Behind the Scenes, I Made up Several Vests to Fight Against Each Other

The writing is quite good, the characterization is quite unique, the character traits of the supporting characters are well written, but the protagonist is not well portrayed. In the previous chapters, the protagonist gave me a feeling of moaning for nothing. When the protagonist comes into contact with women, the cold persona he wants to show is not reflected, but it feels like a dull brother pretending to be serious when he sees a beautiful woman. The plot of the supporting character, the tool man Jia, is quite good.

I'm really convinced. I don't know what will happen to this behind-the-scenes novel in the future, but at least the chapters with less than 50 chapters are really well written. It has a rating of at least 9.2 Or above. I hope the author will update it more. Oblivious to everyone...

There are some poisonous points in the early stage, but from the perspective of the later, I think the author should have his own rhythm. If you treat it as a normal setting later, the poisonous points in the early stage will not be a big problem. The reason why I give the author five stars is because the author's introduction is true. For tomatoes, it is written according to the introduction. It is worthy of praise for selling dog meat without selling sheep's head. Summary: ① There are some poisons in the front, but when you look at the back, you will feel that these poisons are not a big problem (for example, Shen snatches the protagonist's opportunity, which is the protagonist's purpose. Another example is that the protagonist directly exposes the extraordinary to the official. This is because the author has his own rhythm and ideas, and the author just wants to write this setting) ② Those who are attracted by the introduction and can accept the poisonous points I exemplified can rest assured that the author has not made any false propaganda. ③The front part is not only toxic, but the writing style is also blunt and cliché (for example, the protagonist was rumored by Shen (the school beauty) to have an affair with her, but he didn't clarify it. This is indeed quite toxic, so I don't need to criticize it.) In fact, I feel that the character of Shen is not likable, but the author arranged a lot of scenes, so it feels quite toxic. ④ It is recommended that those who are interested in the introduction must read the following (chapters 3 and 40 will do)

Si, eh, it's not bad. [Thinking] It's the first time I've seen this type of writing. It's pretty good. If possible, I hope the plot isn't so awkward. [Face covering] [OK] It's really good. Fvv Beliya, let's have some love and hate [punch] I'm happy to see that person with a guilty conscience [punch] [punch] [punch] [punch] [blow a kiss]

It's okay, each character is relatively distinct, and they consider things from the perspective of their own cognition and known information. Most of us readers are from the perspective of the protagonist. Those characters may be a bit poisonous, but they are not very poisonous. After all, the extraordinary is created by the protagonist. The author shouldn't let the supporting characters lose control (should). Finally, this book has really few words (35 chapters now).

The story is very good, but it's too short and not enough to read. It's very interesting. I want to read it, but I haven't read enough. I really think it's rare to find this kind of male story that doesn't have an ambiguous relationship with other female characters. In addition, the subject matter is relatively new. It's really good to have vests.

This book is really good. It can be rated at 9 or above. There are no poisonous points at present. You can eat it with confidence. I am a 10-year-old bookworm. [Blow kiss]

I feel that this book is definitely one of the best in this genre [Blowing Kiss], and it has some poisonous points. But it all depends on the tomatoes and it's outrageous to still be able to choose. The characters have distinct and full characteristics. I really like it

The subject matter is great, the novel is also very novel and beautiful, but the female vest is very interesting. Because the title has a female protagonist, I feel that the female vest is a bit forced to add drama. Personally, I feel that if the emotional drama is not well written, I don't need the female vest type. Also, Lin Feifan can directly darken Liang's vest when it is offline and make Brother Feifan directly become the biggest villain. It is not easy to write a book. Please support the author with five stars.

The relatively novel subject matter is finally no longer a diary type.

There are a few shortcomings, but the book is indeed a good book. If you think this book is poisonous, you can read it if it has a score of 5 or below. It can be said that there are some surprises everywhere. A score of 7 or above is considered a qualified work, and a score of 9 or above is really too rare. Except for those old books, there are really not many new books.

Compared with those novels that only focus on starting a harem and hugging each other, this novel also has the protagonist's emotional drama, but the protagonist has always been too rational to accept it, and each clone created by the protagonist has its own personality.

He gets two tanks of gas a year and is said to be worried about ghosts. He occupies a parking space when he is free and does somersaults when he is in use. You can't run fast in a straight line, so you have to hit the gas hard in the corners. If there is a pit, go through it. If there is no pit, press the stone. When driving, apply the handbrake. When there is fog, wipe it with your hands. If nothing happens, honk the horn. If it rains, wipe it with paper towels. If you don't drive for a year, you will be blinded if you do. Hello, welcome to the poison practice.

I hope to add a hidden sequence to the protagonist, similar to creation, wishes come true, wishes, and the source of xx. Finally, at the end of the novel, the fantasy is completely turned into reality, and the power of the system is attributed to itself. It can also explain the system as a creation of reverse effects and causes. In the middle and later stages of the novel, I can also write a super Those who originate from the protagonist, then disperse in the world, go through many lives, and return again. The protagonist is fabricated as a person with the same personality and co-existence in the world, or a world creator and an outsider. The latter two require additional settings. I forgot that your protagonist is a time traveler. I hope it will be helpful to the author. In addition, it is unreasonable for the extraordinary to suddenly appear in the ordinary world. This must be strengthened, and the protagonist cannot be distracted by playing so many people, so there must be a sequence that can tamper with cause and effect and change reality. Of course, it cannot be too straightforward in the early stage of the novel. In the later stage, a powerful universal sequence is compiled to fit the rationalization that all extraordinary things come from the protagonist.

I've never seen a book like this in Tomato [laughs]. The characters are all quite intelligent, so those who haven't seen Dragons should not hesitate to read it. Also, the author's writing style is a bit immature, and there are traces of AI in the text, but it is still ranked high on Tomato.

Well, it's quite interesting. I've read more than 30 chapters, but I've read a lot of similar articles like this, and many of them are either unfinished or cut off. I hope the author won't be like this. ? ? 9? Isn't it over? Why do I feel like there's still something good left to write? ? ? ? Is this a bad ending?

It doesn't count behind the scenes, but it's about compounding my love for the city, supernatural awakening, and creating supernatural powers. Personally, I prefer this type. The heroine is a little bit toxic, but it just makes sense and I don't want to read a novel that's too cerebral. Novels are what I use to relax. They require me to be very immersed in the plot and very tiring.

I came across this a year ago and saw more than 20 pictures of 20, 30 and 40. I don't remember how many I saw. I suddenly thought of this, and then I started reading again from the first chapter and saw this one. (๑•.•๑) Author, you are so beautiful following this

It's very pretty, so pretty, I even thought of a vest halfway through it.

I can be considered a veteran who started chasing after the first few pictures, but the forced completion later caught me off guard. I originally wanted to drop it to three stars, but except for the forced completion at the end, everything else was pretty good, so I didn't change it.

It's okay, I like it very much, I just like the way others don't get the protagonist [laughing] It's better to write it more tragically, where only the protagonist dies in the end [laughing]

Duel ranks among the top five in the behind-the-scenes articles I've read! Real! I guarantee three thousand hours of reading experience. It's just that the author's updates are too slow, and the donkeys in the production team don't dare to take such a rest.

There are relatively few books on the same track [please update] and they are very competitive. Please keep writing.

The new book feels pretty good, as long as it doesn't collapse later.

Nice! ! ! Not bad! ! Totally not enough👀👀👀👀

It looks good, it looks good, it's super good. I love this kind of writing so much. Su Li's vest character is so great (✧∇✧) This is my first time watching this plot. Come on, the author, please add more!

Reward! This novel is quite good, but the shortcoming is that there are too few chapters, and the description is very light. It could use a little description of the environment, which is probably about the same quality as those in junior high schools. In this way, the book should be great. If you add more fighting and describe it casually, the book will be even more popular because the setting is more exciting.

The writing is pretty good, and the plot isn't that toxic.

I found another book that I can read, and I couldn't help but hum happily in my heart.

It's so good that I loved reading it and I finished it in a while. The author will update it soon [Sending my heart]