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The protagonist is a miscellaneous fish of the brave team. After being sold by the brave saint, the evil god twisted the cause and effect in order to collect knowledge and became Rorsha The article (I only read Chapter 39) currently has a relatively relaxed academic style. The writing is solid, the plot is refreshing, there are micro-posts (there are really few at the moment, but I like this step-by-step feeling, much better than those that post right from the beginning), there are main goals, the plot advancement and transition are very smooth, and there is almost no sense of stiffness. The protagonist is a living goddess with succubus attributes (Le, Dian). Currently there are An, Lin, Li, and Miss Witch. (Maybe Pei?) The evil god's current presence is not high, and it is mainly reflected in the system. Maybe it will appear when the protagonist explodes. Finally, I would like to summarize this book: A high-quality book about different worlds. It is not so slow but not too fast. If you want to read Tie Tie directly, please wait. Currently, the only one who has Tie Tie ideas for the protagonist is An.

Personally speaking, this book is actually quite good. Let's start with the plot: it's quite rich and interesting, and the protagonist's improvement is steady so far. The protagonist's pretense is not deliberate and quite natural. It's not like a traditional slap in the face. It's more of a concealment, but not excessive (it won't make readers feel particularly red-hot). From this point of view alone, it has surpassed many novels. The setting is pretty good, combining Western Rubik's Cube fantasy, the God of Teeth, and Chinese dungeons, as well as the proficiency system, professions... Furthermore, it is more relevant to real life. It has carved out some typical villains deeply. It has good descriptions of characters other than the protagonist. There are many characters (there are many positive and negative characters), different classmates, different teachers, different social workers, etc. It is not yet clear who the female lead other than the protagonist is... Maybe An Ruolin? ? Then the lily element is more prominent. Although it is said to be a hundred, in fact, readers who read a lot of lily articles don't mind it. On the contrary, it has a sense of astringency (?). The pair of Luo Xia (protagonist) and An Ruolin are probably locked together, and I am looking forward to the future development!! Finally, here are some suggestions: The author's writing style can be a little higher, as long as he doesn't take it too seriously. He can add more abstract metaphors, and some jokes are quite interesting. I hope that Luo Xia (the protagonist) can find some big-money jobs in the following chapters and steadily improve his strength. Then, in the following chapters, he can add more plots in the weird dungeon. Plot, and then reveal some foreshadowing or new functions of the system. The main tasks on the Yaman God's side can be arranged through the system, such as dividing them into main tasks and side tasks, etc., And then there is the arrangement of the protagonist Luo Xia's future identity. I hope the author can show it in a wonderful way in the future (just some personal suggestions) I hope the author's books will become more and more popular (there were only a few thousand readers a few days ago, and today there are 12,000), come on! [Laughing][laughing]

Yes, it is not a cool novel, but it is a humorous description of the entire political situation from an educational (campus) perspective, which attracted me. The protagonist is not emotional, and he is an excellent person who has made good choices. There are no problems with the first few dozen chapters, so I give it five stars.

Bookworm certification

Why did you write these, what is your purpose, who asked you to write, why did you choose these to write, forget about writing and write so little, how can you read it? If you know how to write, write more, otherwise it will be graded five times [laughs]

Stay alive, author! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (｀Δ´)ゞ（｀Δ´)ゞ（｀Δ´)ゞ

It's simple, biased, and the writing is excellent. There are very few descriptions of women's clothing and female bodies, and zero descriptions of female abduction. Western fantasy style from another world + strange invasion, this setting is okay, slow to warm up, the heroine basically completes the system tasks, keeps getting stronger, college style, not much highlights, and there are not many descriptions of Loli's physical appearance.

Overall it's pretty good [eating melon]

It's good-looking and has a growth curve. That's the setting. It's very ironic [laughing]

I really like it overall. The slow pace is a good thing. Many things are written in detail. The world view is also slowly unfolding. Some things such as professional weapons have unique settings. This makes me feel that the world is not moved from elsewhere and is a little more vivid. I really like the character design. I originally read it for the transformation story, but instead of reading the posts, I want to read the thoughts and behavioral logic of two lifetimes of experience. Because I am quite disgusted but not overly so. Immediately after the transformation, I become effeminate, because character creation requires the experience of events and a process, and the necessary ones cannot be omitted. I don't know when I will become a saint, but it is still very good to use posts and other daily activities outside of the plot. Please keep the current rhythm and intersperse it in small amounts and many times. It is not impossible. Finally, this book has strong satire and criticism, which is very good. The author must have experienced a lot in schools, teachers, and even the bottom of society. It is very restored and empathetic. At this time, I was thinking about whether the heroine can change the thinking of this country and its people in the future. It doesn't have to be so unreal as if everyone is united, but just a part, a little bit, can be changed for the better.

Update quickly, update me quickly! Please [cry] As long as you update, I will do anything [cry][cry][cry][adoration]

A great book with a great plot. There are still some shortcomings. For example, none of the characters in the introduction have appeared so far (Chapter 44). This may not be very friendly to people who come for the introduction. But there are still stickers, but they are not the characters in the introduction. Considering that the plot is now well written, I am willing to trust the first-hand author [Chigua]

Come on, author!

It feels good, except that the introduction content is not consistent with the actual situation, everything else is okay

It's pretty good, it can be called high-quality transformation writing. The gentle growth is still interesting, and the world-building is also very detailed. The process of getting to the introduction is probably going to be quite long, so I'm quite looking forward to reading this book.

It's pretty cool, come on! (●°U°●) Tomb sweepingᗜ＿ᗜ（ᗜ‸ᗜ）（ﾉ´д｀）

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The soul is back~ The soul is back~

It's very interesting, but the author seems to have run away.

Objectively speaking, there is no such book in Tomato, so it is very novel.

Very good book, I don't know why the score is so low

Very good, I hope there will be more posts

Author, come back, everyone can do anything [crying]

Support, support, give a five-star support, I hope the author can update it soon

Give me more quickly, give me more quickly, and then give me the last ①⭐[punch]

The writing is okay, and the data should be pretty good, too. Many people are following up on it.

The content of this book is good-looking, and it is currently non-toxic or not very toxic. After all, everyone has their own tastes. The traffic is low because the author writes less. If there are more chapters, the traffic may come.

The writing is very good, ah, why is the update so slow, ah, ^0^, it is a story that changes a rotten world.

Will having a high score increase the probability of being banned? Then I'll change it

It looks great, good luck to the author!