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The plot design is very good, and the characters are also very fleshed-out. There are two small problems in reading it so far. One is that the author is not strong enough and is often led away by the comment area. The other is that gas explosions were abandoned and changed to live broadcast.

Why do Dragon Kingdoms appear in the end of these Holy Grail Wars? This is a deduction item. If I remember correctly, the black bullet should be the setting of the national villain.

It's very beautiful, please give me some suggestions. Regarding the setting of the moon: excluding the servants, the upper limit of the moon in the universe is the planet level. Although various myths and legends boast about it, in fact, the more complete the setting, the higher the upper limit (the upper limit is planet level). The Earth in Xingyue and the outer universe are not the same system. No matter how strong you are in Xingyue, it is still false, but if you are strong in the outer universe, it is real. So for those heroic spirits, don't let them exceed the planet level. If you want to strengthen them, just apply a strengthening patch for the protagonist. Regarding the protagonist: The protagonist is used to substitute, so there must be a protagonist. My understanding of the behind-the-scenes flow is that the other protagonists can be human beings, but the behind-the-scenes flow may not be. Because the purity of the behind-the-scenes protagonist's setting as the author's avatar and the reader's avatar is so high that it is so abstract that it is even possible to discard human attributes and only serve as a doll that provides a sense of substitution. In short, I just prefer those with protagonists. During the game, I can hide for a while, but at other times I'd better show up.

Liangcao, although the writing is a bit clumsy in some places, there are many wonderful points, especially the command spell after the Grand Duke changed the master, which allowed the Grand Duke to perfectly display the name of the Impaler at the end, instead of ending tragically like the original work.

It looks good. The protagonist travels through time and becomes the Holy Grail. Kyubey signs contracts with people from multiple worlds to become a heroic spirit [laughing]

Except for those few heroic spirits that were tossing and turning, the rest I feel fine I thought it was outrageous that the god king Iskandar came out again, and then he actually proposed to Ishtar. It can be seen that the author likes the conquering king very much.

It can be seen that the author has really played FGO. This is an important point. The heroic spirit is not the protagonist's younger brother and there is no god descended from the sky. Most of the characters who appear in the deus ex machina are in line with the human design. Except for the early and middle stages of Black Bullet, it is a bit difficult to collapse, but the ending is handled very well.

The subject matter is very interesting and the writing style is also very good. I hope the author can stick to it and write more Holy Grail Wars [Eating Melon]

This is my first time writing a book. When I read novels before, I felt that I was out of books. I couldn't find what I wanted to read, so I wanted to write one myself. I kept thinking about it, but there was no progress. Until I read that others said that writing a novel does not require a lot of thinking at the beginning, but writing. So, with only a rough outline, I wrote and published it, taking the first step. The shortcomings are obvious, and the writing style is also very immature. But I persisted, and it felt incredible. 5 Points is not an evaluation of the plot, but an evaluation of my persistence. I don't regret taking that step.

Author, I suggest that after writing this, write another one in fsf The Pseudo Holy Grail War, especially the appearance of the servants - Ichigo Twinkle, Enkidu, Youyi Hassan, Qiu Hai, Alexandre Dumas (I The suggestion is to make Officer Megure his master), Apocalypse or even Even Ishtar will appear. In addition, I hope that in the next game, Kazuma and 486 will also become The master and the servants can stage a game (for example, flash Flash) plot of abandoning the Master. Finally, I think the next one is better if Japan doesn't get too upset More, let some Chinese comics (like Ye Xiu in "The Avatar") and a Some foreign characters appear more frequently. Author, you don't need to be subordinate to the followers of the Xingyue World. You can also get other followers, such as the Thieving Demon Lord in "The Great Love Immortal", Eri Uesugi in "Dragon" (I feel that she and 486 have a good compatibility), Gao Yang in "The Lost City of Strange Beasts", etc. In addition, I suggest writing an EVA for the next Holy Grail War in another world. In addition, I suggest letting Shinji Ikari summon the Thieving Demon Lord or Uesugi Eri. In particular, Eriki feels that she can be cured by Kazuma, 486, or Shinji Ikari. If she dies, all three will collapse.

The plot is good, but I still wish that the servants from the game would appear. Original servants feel weird.

Although the writing is a bit shabby, the plot and battles are quite interesting in this comprehensive Holy Grail War manga. In the middle, heroes from other worlds were signed to become Heroic Spirits, which brought new changes to the world. It also made up for some regrets. Becoming Heroic Spirits also brought them new possibilities [laughing]. The battle in the main world is exciting, the protagonist transforms into the Holy Grail and starts the Holy Grail War, stirring up the world. Some of the heroic plots in the comic are quite exciting [laughing], including Siegfried's brilliance and brilliance while still entangled with his wife, Twinkle's love showdown, King Ha's slaying of beasts, my king and Lostbelt Morgan's incarnations falling in love and killing each other, etc. Regarding the scenes of the anime characters, such as the four campus hegemons fighting together, Megumi becoming a candidate for the championship, and Yukino joining the battle without changing her ideals, the subsequent changes in the characters brought by the magical power brought by the wishing world are okay, and the combination is quite good.

Super pretty. I've read a lot of anime. Although I haven't watched it yet, I can add all those anime to it. And there's no big sense of disobedience, it's great. The overall atmosphere is hopeful. They are all doing a good job of saving the world. Good-looking and good-looking. [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] is written very much in line with the overall atmosphere of Japanese animation.

The author's writing is actually pretty good, but I feel like the Holy Grail War doesn't focus on how to eliminate the opponent and obtain the Holy Grail. It's weird to use the Servants to do whatever they want. The official may not be able to deal with the Servants, but it's too easy to deal with the Master.

Not bad, but I feel that the strength of the heroic spirits is a bit subtle, the strength of the big heroes is a bit weakened, and the hundreds of appearances are a bit too strong, in my personal opinion

It's quite interesting. I wonder when the follow-up to Dicuo will be released. By the way, will the author write a song about hell later? There is a UP owner on station B who made a linkage between Hell Song and f go. The plot is quite long, several hours long, and the work is quite good.

The world of despair in the introduction, when will the world be written? I always feel that people in variety shows are complaining for no reason, and those shortcomings are just a small fuss.

It's okay. I feel like it's interesting that the protagonist can occasionally give some characters he likes a little bit of trouble without affecting the overall situation. I mainly hope that the protagonist can occasionally have fun, otherwise it will be boring if it is too fair and impartial. The first volume is quite good.

This book is quite good, so far. How can I put it? Maybe the author has considered some balance issues. Most of the heroic spirits in some Holy Grail Wars are moon-shaped heroes, which is equivalent to a Holy Grail War. Except for the beginning and the 7v7, there are almost only two or three anime characters. This book currently has more scenes of moon-shaped heroic spirits, but there are fewer scenes of other anime heroes.

Highly recommended, very beautiful and wonderful content

It's a very good book. When will there be Rider? The Invincible Rider of the East Rises Again [Sneaky Smile][Sneaky Smile]

It's pretty good, but I remember that some of the Holy Grails turned men into women. What should I do? You are like King Arthur. His historical record is that when a man is summoned, he will be a woman [Thinking] The author shouldn't bring out those anime from the very early era. I don't know them at all. Just make some popular ones, or just make the original version of the Holy Grail. Some of the ones you made are too unpopular. I need to check out the background story.

You can consider adding some American comics [laughing]. Is it comprehensive anyway? Let's create a Holy Grail in New York, and give Command Spells to Big Shit, Captain America, and Hydra. Or go to London to get the Holy Grail and give Harry and the Death Eaters a Command Spell [laughing evilly]

When I finished reading this novel, I was completely absorbed by its magic. Quote! Every word is like a sparkling gem, Shine with the light of inspiration. In the author's writing, every corner The colors are so three-dimensional and vivid, as if they are right in front of my eyes As real as life. The story plot has ups and downs and is exciting. It makes me feel like I'm in it, following the protagonist's footsteps Experience his growth and struggles. I was attracted by love and friends in novels Moved by love and family affection, inspired by the protagonist's persistence and courage Encourage. This online novel is like a beautiful piece of music, calling It aroused my yearning for dreams and hopes, and made me deeply intoxicated by them. , Forgetting the fatigue and worries of reality. Thanks to the author for bringing I have such a wonderful reading experience that makes me immerse myself in the ocean of words Take a swim and feel the true meaning and beauty of life. This network The novel is like a dazzling rainbow, shining with happiness and The light of hope made me feel grateful and bring tears to my eyes. Very Recommended to all friends who love reading, let us sink in together Immerse yourself in this world full of wonders and emotions, and feel the culture Find the beauty of life through the magic of words! (You don't know how to read it) Finished Okay, I haven't even read the AI-generated ones myself)

It's beautiful and interesting. It's the best Holy Grail fanfic I've ever seen. Personally, I feel that the biggest problem with this book is actually a problem with the rhetoric. It just sounds weird. The author should pay more attention to it later, but it is indeed the best Holy Grail fanfic I have ever read.

It looks very good, although there are many problems, but it is still OK.

Yes, it's very good-looking. I want to see more heroic spirits that didn't appear in the original work. Characters like Fadai, Beast Nero, Archer Heracross, Old Sword, Morgan, Enkidu, etc.

It would be nice if his protagonist had a sense of involvement. At least he would play a role of his own.

It's really beautiful. I must write it down.

By the way, has the author ever thought about burying Welfare Lotus? A brave person is very suitable for becoming a heroic spirit, or you can directly turn a brave person into a heroic spirit, or you can drag Flourishing Lotus over to fight the Holy Grail War.