HP: Azkaban's Outstanding Graduate

Personally, I think this book is wonderfully written. Finally, a protagonist dares to yell at Dumbledore and confront Dumbledore Snape. How dare you attack the Ministry of Magic blessing collection! It's very spicy! It looks really cool! There is a feeling that I finally let out my bad breath! The fanfics I watched before were so frustrating! And the protagonist didn't have any ambiguity with those children at all! It's simply a divine book! Highly recommended! There is still no heroine yet! No poison! The protagonist is very strong! There is no forced suppression!

This book is great! This is a very thoughtful book among HP fans. The first is a common problem in HP fanfiction - there is no way to balance the famous scenes in the original work or movie with the protagonist's own role, or the protagonist cannot be well integrated into it. But in this book, there is no such sense of dissonance at all. The classic plot of the three little trains meeting for the first time and joining them in discussing the new professor (protagonist) of Hogwarts is passed through simply and naturally. There are many similar examples (Halloween trolls, Harry's broom being enchanted, etc.). It's all handled quite naturally. Also in this book, the protagonist has his own circle, and there are also many impressive supporting characters besides the original book, such as the sunny kestrel and the beautiful and powerful nightingale. Bronze Feather also has many adventures of its own outside of the original. Moreover, in the article here, the original "battle" with Voldemort that occurs every year is ended quite directly and quickly with the intervention of the protagonist (especially the Chamber of Secrets! It is surprisingly fast, and it ends before the Christmas holiday!) The character design of the protagonist is also very good. At first I just thought he was a typical pretentious king. Cold, talkative and powerful, they are all typical characters. But looking back, I saw the tenderness he showed towards the little wizards, his dedication to teaching courses, his humor in front of his friends, and his decisiveness when he was angry. These can very well dilute some of the sense of distance brought about by this kind of persona, as well as the irritability of seeing too much. Make him more alive. The settings in the book are basically all the original content. In addition to the magic spell created by the protagonist himself, there is also the organization Bronze Feather. (But they are all the protagonists, so what's wrong with a little goldfinger! 😎) What I also like very much is that the protagonist basically does not belong to any house. He is a Ravenclaw himself. He was bullied by all Slytherins when he was a student, and Snape hates Snape because of his bottomless favoritism. But in the book, I don't feel the author's partiality at all. Fans generally whitewash some of Slytherin's evil deeds and replace them with childishness or tsundere (the Slytherins in the original novel are actually not very friendly 👍). But here the protagonist (or the author) does not feel at all that there is any deterioration or beautification of any academy. Also a reminder! Snape in this article, as well as the Dursleys and Slytherin, are some of the characters in the movie who are somewhat whitewashed. Everything here is strictly based on the original work 🤦 and be careful to avoid lightning. Overall, it looks good🤩 and feels great [sending my heart] Great author!!! [Please update] Update soon!!! (Although it's already very fast 🤭)

Personal use: A very appealing protagonist. It's a cool article. It has changed all the scenes in the original drama that were endured for the sake of the overall situation, including Umbridge, Fudge, the school board, Rita Skeeter, Lockhart, Aunt Maggie, etc. Especially Rita Skeeter, who instantly melts away in a single face-to-face. It's so satisfying to defeat ten enemies with one effort. Including the confrontation with the principal, I recognized some of his suggestions, but the contradiction lies in Dumbledore's negligence in the position of principal, such as allowing danger, partiality and unfairness, etc. But for underage students, the protagonist is a knowledgeable and good teacher who brings a lot of changes to Harry, Hermione, Ron and Draco. This change is more ideological. One month of confinement and copying a bunch of Muggle social science books successfully opened Draco's eyes to the world, realized the limitations of the pure-blood theory, and actively sought changes. In terms of ability, the protagonist handed over more practical things and opened practical classes. The teaching model is more like that of senior middle school students, with detailed theory and experiments, and the teaching pace is faster if he fails the exam and makes up the exam. In my opinion, the learning content of the original drama is more towards happy education. Although the original work is a story about a young savior saving the world, I still think teenage children should study hard. Although there is no way to do it due to fate, it is best to take over the burden that adults can take over. A lot of the hardships that Harry suffered in the original show were unnecessary in my opinion. Before reading it, I checked through the comments to see if there were any surprises. At about 8:00, I thought there would be a lot of low-scoring comments. To my surprise, I saw almost no low-scoring comments... It was only 8.9. It's really unreasonable. The author has a good grasp of the pace. I read more than 180 chapters in one go. If I hadn't come to comment, I wouldn't have realized that I had read so many chapters. Looking forward to the next plot.

The protagonist of this book finally doesn't just follow the main plot, he has his own friends and his own circle. I read this book very comfortably and smoothly. I hope it can maintain this quality forever (I will support you as the author *^_^*)

So far, I am quite surprised by the way this book shapes people. Although the protagonist and Dumbledore are sometimes antagonistic, and he does not seem to like Dumbledore very much, there is no personality distortion/all evil deeds/final boss/White Devil/Dumbledore. There is no radiant personality of Snape and the arrogant young master Platinum Dragon. Instead, the annoying/partialist/bullying professor Snape and the somewhat annoying/bullying coward Malfoy in the original book are more realistically portrayed. The most surprising thing is that this book does not have a pure-blood noble Slytherin or a domineering president. Instead, it has a negative attitude towards Death Eaters and dark wizards. Marvelous.

Very nice. This is my first time reading a Harry Potter fanfic, and the last time I read the original novel was more than ten years ago. So far, the characterization is very fleshed out, and the plot and secondary settings are very appropriate. The protagonist's style and logic of doing things are traceable, and to some extent, some abstract plots in the original work have been re-created or complained about. My thoughts on several main discussion topics in the comment area: The protagonist's style of doing things. From the article, it can be seen that the protagonist is chaotic and kind-hearted, leaning towards orderly and kind-hearted. From the current point of view, dealing with Dumbledore is a confrontation with different paths but the same purpose. For Snape, it was purely targeted but did not rise to a matter of principle. From the many confrontations between the protagonist and Dumbledore, we can see that the protagonist's attitude gradually changes from tough to tougher without overturning the table. This process is consistent with the protagonist's preference for order and kindness, and is strong but not reckless. The few times the protagonist takes action involve opposing positions and principles. If this is considered a turtle, it can only be said to be too urban. Then there's the portrayal of Snape and Dumbledore. When I was a kid, I didn't have any problems reading books and movies. But now that I think about it, it's a game of pure savior, and it's a game of house, one against the other. Snape's image is quite spot-on, with protection, subtle hostility and love. In the original book, Dumbledore did not care about the long-standing bullying phenomenon in the academy. Maybe it was because the old man had more busy things? Personally, I think the kind and enlightened but conservative old wizard in this book is quite consistent with the original work. Then there is a major feature of this book. The various spells of the protagonist, as well as the fairy wand's drinking water that is different from the original book. The description of the wizard battle is very beautiful. The protagonist's various special spells, and the plot of using powerful spells to crush the Ministry of Magic and Death Eaters are very interesting. Summary, can't sleep at night, update quickly Every time I tie it, I will check it out and reread it [laughs evilly] This book is so well written that I can't help it. The first time is July 15, 2025.

The author should know the original work very well. This book is the most rational and objective among the HP derivatives I have read. It will not have some one-sided jokes on the Internet. It is very suitable for the physique of Chinese babies 👍👍👍

If you like it, be sure not to have a CP! (I'm talking about the protagonist, others are random authors 8) The author has expanded a lot of content other than the original work, and the main line Harry and the others used the content of the original work (not a movie, so some people may not know some details). The author also checked the information in some places, and there are no setting problems. One thing to say, if you like Dumbledore, you may want to avoid lightning. Because it looks at Dumbledore's actions from the perspective of non-original protagonists, it criticizes many of Dumbledore's actions, but I think the author's writing is correct. One thing or another, he is a rare Ravenclaw student.

HP classic, as classic as (Hogwarts Defense Against the Dark Arts Professor)! It can be a stand-alone book based on the fantasy wizarding world. Of course, there may be character issues that require you to re-create the supporting characters, but in this book, Miao Miao really depicts the protagonist's personal team with just a few strokes, and perfectly reproduces the shining point of courage that Harry and his friends had when they were watching, adult version. How come it didn't score 9 points? It expanded the obvious line of the protagonist himself, instead of just playing around with the original protagonists in a children's book. It surpassed more than 90% of authors by borrowing the worldview to write their own things.

I think this article is also very good. Although it is not the kind of cheating all the way from childhood to adulthood, the protagonist does not have a deep family. , And from the perspective of the protagonist, we can also see some problems with the decent protagonist group. We are not saying that the characters should be perfect. On the contrary, flaws can make the characters more three-dimensional. Looking back at some places, we can also find that there are actually some hidden campus bullying in Hogwarts. Luna had her shoes taken away, Harry and the trio were ostracized because of punishment, etc. The protagonist did not stand by and watch, let alone ignore it. Instead, he stopped these behaviors and admonished them.