Golden Elixir************

What I like better is that it avoids the cliche pseudo-spiritual roots and its own small space, and it has a certain family bond. Some people say that it is plain, but it is not. The overall plot is relatively smooth, but a little bland. Cultivation of immortals is not all about fighting and killing, but also has a worldly relationship. The combat power has not collapsed and will not be defeated by Long Aotian. I feel that there is a lot of foreshadowing about the family in the early stage. I hope the novel can stick to it. The beginning is simple, and the rare thing is to persist for more. Come on.

Newbie, new book, please give me your support. If there is anything wrong, I will correct it in time, thank you all🙏. The protagonist's name is Xu Yun, and Ping is just his given name. This book belongs to the slow-burn genre, and the protagonist is more cautious due to his past life, but he is also decisive. Fellow Taoists who don't like this book can't stand it. You can go and appreciate other good works. Be gentle. It's not easy for every author to write a book, and we all hope to understand each other. 🙏🙏 [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Originally, I felt awkward when I saw that the protagonists with seniority in the family always did not add the word "flat", so I decided to give it four stars. I don't know if this is the author's real name or for some reason. The worst thing is that if you add more words, the book may be full of water. However, after reading it, I found that the author's plot design is good, and every detail is polished well. Some of the plot advancements are very attractive. Considering that it is not a classic plot of a small Qi-training and foundation-building clan facing a catastrophe, it is well designed. The first conflict point currently seen is the conflict between Xu Luo's two famous alchemy-forming families, which can be regarded as skipping the first stage of ordinary families' cultivation of immortality and entering the second stage.

For now, we can see some shadows of the Supreme Immortal Path and the Nine Transformations of the True Spirit, but the author only refers to a small part of it, and the protagonist is not a disciple with poor talent in the Qi-training family or the Foundation-building family in the traditional family cultivation novel. This aspect makes people want to read more, but the main problem is that there are too few chapters. If there are more chapters, the author's performance will be improved a lot.

Slow heat flow, gentle pace, slow reading has a unique flavor, and there are many interesting articles to read. Occasionally reading this kind of mortal flow is still very good, the writing style is also very online, the language is also very easy to understand, ordinary life, ordinary novels, the sense of substitution is also good, it is worth reading in depth. The only flaw may be that the author updates too slowly. I hope the author can not forget the original intention and write well. Slow heat flow, the more words, the better. There are always some niche groups who like this type of articles. Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I have a suggestion: change the long lineage of the Xu family to the direct lineage of each house (taking the five generations of the Master Zifu as the lineage, the great-grandsons of his brothers, the descendants of his uncles, and the descendants of his uncles and uncles who have spiritual roots are all selected to enter the house) The side meridian was changed to the common meridian (taking the third generation of Zhenji Zhenxiu as the meridian, his brothers, nephews, grandnephews, uncles, and cousins entered the house). The rest of the Qi-training clansmen selected from the secular world were called ordinary meridian. This forms the direct meridian, the common meridian, and the ordinary meridian. (That is, what the royal family usually calls the large and small clan concubines)

It's good to read. The author has obviously put in hard work. In a family that has been developing for more than a thousand years, except for those who are closely related by blood, the other members of the clan are actually more or less related to the sect's children. It is normal to treat each other as if they were guests. There are too few chapters. Please update it, the author. It is still very interesting!

It is readable, not brainless, not mentally retarded, has the aura of the protagonist but is weak, the protagonist is a little more ordinary than ordinary, the cross-border battle is only a small realm, not a big realm, without Long Aotian, no matter how talented he is, he will be beaten and fall. It is not the kind of cool novel that rushes, rushes, rushes, rushes, and then leaves everything to the protagonist's aura, and then rushes, rushes, rushes, rushes, rushes, rushes...

The writing style of this book is very good, and it is not tiring to read. If the psychological descriptions such as shock and horror during the battle are a little less, it may reflect the protagonist's better psychological state. After all, this is really a very ordinary fairy tale. The only advantage of the protagonist is that his "luck" is pretty good. We still hope to see the protagonist's Taoism firmer. Fortunately, this problem is not particularly big, but occasionally seeing too many similar descriptions can be a bit confusing. After all, the protagonist has been so experienced and is so easily frightened. The Taoist heart of this cultivation cannot be reflected in the word stability. As for a minor issue, the identity of the time traveler is not particularly good. It would be better to directly arrange the original residents of this world. But fortunately, only a small part of the plot is inconsistent with the behavior of the time traveler, such as some of the behavior towards the parents during the Qi refining period. The overall problem is not big. I don't know what the identity of this time traveler is. I think one good thing about the battles in this book is that they don't happen every second, and the battle plot is somewhat back-and-forth. Even if you are far ahead, there will still be some trials. There are many novels where the God's perspective is widened, and the two parties seem to know all the information about the other side immediately when they fight, which is very unreasonable. The number of words is still low at the moment. I don't know what realms I will write about later. I will soon see the Purple Mansion realm. I hope the protagonist's momentum will slowly unfold. Come on, author, this Mortal Flow is indeed a good book. If there are any similar tomatoes, please recommend them. I forgot to mention that this book is supposed to be about a single heroine, who appears step by step, and slowly creates sparks after helping each other in the secret realm. I feel that it is well written and has the experience of sharing adversity. At present, the relationship has not been confirmed in the Zi Mansion, but when I broke through the Zi Mansion and talked with the family Jindan elder, I felt that it was basically confirmed. The biggest highlight of this book is that the protagonist becomes stronger despite being ordinary. To be honest, the various system novels, gold-finger novels, and useless novels nowadays make me want to vomit, and the dialogues between cultivating immortals and cultivators are very silly. They are all old monsters that have been around for decades and hundreds of years. This is also related to the author's own life experience. It is also possible that the small problem I mentioned above is a perspective problem caused by the initial protagonist's mentality that has not yet changed. The author can add in the previous article that the protagonist did not like worldliness before time travel and had ordinary thoughts on some issues. With this explanation, the character design may be better. Before time travel➕I was over 40 years old during my first ten years of cultivation, but some of my behaviors with my parents were a little childish. I don't know if the author wanted to show the protagonist's growth or if he didn't pay much attention to it. There are a few minor flaws, I hope this can be corrected.

As a reader for more than ten years, this is one of the two best books about a family that cultivates immortality that I have read. It's not the same old trash flow, system flow, pretense flow. It seems that today's online article authors can't write articles without writing these. I'm really speechless. I hope that the author can continue to work hard as a source of fresh air, and I will keep following up on updates without being a eunuch. Another small immature suggestion is to add a little more supporting roles, since this is a family story after all. Come on, the author, no eunuchs, no eunuchs, no eunuchs.

Why was it removed from the shelves inexplicably?

It seems to be quite ordinary, simple and bland. How should I put it, I probably want to write a long novel, but the main reason is that I have no hope. Firstly, there is no golden finger, and secondly, prices have collapsed. This can be ignored for a moment. I think I want to write a long novel, so the progress is very, very slow. You can read

Overall it's bland but there are climaxes. This is the best traditional fairy tale in my opinion. Compared with the ups and downs or legendary life of other novels. I still prefer this style. After all, plainness and boredom are the main themes of cultivating immortality

It's very interesting. The protagonist is not invincible. There are certain routines and counter-routines. The plot is sequential and orderly. There are daily cultivation, trivial family matters, foreign enemies, and adventures. The endless years of cultivating immortals must be either fighting or on the way to fight. Daily trivial matters make cultivating immortals more real.

Among the recently searched articles on family cultivating immortality, I was the only one who saw the latest chapter that had been updated. .

Why was this novel 📖 taken off the shelves?

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It's not easy to find a male channel without golden fingers. So far, it's okay. I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist. I can write about the influence of Pingzhou or above or the big competition.

The book is good, but why is it about using a sword? Nine of the ten books on cultivating immortals use swords. I'm so tired of reading them.

The narration of the novel is clear and smooth, and the description of the friendship between family members is touching. The protagonist is not a brainless virgin, and you will not feel aggrieved when watching it [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] A refreshing and refined family cultivating immortality novel [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] must have five stars [like] [like] [like]

I quite like it, the rhythm is good, steady and steady, nothing too bad.

No, why was it taken off the shelves? Look good [angry]

Yes, you can write it. It's just that he only updates 4,000 words a day. Leave me a comment and ask the author to update it four times a day. That's 8,000 words.

Not bad, unique in family literature

What a great author. But I feel like my family is not very helpful to the protagonist. After all, he is also a cultivator with both talent and opportunity.

Good looking, family cultivator

Why has it been removed from the shelves? The author is so big [crying][crying][crying]

The overall quality is okay. Can the names of the pig's feet be unified?

Is it a long novel? It should be at least over one million words. Come on, update, and try to write a long novel with several million words. Stop being a eunuch.

No golden finger?