[Three weeks] [Single heroine Melina] [Non-travel] [Non-rebirth] [No system] [No gameplay, more realistic story style] [Try to have more Melina plots]
The Faded One became King of Elden, but there was only loneliness on the throne.
What the king says is truth, and what the king does is law.
The King twisted the Golden Law and folded the Ring of Elden into Mobius.
Just to travel through time and space and go back to the beginning of everything.
For the first time, the king failed to save his own witch.
So there was a second time, incarnation as the King of Mad Fire, lighting the golden tree for the witch, and then the king hid in the royal city, waiting for his destined death...
But there was a third time. The king twisted the law and played with time, and became the puppet of Elden's ring...
The fourth time, the king began to hunt the supreme will, and he ignited the stars, because the king is the epileptic fire. When the king has the consciousness to destroy the world, the king is the epileptic fire.
The fifth time...
Reader comments
I. . . Remembered. . . I remembered it all. . . I am not a small sickle that takes half of the left bow and half of the big sword and wets it. . . I am. . I am a practitioner of the Golden Law, and I am Melina's only king😭😭😭
It's beautiful. The author's control over the plot and foreshadowing is very subtle. The love plot is very natural. The writing style is simple and unpretentious but can still make people feel the emotions inside. It is definitely top-notch among the second creations of Lao Tou Huan.
Except for the ending, which was a bit rushed, the plot overall was smooth. I have actually written a fanfic about the Circle of Magic myself, and the heroine is also Meimei😭😭😭. I can clearly feel that the author is very good at expressing emotions. He is used to using language and actions to pave a silent but affectionate road between Melina and the Faded One. The author's depiction of battle scenes is really not a strong point - but it is harmless. After all, this is a fanfic about Melina. We are just here to see the story between Melina and the Faded One. I just went to burn Meimei and it feels so good to read this again.
The author writes so well. It is definitely an excellent second creation. The emotional depiction and plot control are both top-notch. At least I think it is impossible for Meimei Dang who has played Ring of Magic not to like it after reading it.
I am Melina's sharp edge [punch hard] [crazy]
Five stars for Meimei
It's beautiful and worth watching, especially the emotional line.
It's over, the two of you coexist in a beautiful partnership, love will always be with you, embrace each other in the name of the king
Unexpected ending, but still very good, but I still prefer a more cliched ending
My Melina [crying]
I feel good after reading it
Five stars, absolutely five stars. If not for too few people looking at the old ring, the score would be even higher.
It's very well written, author, keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to it very much
Long live Meimei[note]
To be honest, I think it's good and the writing is pretty good. I hope the author will continue to update [Like]
I've finished reading it, and I'm really looking forward to it if there's an extra plot in this book after Mel's blessing. I'm more curious about the plot after that. To put it bluntly, I just haven't read enough [cover face][cover face][cover face]. It's quite well written, and the description is quite accurate. Anyway, my heart skipped a beat after reading it. There is a feeling of unfinished business. Recalling the descriptions of other people after the epilepsy in the previous chapters, it is like experiencing the story of the Ring of Magic again. What kind of ending can be worthy of the ups and downs along the way? Maybe in a kind future, they will be very happy.
Score for Meimei [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
In the Elden Book of Gods in my heart, the only heroine is Meimei [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
Great, no need to say more [blowing kiss]
Players in the Ring of Magic should all give 3 or more
The ending of "Spreading Flowers", the author's writing is really wonderful, but it's too short. How about some daily life with Meimei [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]
Okay, ok, ok
So proud, no need to say more [Adoration]
Very magnificent epic
Not bad, I like this story
The author said that he is a novice, but his writing style is very mature, and it is beautiful but not unpopular [laughing]
It kind of satisfies my regrets about first-class love affairs.
Good! Well! OK OK! Because of this!
Although I don't know why the rating is only 6. But I feel pretty good😊
It's really touching, but I think it could be longer, but it's still very touching. There are really too few pure love stories from Amei [crying]
The emotions are delicate and the writing is good. It can be regarded as a good work in the fanfic on Tomato.
I enjoyed watching it in one go. It's really good [I learned it]
Little Black Box comes here because of its reputation. It looks good and I love to read it. Update it quickly [laughter]
Good looking, good luck to the author
First of all, I wish the author a happy ending [love]
After following more than 20 chapters all the way, I can see that the author has deep thoughts on the world view. The pace in the middle is not draggy, and the ending is more stream of consciousness (but it just happened to match my consciousness 2333). I was really moved when I read the last part. Thank you to the author for your companionship in the past two months. I am really glad to have come across such a book. It is recommended as a masterpiece with five stars.
By the way, author, please stop touching me and write a side story and the next book for me. Otherwise, don't blame me for being rude😡
I. . . Remembered. . . I remembered it all. . . I am not a small sickle that takes half of the left bow and half of the big sword and wets it. . . I am. . I am a practitioner of the Golden Law, and I am Melina's only king😭😭😭
It's beautiful. The author's control over the plot and foreshadowing is very subtle. The love plot is very natural. The writing style is simple and unpretentious but can still make people feel the emotions inside. It is definitely top-notch among the second creations of Lao Tou Huan.
Except for the ending, which was a bit rushed, the plot overall was smooth. I have actually written a fanfic about the Circle of Magic myself, and the heroine is also Meimei😭😭😭. I can clearly feel that the author is very good at expressing emotions. He is used to using language and actions to pave a silent but affectionate road between Melina and the Faded One. The author's depiction of battle scenes is really not a strong point - but it is harmless. After all, this is a fanfic about Melina. We are just here to see the story between Melina and the Faded One. I just went to burn Meimei and it feels so good to read this again.
The author writes so well. It is definitely an excellent second creation. The emotional depiction and plot control are both top-notch. At least I think it is impossible for Meimei Dang who has played Ring of Magic not to like it after reading it.
I am Melina's sharp edge [punch hard] [crazy]
Five stars for Meimei
It's beautiful and worth watching, especially the emotional line. It's over, the two of you coexist in a beautiful partnership, love will always be with you, embrace each other in the name of the king
Unexpected ending, but still very good, but I still prefer a more cliched ending
My Melina [crying]
I feel good after reading it
Five stars, absolutely five stars. If not for too few people looking at the old ring, the score would be even higher.
It's very well written, author, keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to it very much Long live Meimei[note]
To be honest, I think it's good and the writing is pretty good. I hope the author will continue to update [Like] I've finished reading it, and I'm really looking forward to it if there's an extra plot in this book after Mel's blessing. I'm more curious about the plot after that. To put it bluntly, I just haven't read enough [cover face][cover face][cover face]. It's quite well written, and the description is quite accurate. Anyway, my heart skipped a beat after reading it. There is a feeling of unfinished business. Recalling the descriptions of other people after the epilepsy in the previous chapters, it is like experiencing the story of the Ring of Magic again. What kind of ending can be worthy of the ups and downs along the way? Maybe in a kind future, they will be very happy.
Score for Meimei [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
In the Elden Book of Gods in my heart, the only heroine is Meimei [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Great, no need to say more [blowing kiss]
Players in the Ring of Magic should all give 3 or more
The ending of "Spreading Flowers", the author's writing is really wonderful, but it's too short. How about some daily life with Meimei [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]
Okay, ok, ok
So proud, no need to say more [Adoration]
Very magnificent epic
Not bad, I like this story
The author said that he is a novice, but his writing style is very mature, and it is beautiful but not unpopular [laughing]
It kind of satisfies my regrets about first-class love affairs.
Good! Well! OK OK! Because of this!
Although I don't know why the rating is only 6. But I feel pretty good😊
It's really touching, but I think it could be longer, but it's still very touching. There are really too few pure love stories from Amei [crying]
The emotions are delicate and the writing is good. It can be regarded as a good work in the fanfic on Tomato.
I enjoyed watching it in one go. It's really good [I learned it]
Little Black Box comes here because of its reputation. It looks good and I love to read it. Update it quickly [laughter]
Good looking, good luck to the author First of all, I wish the author a happy ending [love] After following more than 20 chapters all the way, I can see that the author has deep thoughts on the world view. The pace in the middle is not draggy, and the ending is more stream of consciousness (but it just happened to match my consciousness 2333). I was really moved when I read the last part. Thank you to the author for your companionship in the past two months. I am really glad to have come across such a book. It is recommended as a masterpiece with five stars. By the way, author, please stop touching me and write a side story and the next book for me. Otherwise, don't blame me for being rude😡