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A bit messy but ok Keep up the good work, things will be fine in the future

There is nothing annoying about the plot arrangement. The writing needs to be improved. The arrangement of the protagonist is also something to consider. In fact, I think it is better to set it up as a person with only a conscious mental body who cannot end up and observes the world.

Well, I dare say that most people are probably attracted by Naruto Honkai Impact. When I saw about 40 pictures, the plot suddenly jumped to another person's memory. I didn't see the protagonist in several consecutive pictures. Although the writing is indeed very good, the problem is that most people are not looking for the protagonist's vest. Come on, not many people will be willing to read it after taking so long, and this is Tomato. Tomato is not suitable for this kind of slow-paced novel at all. Not many people will be able to read it. I hope the author can improve his writing style. I still need to work hard to read it. After all, I haven't received a rating yet, which is a bit worrying. After I finished it, I went straight to the eunuch.

Four stars for encouragement. The writing style of this book is a bit weak, the emotions are too naked, and the psychology of the characters is directly written, which makes the perception a bit lowered. The scene transitions are also a bit hard to write. Moreover, why does the Western Fantasy worldview have Chinese-style names like Lao Li and Lao Liu? There are basically no outstanding points. Logically, it should be given three stars. However, the subject matter of this book is novel, and it depicts me as handsome. I give it four stars for encouragement.

It's very smooth and comfortable to watch. It's smooth and smooth without any irritation, and there's nothing awkward about it either. The characters of Blue Lady and Sister Claire are very attractive, and the descriptions are very graphic and feel like watching anime. Come on~ Finally, even though Lu Ren and Minato knew they meant the same thing, it was a bit awkward. There was a section where the protagonist possessed the body of the previous hero. It was not a direct sexual transformation. This was to develop the subsequent main plot, and then learn the truth about the world through this girl, and then return to his own body. Legendary rescue Wangbo Fengshuimen

Don't cut it

Quite a new type, okay

It's okay, I have something I want to write about, it's quite like a different world in Japan [laughing]

Rating for encouragement

I don't know why, I can't understand it [laughs]

It's okay. I'll give it five stars first, and we'll take a look at it later. By the way, why hasn't it been updated yet?

What can I say, this book is okay. I've looked at it from many angles, but the writing is pretty good. I still have some confidence in this. Overall, it's pretty good.

Okay, okay, now that Watergate is here, I must give you a five-star rating.

The sea, you are all water [pouts]

It's okay, it looks very comfortable.

Not enough. Keep posting.

If the author could change the places that mark AI animation in the front, I believe more people would read it. AI will make people hate your book. I just have a simple suggestion.

Authors with great potential, pay attention to them first

Great, cheers author. There are very few such themes.

The subject matter and content are quite positive, and the writing style is very good. Those who can go up

It's pretty good. There's nothing toxic about it so far. It's combined with barrages and the subject matter is very novel. Please give it a boost, the author, and update it as soon as possible.

Nice! Update soon! ! ! ! This is really not enough! ! ! ! ! !

Beautiful, a masterpiece. It's not the kind of story that's just transferred, the author has something he wants to talk about.

It's ok, but it's just too little. I'll check back in a year [eating melon]