Zongman: What's Wrong with Me Just Opening a Crystal Palace?

Fortunately, it would be much better if the values ​​were removed. Once the values ​​are written, they will be compared, leaving more room for imagination of combat power. In the early stage, I slashed at Busujima with a knife. The rhetoric and descriptions made people feel too slow. It was better to kill them with one punch. Everyone has seen too many plots in the Book of Revelation. It would be nice to have a brief transition and give Liu Bei more time. Guilty Crown is better, because there are not many people writing it, and even a handyman would have to spend a lot of descriptions to delay time. Personally, I prefer instant suppression, sealing, and instant kill, giving the enemy a sense of helplessness and suffocation, and the enemy's struggling and distorted expression. Zhan Chihong is almost as sinful, and the boldness of his food and sex is much better than in Apocalypse. The feeling of wanting to do something but then holding back is a little less [rolls eyes]

The writing is very good, the structure is clear, and although the strength is not directly invincible, it is also top-notch in every world. I don't leave any ink on the female characters I like, I just accept them when I need to, I'm very decisive. And it's great to be able to bring a girl back to my own world. The only pity is that the score is relatively low. I don't know why. It is recommended that if you like it, you can take a look and don't be affected by the ratings.

It's a classic story about traveling through the heavens. After reading it for a while, I felt it was okay. The author currently has a lot of complaints and introductions, but I can still accept it. By the way, I see that the author in the comment section is quite active [laughing] Can you also say hello to me? Give it 4 stars (a suggestion for future readers, there is no need to focus too much on the details. When reading novels, don't you just use your imagination to make up your fantasies? You can supplement it with your own brain. Few authors complain about and omit details in their articles)

Not bad! At least the protagonist is not a Madonna, nor is she the kind of character with no moral bottom line, with an above-average IQ.

It's neither water nor ink, and the length of each world is relatively appropriate. It's not too short and not procrastinating. It's a refreshing read. In addition, whether the author is interested in writing classics such as fox monsters and monster lists is just a personal idea. The author can just follow his own pace.

The pace is moderate. Although there are many female protagonists, the author tried his best to write out their characteristics. The battle scenes are also very good. The writing is not a novice. It can be seen that the author has a certain skill. It is just that he wrote too little and it is not enough to read. It took more than one day to finish it. Please keep up the good work, author, and update it. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

I feel like we could consider the world of Final Fantasy 7. Don't Tifa, Aerith, and Yuffie look good?

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Give it four stars! The first two worlds were okay, but by the third and fourth worlds, they have turned into monsters. The protagonist has mastered a heaven-defying skill, which is forced kissing. Women who are kissed by the protagonist will fall instantly. Especially when it comes to Fighting to Break the Sky, it is no longer Fighting to Break the Sky, but Kissing Skill Sky, every kiss is a kiss! I haven't watched the following Dragon Ball and Super Seminary, but I think it's almost the same!

Not bad, good, tastes great, wonderful, come on, go, go, go, update quickly

Well, it's okay. Cutting the Crimson Eyes, Esdeath, Leonai, and Romantic Fortress were so beautiful when they died at the end.

I read Chapter 108 in one go because it hasn't been updated yet. My biggest feeling is that the romance novel in another world [likes it] the protagonist is pseudo-invincible and the plot follows the main plot. Then generally follow the protagonist group. Then there is the aspect of love and combat, which is hard to say. It is quite average, which is just a way to relieve boredom by watching love. Give me five stars for encouragement. Remember to update soon

The logic is clear and reasonable and can be read. Not bad, not bad. There are no obvious holes.

You can take a look at the Zhutian series. It has the feel of an early comprehensive comic novel. It is suitable for older readers of Two-Spined Newt. Of course, in today's super-sensitive social period, if the poison resistance is very low, then don't look for a sense of presence. All in all. You must try the harem two-spined salamander Revise the introduction. The author sees it, polishes it, and revise it again. Either two points stand out, or it is lofty to the end, which is more attractive to readers. I haven't read this introduction, so I will show off (I haven't finished reading it yet, and it's before Zhanchi. I hope there will be grand descriptions in the back, and the growth of the state of mind will be the most resonant, but if the writing is not strong, I will become a clown) Shen Lang, who was undergoing an extreme challenge, bound a sudden system. Dead body craze, the end of the world. The apocalypse virus is raging, and the true king has arrived. The revolutionary army rose up and took control of the Teigu. The blood of any king shall end with the sword. A series of adventures, paving the way to becoming a king in blood and fire. In each world, feelings are quietly aroused in the battle and defense. … Shen Lang: Isn't this right? I just want to give every girl a home ୧(๑•̀ɜ•́๑)૭✧

Come on, it looks pretty

Hey, author, what do you do with the protagonist's first love?

It's okay, but can I change it to Chinese comic novels? Except for Dragon Ball, I've skipped chapters in reading the others. Come on. . . .

Great, as a precious metal person, I like to see this kind of thing

It looks good, I love it, and it suits me very well.

When will the author go to the world of Dororo to save Edi Weiyang? [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

Very interesting harem story, a great comparison

The name is correct, it is indeed the Crystal Palace. The author has quite a lot of experience. I think it is quite interesting.

Okay, come on! ! Recommendations for those who like multiple girls in the harem

For the time being, it looks pretty good. If you like to watch more female protagonists, you can check it out. I can't seem to see the author's other works😱

Not bad, not bad, really good

Pretty good looking

Not pretentious, but

Not much to say, five-star praise

Good looking, recommended Boss, when can I write a biography of a mortal cultivating immortality?

Not bad, not enough to watch