My Adopted Sister, She Always Wants to Knock Me Down and Pet Me
我收养的妹妹，她总想扑倒囚宠我
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 236k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
94Reads
94Chapters
11Listens
12.7kReads · all time
The author is great. Although I haven't read it for long, I have gone through the general content. The core of your plot should be written around the "layout", which also highlights the characteristics. However, the male protagonist almost only wants to return to Blue Star, and the emotional drama is difficult to write, so I suggest that the author give it a try and let the male protagonist understand what he is doing. What is the heroine thinking, so that the other female characters can give up. I hope the author will suggest reducing some of the plots between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, otherwise people will say that they are having an affair. Because you, the author, are labeling them as having no harem, then, author, you can go for the pure love route, which can also attract some readers who like to watch single female protagonists.
First give yourself a good review. Do you have any friends who read the book? Which friend often urges you to update? Please comment and let me find you. Is it poorly written? A friend has added a bookshelf. If it doesn't matter, you can tell me. Let me know that I'm really bad at writing.
Come on [Admiration][Adoration][Admiration] By the way, it's a single heroine, I see you wrote no harem in your profile [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
There are few people. It's not without reason. The whole process is controlled by the system [eating melon]
It's pretty good, but sometimes you can't redeem your cultivation level, and the cultivation level is temporary.
It's okay, but the rank gap is a bit big. In the first few pictures, he was a martial artist, and then he became a martial emperor. Maybe I missed it, but overall it's not bad. Come on🤔
It's a pity that there is no yandere plot