HP: Outstanding Graduate of Azkaban

Personally, I think this book is wonderfully written. Finally, a protagonist dares to yell at Dumbledore and confront Dumbledore Snape. How dare you attack the Ministry of Magic blessing collection! It's very spicy! It looks really cool! There is a feeling that I finally let out my bad breath! The fanfics I watched before were so frustrating! And the protagonist didn't have any ambiguity with those children at all! It's simply a divine book! Highly recommended! There is still no heroine yet! No poison! The protagonist is very strong! There is no forced suppression!

This book is great! This is a very thoughtful book among HP fans. The first is a common problem in HP fanfiction - there is no way to balance the famous scenes in the original work or movie with the protagonist's own role, or the protagonist cannot be well integrated into it. But in this book, there is no such sense of dissonance at all. The classic plot of the three little trains meeting for the first time and joining them in discussing the new professor (protagonist) of Hogwarts is passed through simply and naturally. There are many similar examples (Halloween trolls, Harry's broom being enchanted, etc.). It's all handled quite naturally. Also in this book, the protagonist has his own circle, and there are also many impressive supporting characters besides the original book, such as the sunny kestrel and the beautiful and powerful nightingale. Bronze Feather also has many adventures of its own outside of the original. Moreover, in the article here, the original "battle" with Voldemort that occurs every year is ended quite directly and quickly with the intervention of the protagonist (especially the Chamber of Secrets! It is surprisingly fast, and it ends before the Christmas holiday!) The character design of the protagonist is also very good. At first I just thought he was a typical pretentious king. Cold, talkative and powerful, they are all typical characters. But looking back, I saw the tenderness he showed towards the little wizards, his dedication to teaching courses, his humor in front of his friends, and his decisiveness when he was angry. These can very well dilute some of the sense of distance brought about by this kind of persona, as well as the irritability of seeing too much. Make him more alive. The settings in the book are basically all the original content. In addition to the magic spell created by the protagonist himself, there is also the organization Bronze Feather. (But they are all the protagonists, so what's wrong with a little goldfinger! [Cool]) What I also like very much is that the protagonist basically does not belong to any house. He is a Ravenclaw himself. He was bullied by all Slytherins when he was a student, and Snape hates Snape because of his bottomless favoritism. But in the book, I don't feel the author's partiality at all. Fans generally whitewash some of Slytherin's evil deeds and replace them with childishness or tsundere (the Slytherins in the original novel are actually not very friendly [like]). But here the protagonist (or the author) does not feel at all that there is any deterioration or beautification of any academy. Also a reminder! Snape in this article, as well as the Dursleys and Slytherin, are some of the characters in the movie who are somewhat whitewashed. Everything here is strictly based on the original work [cover face] and be careful to avoid lightning. Overall, it looks good🤩 and feels great [sending my heart] Great author! ! ! [Please update] Update soon! ! ! (Although it's already very fast [laughing])

Personal use: A very appealing protagonist. It's a cool article. It has changed all the scenes in the original drama that were endured for the sake of the overall situation, including Umbridge, Fudge, the school board, Rita Skeeter, Lockhart, Aunt Maggie, etc. Especially Rita Skeeter, who instantly melts away in a single face-to-face. It's so satisfying to defeat ten enemies with one effort. Including the confrontation with the principal, I recognized some of his suggestions, but the contradiction lies in Dumbledore's negligence in the position of principal, such as allowing danger, partiality and unfairness, etc. But for underage students, the protagonist is a knowledgeable and good teacher who brings a lot of changes to Harry, Hermione, Ron and Draco. This change is more ideological. One month of confinement and copying a bunch of Muggle social science books successfully opened Draco's eyes to the world, realized the limitations of the pure-blood theory, and actively sought changes. In terms of ability, the protagonist handed over more practical things and opened practical classes. The teaching model is more like that of senior middle school students, with detailed theory and experiments, and the teaching pace is faster if he fails the exam and makes up the exam. In my opinion, the learning content of the original drama is more towards happy education. Although the original work is a story about a young savior saving the world, I still think teenage children should study hard. Although there is no way to do it due to fate, it is best to take over the burden that adults can take over. A lot of the hardships that Harry suffered in the original show were unnecessary in my opinion. Before reading it, I checked through the comments to see if there were any surprises. At about 8:00, I thought there would be a lot of low-scoring comments. To my surprise, I saw almost no low-scoring comments... It was only 8.9. It's really unreasonable. The author has a good grasp of the pace. I read more than 180 chapters in one go. If I hadn't come to comment, I wouldn't have realized that I had read so many chapters. Looking forward to the next plot.

The protagonist of this book finally doesn't just follow the main plot, he has his own friends and his own circle. I read this book very comfortably and smoothly. I hope it can maintain this quality forever (I will support you as the author *^_^*)

So far, I am quite surprised by the way this book shapes people. Although the protagonist and Dumbledore are sometimes antagonistic, and he does not seem to like Dumbledore very much, there is no personality distortion/all evil deeds/final boss/White Devil/Dumbledore. There is no radiant personality of Snape and the arrogant young master Platinum Dragon. Instead, the annoying/partialist/bullying professor Snape and the somewhat annoying/bullying coward Malfoy in the original book are more realistically portrayed. The most surprising thing is that this book does not have a pure-blood noble Slytherin or a domineering president. Instead, it has a negative attitude towards Death Eaters and dark wizards. Marvelous.

Very nice. This is my first time reading a Harry Potter fanfic, and the last time I read the original novel was more than ten years ago. So far, the characterization is very fleshed out, and the plot and secondary settings are very appropriate. The protagonist's style and logic of doing things are traceable, and to some extent, some abstract plots in the original work have been re-created or complained about. My thoughts on several main discussion topics in the comment area: The protagonist's style of doing things. From the article, it can be seen that the protagonist is chaotic and kind-hearted, leaning towards orderly and kind-hearted. From the current point of view, dealing with Dumbledore is a confrontation with different paths but the same purpose. For Snape, it was purely targeted but did not rise to a matter of principle. From the many confrontations between the protagonist and Dumbledore, we can see that the protagonist's attitude gradually changes from tough to tougher without overturning the table. This process is consistent with the protagonist's preference for order and kindness, and is strong but not reckless. The few times the protagonist takes action involve opposing positions and principles. If this is considered a turtle, it can only be said to be too urban. Then there's the portrayal of Snape and Dumbledore. When I was a kid, I didn't have any problems reading books and movies. But now that I think about it, it's a game of pure savior, and it's a game of house, one against the other. Snape's image is quite spot-on, with protection, subtle hostility and love. In the original book, Dumbledore did not care about the long-standing bullying phenomenon in the academy. Maybe it was because the old man had more busy things? Personally, I think the kind and enlightened but conservative old wizard in this book is quite consistent with the original work. Then there is a major feature of this book. The various spells of the protagonist, as well as the fairy wand's drinking water that is different from the original book. The description of the wizard battle is very beautiful. The protagonist's various special spells, and the plot of using powerful spells to crush the Ministry of Magic and Death Eaters are very interesting. Summary, can't sleep at night, update quickly Every time I tie it, I will check it out and reread it [laughs evilly] This book is so well written that I can't help it. The first time is July 15, 2025.

The author should know the original work very well. This book is the most rational and objective among the HP derivatives I have read. It will not have some one-sided jokes on the Internet. It is very suitable for the physique of Chinese babies [Like][Like][Like]

If you like it, be sure not to have a CP! (I'm talking about the protagonist, others are random authors 8) The author has expanded a lot of content other than the original work, and the main line Harry and the others used the content of the original work (not a movie, so some people may not know some details). The author also checked the information in some places, and there are no setting problems. One thing to say, if you like Dumbledore, you may want to avoid lightning. Because it looks at Dumbledore's actions from the perspective of non-original protagonists, it criticizes many of Dumbledore's actions, but I think the author's writing is correct. One thing or another, he is a rare Ravenclaw student.

HP classic, as classic as (Hogwarts Defense Against the Dark Arts Professor)! It can be a stand-alone book based on the fantasy wizarding world. Of course, there may be character issues that require you to re-create the supporting characters, but in this book, Miao Miao really depicts the protagonist's personal team with just a few strokes, and perfectly reproduces the shining point of courage that Harry and his friends had when they were watching, adult version. How come it didn't score 9 points? It expanded the obvious line of the protagonist himself, instead of just playing around with the original protagonists in a children's book. It surpassed more than 90% of authors by borrowing the worldview to write their own things.

It's so beautiful. This is the most beautiful fanfic I've ever read. It doesn't overly belittle anyone, nor overly praise anyone. It's correct guidance, and it's treated rationally. Everyone has their own characteristics. The protagonist is strong but not brainless. He won't be bullied and won't bully others at will. I want to say it but I don't know how to say it. Anyway, it's beautiful [Adoration] [Adoration]

I think this article is also very good. Although it is not the kind of cheating all the way from childhood to adulthood, the protagonist does not have a deep family. , And from the perspective of the protagonist, we can also see some problems with the decent protagonist group. We are not saying that the characters should be perfect. On the contrary, flaws can make the characters more three-dimensional. Looking back at some places, we can also find that there are actually some hidden campus bullying in Hogwarts. Luna had her shoes taken away, Harry and the trio were ostracized because of punishment, etc. The protagonist did not stand by and watch, let alone ignore it. Instead, he stopped these behaviors and admonished them.

An absolute masterpiece in the early and middle stages. As an old bookworm, there are really not many books that I can stay up late to read. I don't even want to give up even a small detail! Just before the Triwizard Tournament, I would give a rating of 9.9 In the later stage, I felt seriously fragmented, and suddenly I felt like I was falling into an abyss. Forget about the Seven Wizards Tournament, I actually wrote so many dragons, and skipped it directly. Then the protagonist suddenly changed from wise to arrogant and stupid! By the beginning of the Middle Ages, it was even more useless. Later on, just be prepared to jump and take a look. In short, it is not easy for the author to create. I really liked it in the early and middle stages. I am looking forward to the next work.

This work is one of the few five stars I have given. The protagonist's tragic life experience makes me feel sad. The protagonist's growth and strength, the concept of change, and his inner tenderness. When I step into the protagonist's perspective, I feel sad.

Very very nice looking. The author created a lot of original plots, but it didn't feel redundant. Instead, it felt like it expanded the magical world and made us understand it better. The protagonist is always full of character and very good-looking. The protagonist is very powerful and can be ranked at the forefront of the magic world. The protagonist's life is also very exciting. He is a time traveler, but he only knows that Harry defeated Voldemort. His mother is a marrow wizard and his father is a mute man, but both of them fanatically pursue pure blood and follow Voldemort. His mother died when he was five years old. When he was 11 years old, his father was imprisoned. Both treat the protagonist badly. The protagonist studies hard after entering Hogwarts and is a Ravenclaw student. He was bullied and attacked by Slytherin House because of his blood (mixed blood), but the protagonist also fought back. When I was in fifth grade, I couldn't stand the principal's indifference and Snape's overbearing attitude. Drop out of school. He graduated from Durmstrang Academy of Magic with perfect marks in all subjects. After graduation, he worked at Ilvermorny School of Witchcraft and Wizardry for a year. After traveling for a year, he joined the Ministry of Magic. Later he went to Azkaban to study Dementors. At the age of 21, he returned to work at Hogwarts... (His mother died at the age of 5, his father entered Azkaban at the age of 11, he entered school at the age of 11, was expelled at the age of 16, graduated and joined Ivermorny at the age of 18, resigned and traveled at the age of 19, joined the Ministry of Magic at the age of 20, and joined Hogwarts at the age of 21) (The age may not be accurate). In just 21 years, the protagonist has experienced a lot. It feels like the protagonist's favorite thing is the library (the library of each school). The protagonist is very qualified as a professor and is very good. Very attractive. I couldn't stop at all and wanted to keep watching.

The current progress is that the story is perfect, and I am not overly involved in Harry's plot. I hope to keep a distance from the protagonist and be a guide. Don't be a nanny. And for now, the protagonist and the old bee camp are in a confrontation mode. This is good. I hope it can be maintained. Don't have a happy ending. No one deserves to die.

This is the best HP fanfic Tomato has ever seen. The writing style is amazing. The calm and sharp portrayal of the protagonist impressed me so much, especially as a Ravenclaw student's pursuit of knowledge, and unlike those overbearing protagonists with invincible backgrounds or golden fingers, the protagonist of this book has truly achieved graceful satisfaction (what am I describing), and has made great strides on the road to justice and change. Moreover, the protagonist does not know the plot, which also gives a good perspective and extension. It's also the best portrayal of the original characters I've ever seen.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! The article written in large letters is one of the few I have seen among the many articles written by HP. It is about criticizing Dumbledore, and the original character is not the type who is often OOC! ! And when the protagonist was fighting Dumbledore, I really enjoyed watching it [smirking] Every highlight point after the protagonist was also very exciting. Although it was a bit frustrating when I first watched it, it was also very reasonable, and the protagonist quickly developed his own advantages. Without further ado, just watch it, and no one will say anything after watching it. Ps: I'm really not trusting you, I'm really not trusting you, I'm really not trusting you. Say important things three times. Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people.

A very good fanfic, the character of the protagonist is well developed, I like this kind of rational and cautious one. The rating of 8.8 Is too low, it needs to be at least 9.5. The low-scoring comment section said that the protagonist is powerful but useless. If you like to watch mindless movies, you can go to Tomato and click on a male video. The protagonist has to be jealous from the beginning and kill everyone who comes. Then what's the point. Author, please continue to work hard. It can be seen that DaDa has had an outline plan. It is very beautiful. Don't care about the opinions of those who give low scores (can it be updated more than once a day? Two chapters are too few and not enough to read). By the way, if a physical book is published, I will definitely support it. Please give me a kick and thank you (I will also support DaDa's self-printing group). [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The writing is very good, but most people find it hard to appreciate the coolness of it, or there is no coolness at all. But while watching, I would imagine all kinds of slap-in-the-face, crazy, and domineering scenes. Of course, according to the character of the protagonist, this will not happen. He is calm and elegant, just like my favorite knife. It is extremely sharp but people can't help but touch it. But at the same time, he is extremely gentle, which makes me feel comfortable. It seems that yes, this is not weakness, but a special kind of courage and tolerance. Of course, as long as the timing is right, I believe that, let alone Snape, even Dumbledore will act decisively without any hesitation, just like going to the toilet without worrying about whether to wear pants or wipe. Such a character image is undoubtedly full, and such a work must be excellent (don't slap in the face)

Come on! Like! ! Although many people say that the characters are contradictory, I think it's okay and don't stop updating! ! ! Want to see the follow-up! ! ! ! I think people are quite complex to begin with, so I quite like the protagonist whether he has benevolent intentions or is ruthless, or whatever.

This book can be rated as 4 stars. Although it is good, it has some flaws. Snape and Dumbledore are OOC and somewhat inconsistent with the original work. Although Snape defends his shortcomings, he cannot tolerate bullying. Dumbledore is not the kind of person who can tolerate such things. This is one of them. In terms of the protagonist's origin and growth experience, he should seek revenge, or resolve the conflict between Dumbledore and Snape through some things. The role of the dean of Ravenclaw should also be reflected, but none of these are the second one. It can be greatly improved. There are no other problems at all. The protagonist's thirst for knowledge and pursuit of truth, as well as the protection of students and teaching them how to behave and grow up, are very attractive to me. The plot is also very exciting. I have made a second creation based on the original work to make the plot richer and more exciting. This novel should be considered a male-oriented novel. Generally, male-oriented novels are very daddy-oriented, and the description of women is completely vulgar. However, this novel has no such problem from the moment I read it to this point. The shaping of the female characters is also perfect, and it is also very suitable for girls to read. All in all, this novel has both good and bad aspects. Overall it's OK. I hope you can seriously consider my suggestions.

The writing is very good, the writing style is very fluent, the storyline is exciting, the protagonist is very charming, he must have strength and strength, IQ and IQ, he must have the power to surpass the Dark Lord, but he has a bottom line and does not act recklessly, he has a clear understanding of love and hate, and he is a very qualified professor.

A very, very good novel, finally a novel that does not just revolve around Harry Potter and the key characters in the play. The plot development of Only One's Own Friends also provides guidance for the main line of spectators. The whole book is logically self-consistent and very refreshing to read. It also unveiled the character behind the halo of the protagonist and denounced many of its unreasonable and laissez-faire aspects. Disclaimer: Don't read Dumbledore's Kitchen, it's a bad review, haha. The only shortcoming is that the work does not quite match the title song, and the protagonist is too invincible. Of course, because it is very well written, there is no problem at all. But based on this title, I thought it would be about the process from prisoner to professor. In fact, it has nothing to do with prisoners. Personally, I think it would be very attractive to write about some of his previous experiences, from hope, discrimination, injustice to fighting back, to being arrested, and then being released from prison and becoming a professor. No need to skip starting invincible mode, haha. Looking forward to the prequel.

Facts have proved that as long as it is well written, even if the protagonist is not familiar with the plot, it can definitely attract readers to read. This book is the best example. The protagonist does not know the plot, but it uses Azkaban to attract and retain readers at the beginning, and then uses the original plot to advance the story gently and without losing rhythm. In addition, with some of the protagonist's own actions, it can be read as a new Harry Potter story. Moreover, the author's writing skills are very solid, and the rhythm of the plot is also well controlled. The key is that the character creation is also top-notch. It is a rare book on Tomato that is enjoyable but does not lose depth. Really highly recommended! Although the protagonist can sometimes be stubborn and egotistical, it doesn't make people uncomfortable to watch.

12. Reading the novel, I saw that I am 34 this year and 22 years old. This is the best Harry Potter book so far. The plot is rigorous, the characters are vivid, the IQ is online, and it is not a virgin. Very excellent!

Well written, so well written, so well written, great!

Very beautiful and well written. One of the cute things about the male protagonist is that he is very arrogant, the inevitable arrogance of a very strong person. The male protagonist stumbled several times on this, and warned himself several times, but he still stumbled later, and later he directly implemented the idea that the strong are invincible (?), Which felt a bit too messed up and did not want to be corrected (my personal feeling). This feature makes the male protagonist very humane, and also makes people suddenly feel that "he is only in his early twenties, still a young man". Suddenly the male protagonist comes to life, adding vitality to the serious invincible career flow. Moreover, the several times the male protagonist stumbled due to his "arrogance" can be regarded as stumbles on relatively small details. Unless he is alert and vigilant, there are probably very few people who will not make the same mistakes as the protagonist (it doesn't even feel like a mistake). The male protagonist is a diligent and good teacher, and he has made just the right changes to the magical world without changing his HP beyond recognition (praise) All in all, it's a cool article, nothing poisonous, no cp, highly recommended.

It's very well written, and some people are really fed up with it. The author didn't even say it was a cool novel, but he still said that the protagonist was a coward. Not all novels are the kind of cool novels that exist just for the sake of pleasure and have no new ideas. If you want to read a cool novel, just leave. What can you say in the comment area? Is it interesting to attack this article with your own biased words? Also, the author has already said that there is no cp. He is a follower, but he is still trapping the two of them together. Don't you think there is something wrong with him? Besides, those who said it was about nannies were funny. Didn't you read carefully? People and Dumbledore have agreed that it is their duty to protect students. It's not like everyone wants to rule the world. I can understand that my life is not good in the real world by reading some cool stories. The key is that the author didn't say it was a cool story, and then I found that it was not to my taste and said loudly: Why is it a nanny story? The protagonist is weak and easy to bully. Don't you feel sick? I suggest the author change it to a female channel and try it, maybe the rating will go up [Blow kiss] Another thing that is really great is that a character with two sides can better reflect his personality. Other Vince Snape is either purely good or purely bad. Only this one reflects his excellence and highlights his character flaws. This is quite good.

It's very interesting, and the main character's character is very interesting. The protagonist always has a cold feeling in the front. In fact, his experience is very heart-wrenching, but occasionally there will be a little playful performance in the back, so cute haha, it reminds people that he is still a very young wizard.

The story framework of this book is not limited to the plot of the original work, but incorporates many of my own ideas into it. The wonderful thing is that these ideas are not obtrusive when combined with the plot of the original work. It allows me to read this book with the idea of ​​"how the protagonist will solve the next plot" and "how the protagonist will develop himself." Although this book also has some shortcomings, I feel that as a fanfic, it has done what it should do, make up for the plot and transform the world. Although the end of the story is quite surprising, I think it is also a kind of blank space. As the ending, the previous foreshadowing was also tied up and the pit was filled. The protagonist in the book doesn't know the plot, so it doesn't have that big an impact on the plot of the original work. From a reading perspective, it's pretty good. You can slowly follow a storyline from the original work. The protagonist is decisive in character, with strong judgment and execution. If you want to read a refreshing novel, you can consider it. It won't be mindless.