject. It's a cool protagonist who finally dies for once.

It's very good. Some places, such as the fight with the instructor when I first entered the university, are very graphic and very interesting to watch.