My name is Zhao Ritian. My childhood dream was to travel back in time to ancient times and become a hero. Once I saved a little girl on the road and was unfortunately hit by a car. I never expected that when I opened my eyes again, I found that I had actually traveled back in time to ancient times. However, why did I have such a big insect on my arm? ! !
Reader comments
I read the first eight chapters patiently.
Advantages:
1. Not much information is output at once, at least you can understand what the characters are doing.
2. The pace of elicitation is slow, and unlimited information is not written at the beginning.
3. The funny plot is quite good.
Disadvantages: There are loopholes in some logic. For example
1. Su Yao, who only has a relationship with the male protagonist, will rely on the male protagonist.
2. As a wealthy business family in Hangzhou, the Su family monopolizes the protagonist and Su Yao's store business, why do people still go to their store to buy things? Is it just because I have seen Bai Suzhen and Xiaoqing wearing beautiful clothes?
3. The reason why Shi Potian helped the protagonist. Shi Potian appeared to help the protagonist solve Fahai's dilemma, so why did he help the protagonist? It seems that Fahai is unhappy for some reason.
The main plot is unclear: at the beginning, the protagonist helps the heroine to do business, and then starts practicing spiritual practice. It is not clear what kind of story it is going to tell.
Disclaimer: I am not very interested in the subject of cultivating immortals, so the evaluation may contain subjective assumptions. Finally, I wish the author a great book.
It looks pretty good, but the main plot is a bit vague in the early stages. I hope the author can work harder and write better content.
I read the first eight chapters patiently. Advantages: 1. Not much information is output at once, at least you can understand what the characters are doing. 2. The pace of elicitation is slow, and unlimited information is not written at the beginning. 3. The funny plot is quite good. Disadvantages: There are loopholes in some logic. For example 1. Su Yao, who only has a relationship with the male protagonist, will rely on the male protagonist. 2. As a wealthy business family in Hangzhou, the Su family monopolizes the protagonist and Su Yao's store business, why do people still go to their store to buy things? Is it just because I have seen Bai Suzhen and Xiaoqing wearing beautiful clothes? 3. The reason why Shi Potian helped the protagonist. Shi Potian appeared to help the protagonist solve Fahai's dilemma, so why did he help the protagonist? It seems that Fahai is unhappy for some reason. The main plot is unclear: at the beginning, the protagonist helps the heroine to do business, and then starts practicing spiritual practice. It is not clear what kind of story it is going to tell. Disclaimer: I am not very interested in the subject of cultivating immortals, so the evaluation may contain subjective assumptions. Finally, I wish the author a great book.
It looks pretty good, but the main plot is a bit vague in the early stages. I hope the author can work harder and write better content.