Now That They Are Cultivating Immortality, Who Still Needs to Work?

The story is very interesting But it feels like I'm following two novels at the same time [Thinking] Although the protagonists of the world of cultivating immortals and the original world are the same person, if their spirits have never communicated with each other, they can be regarded as two protagonists. They have just been a little involved in the story of a girl who traveled through time. Next is the transformation story of the original world in chapters 10 or 20. I hope they can be integrated as soon as possible. One protagonist is enough [smiles] It doesn't feel like the kind of story about self-marriage. There is a rich heroine in the original world. However, novels with two male protagonists are quite rare. If you are curious about how it will end, I think it is still worth reading. Add one star It's really good to read, and both stories are good, but it still feels like following two novels at the same time, and it feels a bit disconnected. Every transition was like being forcibly stuck. I was obviously intrigued by Tang Guo's life and death, but the plot was stuck again, and I was forced to read dozens of unrelated plots. The same was true for the world of immortality. It's okay for people like me who read dozens of chapters at once. If you follow the book, you may almost forget the other line after you catch up. —————— Second review, more than 30 chapters of the heroine have been offline, more than 90 chapters have not come back yet, I am in a hurry, my patience is gone [grievance]

Let me give you a good review first. It can be seen that the author has great ideas, the story setting is very novel, and he wanted to write it well. But the shortcomings are obvious. The writing is very green to read. You can understand the plot, but it requires some effort. If all the details are written out, it may seem easier, and of course the number of words will be more. Generally speaking, if you are willing to read it patiently, you can enjoy the plot. There is not much poison in this article yet. Tonic, why is it so cold? It shouldn't be? [Crying] Anyway, the plot of this book is quite novel and the rhythm is good. Although it is a bit messy in some places, it looks good. Why does it feel a bit overwhelming [smile]

To be honest, the writing is really good. It has been a few years since similar books appeared, but this one is still good and very comfortable to read. But there is a small drawback to the reading experience: the double lines are cut too hard. It doesn't matter that the two lines are blocked, but it doesn't matter that the switching between the two lines is therefore extremely slow and abrupt. But don't leave a foreshadowing and then switch threads and write for a long time! (Screaming) How can I spend my time waiting every day? I personally like to watch the reality line, and to be honest, I don't like the immortal line. (And it gives me the feeling that the two protagonists are no longer the same person). After I died and jumped to the immortal line, I waited and waited before changing back. This really brought me too much harm... At least, don't do this before changing the line for a long time. In the long term, a small plot will be completed, and it doesn't matter if you switch quickly in the short term. If I update, I won't be able to overdo it. Anyway, I won't see enough... But the author should do it at his own pace (if he can do it faster, I'd be really grateful) In short, except for the above bad things, everything else is good. [I learned it] Come on, author (｡･ω･｡)

It can be seen from the last book that the author's ability to write about weirdness and ghosts is still online. It's a pity that the last book Invincible started too fast and started to open Wushuang in the middle period, so it lost a little bit of the scary atmosphere. As for this book, the cold storage section is okay, the atmosphere is indeed there, and the current content is still worth recommending as a new book.

It's a good read. It's rare to find a book that suits your taste on Tomato. —————— The writing of this book is excellent, and it is unique in its atmosphere rendering (especially the realistic ghost scene, which is quite dreamy and can evoke some memories from my nightmares). If I want to compare it, it is probably similar to the style of "Apocalypse Forecast" or "The Magician of Clow Card". However, the whitening element of old wine in new bottles and the interesting description of gender change make this article unique. The plot setting is biased toward early novels, with foreshadowing and daily life accounting for a large part, and the explosive points are relatively late. Slow Heat is a bit inconsistent in the current trend, but I believe it still has a market - I would say that the introduction is undoubtedly a drag on this book. I suspect that the author has not revised it since he first wrote the outline. The content of the article and the introduction are not even slightly different, it can also be said to be thousands of miles apart. If it is revised to show the advantages of this article, the results may be much better. The setting of two worlds in novels is not uncommon. For example, the crossing of two worlds and the fusion of two worlds are all well-understood writing methods. It is a pity that this article failed to fully demonstrate the advantages and characteristics of "split protagonist" and "two worlds". Throughout the entire text, there is a sense of separation that is hard to ignore every time the world is switched, as if two novels were forcibly combined into one. In reality, it was especially obvious when the protagonist fell from the bridge. I was still thinking: Huh? What about her subsequent story? But because the story itself is exciting enough, I can still read the somewhat separated "two novels" together (especially the realistic side, I saw the resolution of the crisis in the sea of ​​clouds in one breath, the old-fashioned grass snake gray line writing method, the classic flavor is so right, I can see that the author's outline is clear enough) This separation felt relieved after the two protagonists were able to communicate. However, until the current chapter, the relationship between the two worlds and the conspiracy behind it have not been revealed in full. It is foreseeable that the experience of following up on this book is definitely not good. It belongs to the type of book that should be supported, but the content is very worth looking forward to. I hope I will not be supported to death. But now is a good time to get into the game. The big events on the real side have been solved and the world view has begun to be revealed to readers. Old bookworms guarantee that it is worth a try.

It's coming, it's coming [Shy] It's still a chapter of almost 4,000 words. It's full of sincerity, but it's best to revise it. Don't write 8 years old directly, but look 8 years old. 🍅She seems to be very sensitive to minors. It's a pity that this book shouldn't be what it is now. The first hundred chapters were too fast and I didn't grasp the connection between the two worlds and the rhythm of some plots. Even though I am an old reader, I read it intermittently. The getting better around 200 chapters made me very interested in following it. Come on, author.

It looked ok and I have now read about 70 chapters. Then I skipped to about 170 chapters to have a rough look. Although the two sides are connected, there is a time limit and there are very few exchanges and dialogues. This should be to suppress the combat power and prevent the other real world from collapsing. But it's so uncomfortable to watch like this. It's like I'm following two books at the same time. I updated one for dozens of chapters and then stopped updating, and then suddenly updated another book. As a result, this book updated another seventy or eighty chapters, and then stopped updating again. The sense of separation is a bit heavy, so the two protagonists look like the same person, but not like the same person. I hope that in the future, the two protagonists can understand each other's experiences through the perspective of the soul. Generally speaking, one soul and two bodies are this routine, but here, one soul is divided into two protagonists. I will look at it slowly later. I hope that the two sides can directly open up the restricted dialogue and exchange. Don't impose any restrictions. The transaction volume of Shanhai has already reached the limit.

It's good to watch, but the dual plot is too tortured. I prefer modern plots, but I don't like to jump through them.... Another question is whether the modern and immortal plots are 50/50 or have a slight emphasis.

It's worth a read in the field of transformation literature, and it's not bad without the transformation plot. The urban line is much better than the immortal line. The author is not good enough to control both lines, and the switching is very abrupt. I believe the author's next book will be more exciting.

There are two world lines, and the protagonist is in two parts, one is in modern times, and the other is in the world of immortality. The creativity is quite strange, the storyline is okay, and the reading is relatively smooth. There are many foreshadowings in many places, you can take a closer look. In short, the overall impression is not bad. If there are no big problems in the future, this book is quite suitable to read.

I have only read a little bit of it so far, and the advantages are still very prominent. The narrative rhythm and writing style are good. I can see that it has an outline and world view design. The two lines of the description of the world of immortality (female body) and the earth self (gradient) can attract me to continue reading. This is very rare. There are too many people writing about cultivating immortality, and there is too much homogeneity. It's good to be able to slowly spread out the worldview with traces of conception. The urban plot is also very surprising and does not have the temperament of a novice. The disadvantage is that some settings are a bit unreasonable, such as 1. The sect rating of the ascended master, combined master, and genius master is on the roadside. But this may be because the world view has not been spread yet. 2. It's my most difficult situation: my brother, a laborer, moves goods in the cold storage to provide for his extraordinary sister [face covering]. Although it can be explained in terms of setting and emotional context, it is still a bit difficult to deal with. All in all, the flaws are not hidden, I can still give it a 5-star rating after only reading a little bit, and I will add additional ratings based on the progress.

It's so good that it's not like Tomato's book. The plot runs in two lines and ends with the latest chapter. Except for the transition, the rhythm of the plot in the two worlds is very smooth. The writing is stable throughout the whole process. The IQ of the supporting characters is online and the characters have distinct personalities. I haven't seen such a well-crafted novel in a long time [Like]

Overall, it's good. I'll give it a good review first, and I'll see how the author works in the future~ I feel good looking

It's a very interesting book. The protagonists in the two worlds have their own characteristics, but there are too few interactions with each other, which makes the reader anxious. This is a million words long, and the interaction between the two has just begun. But it's weird. The setting is okay and the writing is pretty good. Why do so few people read it? The tomatoes are cold?

I have read a hundred chapters so far, and I personally feel that this article is like reading two different stories at the same time. Being completely divided into two books does not affect reading at all. The stories are all wonderful The main reason is that there are very few climax points until the first 100 chapters. In the real-life chapter, there is only one red dress at the beginning, but after that it is all water. There are more in the cultivation chapter. Although there are too many psychological descriptions, it is better than funny. It is similar to the anime Spiderman. The conversation between the two of them in the last introduction has not appeared yet. I don't know when the author plans to write it. Not very funny, not very engaging Let's look at the next hundred chapters

It's super good. I don't know why I didn't want to read it before. I stayed at home three times and didn't go into the details. The plot is really good and the flaws are not hidden. Each chapter is large and full. It's the first time I've seen a novel with so many words on Tomato [Blow Kiss][Blow Kiss]

Fortunately, I read the introduction in the comment section, otherwise I would have thought that one or two pieces were missing.

The quality is too good to be a Tomato book. As a book that combines immortality + urban supernatural powers (probably), both worlds have complete settings. As a transformation novel, the psychological changes of the protagonist are described in detail, but there is not too much tension that reduces the viewing experience. A lot of thought was put into the creation of the supporting characters, and it's not just a matter of putting a few labels on them. The logic of the plot is clear, and there are a lot of foreshadowings but they are not buried for a long time, and it does not give people the feeling of The Riddler.

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Not bad, give me a bad review first (cross it out), keep working hard and be reckless~

The master is a god, and his fellow disciples are also gods. The most normal thing is the group of monsters who act on instinct at the beginning.

It's very good, but there are dozens of chapters in between, and there is a sense of separation between cultivating immortality and modern times.

It looks good, but the two worlds are superimposed and the estimated word count is 3 million words. It may not be completed. It's a bit painful to follow the series. It's better to fatten up and read it in one go.

It's such a novel subject matter that I haven't seen before. It's very interesting, but I can't bear to watch it [face covering]. I'm afraid I'll finish it in one go. Come on, author

When I read Chapter 10, the writing and foreshadowing were perfect, the plot was average but the pace was good, and it was full of interesting things to watch. 1. The last book I read in this genre was Yulia from the Golden Kingdom (The Nuclear Bomb Sister) 2. No bad jokes, good writing and rhythm, clear world view, clear protagonist's goals = strong sense of immersion Chapter 11 is also good to watch, eh. It uses supernatural powers to foreshadow changes in the world. The pace will slow down later, so let's keep [grass planted] first

Memory desynchronization is the largest degree.

The story is quite interesting and the writing is not bad. (Excluding the setting of changing to 100, it is basically difficult to get out of the circle when changing to 100)

Good guy, this is the only novel where you need to read the details without reading them. It's really a coincidence [Chigua]

Putting it in a place where tomatoes are the gold mine, this book is well written, the story is interesting, and the characters are three-dimensional, but it is puzzling to me that it is so overwhelming. Perhaps the development of a dual-line story is still too difficult to control. In my memory, I have never seen a novel about a dual-line story alive except "My Rhapsody with Her". I always wait for the one-line story to change lines before reading it, and then continue to read it. I have no choice but to follow this kind of two-line story, and I always feel itchy and uncomfortable [Thoughts] It's like a tonic, meow, you must let me see the finale, meow, I can do anything, meow [crying]

The writing is really good, the plot is very delicate, and the plot is fascinating. It is a rare good book. I will continue to read it.