The Plot Fell Apart After I Became the Military Bride Heroine's Sister

Generally speaking, there may not be any interesting points (you can watch it without thinking, so far), but I don't really want the male protagonist to be Xu or Feng. If the male protagonist is Xu, then the female protagonist is finished. There is also an iron love rival (Feng's sister), and his sister may do something bad. This is not slander, because his sister's first impression of the female protagonist is not good in the first place, and I feel that his sister is a bit of a moral kidnapping; His sister and the heroine met for the first time because Xu returned to the capital to check up on the abducted little star. Before leaving, Xu gave him all the money and tickets he had to Feng, and asked Feng to buy something and come to apologize. His sister and his mother went shopping and bought something she liked (his sister didn't know it was for the heroine). After buying it, she found out that it was for the heroine. She was already a little unhappy. , I didn't like the heroine even more when I saw him later (I think this is what he meant). After borrowing the bathroom at the heroine's house, he said how hard they worked for this gift and how serious it was. If you don't accept it, it will be embarrassing for them, and the heroine can see Feng's sister's impatience (that is, the heroine thinks that this time Feng's sister wants the heroine to accept the gift as soon as possible and make the payment early) It would be even worse if the male protagonist was Feng. Then Feng and his sister would be furious, feeling that the female protagonist had taken away her favor. Needless to say, the female protagonist's subsequent life would definitely be more exciting. The female protagonist and his sister had conflicts. If Feng didn't turn toward his sister during that quarrel, then his sister must have felt that her eldest brother was not like this before () At present, it is said that the heroine is friends with Feng and Xu, but some descriptions of Feng are a bit like saying that Feng is attracted to him but doesn't know it. Haha, I may not really like Feng's sister (maybe I am maliciously speculating). Unless he tells me that his sister's personality has changed drastically due to something she has experienced, otherwise, I can't think of any reason for me to accept Feng or Xu as the male protagonist... (Feng and Xu are both good people, I just don't want them to be the male protagonist) If I'm knocking the heroine x Feng or the heroine x Xu, I'd rather be knocking Xiaoxingxing and Xiaoyoyo (I'm not saying I'm not even going to spare children when I'm knocking CP, I'm just giving an example)

The setting is very interesting, and the plot is smoother and more realistic. The parents are short-tempered, but sometimes it can be tiring to watch. If there is a male protagonist, I don't want it to be Xu or Feng. It is not particularly suitable for the female protagonist. It would be better without CP.

The heroine's personality is not outstanding, like a dumpling, but she appears to be extremely real. The family members all have their own fatal flaws, but they can gradually become harmonious under the influence of the heroine. Overall it's pretty good.

Look at the good things the heroine's father did before he was cleared The eldest son took the exam for his own job. Although his father was an eighth-level worker, he never taught him. His father taught him step by step (given by his father who works for his cousin) and he was at the same level as himself. The second child gave his job to his cousins, and was not welcome in his in-laws' family, working like a cow or a horse. The third cousin has his own father looking for a job. His biological son goes directly to the countryside and is given a monthly subsidy. Lao Wu was so frail that he might as well have died in the countryside. The fourth child was the only one who was reborn and took control of his own destiny. Before he was reborn, he went to the countryside and suffered. Let me ask readers, is it necessary for such a father to clear his name?

It's very beautiful. I don't know why the rating is low. The heroine has carefully integrated into the world, and is not so contrasting that it makes people suspicious. I really like the weak and weak. I feel that this kind of illness that is not too big or too small is very suitable for my reading appetite. Besides, I hope that the heroine can wear better-looking clothes to amaze everyone.

It's very interesting, not a brainless system text. It goes beyond common sense and reasonably combines some system rewards that appear for no reason. And yes, the existence of the system only creates some coincidences and increases the heroine's self-confidence, but the premise of all this is the heroine's kind nature. And there are no good guys and bad guys in a complete sense, they just have different positions. If you want to read a lightning protection novel that is mindless and cool, you need to use your brain to read this book.

So far, I feel it's okay, but the update is too slow, and the male protagonist is not very clear. I feel like the male protagonist should be Xu, not Feng. Because Xu's portrayal is not particularly good, but compared to Feng, Feng's family is too utilitarian, especially his mother and sister, so I don't think he can become the male protagonist.

Four stars, the front is okay, but what's going on in the back? Keep writing about Feng and Xu, don't write around them, why not mainly write about the heroine? Moreover, the language is very cryptic and requires guessing, which I feel is unnecessary. To put it bluntly, guessing all the time is very tiring, and it's not the heroine's part, so there is no need to spend so much time on it. I'm a little tired from reading it. It's not that the writing is not good or exciting, I just feel it's off the mark. I'll deduct one star. But I am quite interested in the setting of the female protagonist in this article [note], so I haven't run away yet. It's better if you keep writing around the female protagonist. If either Feng or Xu is the male protagonist, then you just focus on writing about them and the female protagonist. If you don't want to do anything else, just bring it over and explain it. I'm a little tired from reading it right now😫I'm currently reading chapter 166. I'll share my opinions after reading it later.

Can the author please tell me who the male protagonist is? If the male protagonist is Xu or Feng, can you tell me so that I can avoid the thunder? If the male protagonist is Xu after reading this, I feel like I am going crazy. I felt like I had a lump in my throat when I saw many of Xu's plots.

I have finished reading most of the character plots. Although I feel tired and depressed after reading it, and the writing is a bit cumbersome in some places, but from the trivial matters in the family life, it shows that the heroine is particularly sober and rational in getting along with her family, lovers, and colleagues, without crossing the line or getting entangled, and at the same time, she consistently lives according to her own ideas.