Lin Xuan had finally managed to ride the wave of the times and start his own company. Then he dozed off at his desk, opened his eyes, and found himself transmigrated?
“Host, I picked the wrong book! I’m so sorry! I have to grab my bucket and run! Take whatever you want from the System shop, just don’t let the Heavenly Dao catch you. I’m out of here...”
The System vanished at lightning speed before it could finish, leaving Lin Xuan dumbfounded.
He happened to rescue a little girl, Liu Yiyi, on the road, only for her to cling to him afterward.
“This time around, I’m going to live it up!”
But Lin Xuan had the feeling that something was always getting in the way of his grand plan to live it up this time around.
Then little Liu Yiyi spoke in a soft, forlorn voice.
“One heart, for one lifetime.”
With a metallic ring, a blade slid from its sheath.
Lin Xuan had his hands and feet bound behind his back, bent over as Liu Yiyi approached with red-rimmed eyes...
The writing is very good, the characters' emotions are very delicate, the whole book is like a broken mirror, every fragment is amazing, but it is difficult for me to put all the fragments together into a complete scene 👍
The descriptions are delicate, the emotions are sincere, and the yandere is developed step by step. Good-looking and good-looking (◍•ᴗ•◍)
It's not bad, but one new book every day is a bit uninteresting. 🥺 🥺 🥺
Very good, slightly different from other yandere novels, the plot is smooth, the rhythm is tight, and the emotional description is delicate 👍
It's okay if you don't do anything poisonous. I can't wait to see the little black room when. I'm afraid of the mental state of the sixth author [awkward laugh]
The writing is average, but there are no obvious poisonous points, the main line is clear, and it is pure love, which is good
It's very reasonable, and I feel like the male protagonist has been screwed. A very unique novel. Now, if you look at it from the perspective of cultivation novels, it feels a bit in line with the core values of socialism? Cultivators are not aloof, indifferent immortals, but flesh and blood and full of emotions like mortals; there are not many plots of intrigue and intrigue, and they look very comfortable. Judging from the yandere novel, the emotional changes of the male and female protagonists are also very well grasped, and the female protagonist's yandere performance is very reasonable. I can only say (I like it very much anyway). Although it is a yandere novel, from the perspective of cultivation novels, the novel highlights the beauty of human nature and can be considered a breath of fresh air in the cultivation world, hahaha. There are some parts of the plot that are not very clear, such as the part where Liu Yiyi seeks out Lin Xuan, and what kind of authority comes from it. Although it does not affect the overall perception, if you want to go further, such as making an anime or something with a clear plot, wouldn't it be better?
Such complex emotions, I can understand...
Not bad, just asking if there is a knife 🤔
The writing is okay, it's my favorite type, but sometimes it's rainy and foggy. I hope the author will continue to work hard.