I Saved You, Raised You and Taught You, but Ended up in a Dark Room

The writing is very good, the characters' emotions are very delicate, the whole book is like a broken mirror, every fragment is amazing, but it is difficult for me to put all the fragments together into a complete scene [Like]

The descriptions are delicate, the emotions are sincere, and the yandere is developed step by step. Good-looking and good-looking (◍•ᴗ•◍)

It's not bad, but one new book every day is a bit uninteresting. [Grief] [Grief] [Grief]

The writing is average, but there are no obvious poisonous points, the main line is clear, and it is pure love, which is good

It's okay if you don't do anything poisonous. I can't wait to see the little black room when. I'm afraid of the mental state of the sixth author [awkward laugh]

Very good, slightly different from other yandere novels, the plot is smooth, the rhythm is tight, and the emotional description is delicate [Like]

Such complex emotions, I can understand...

Not bad, just asking if there is a knife [Thinking]

It's very reasonable, and I feel like the male protagonist has been screwed. A very unique novel. Now, if you look at it from the perspective of cultivation novels, it feels a bit in line with the core values ​​of socialism? Cultivators are not aloof, indifferent immortals, but flesh and blood and full of emotions like mortals; there are not many plots of intrigue and intrigue, and they look very comfortable. Judging from the yandere novel, the emotional changes of the male and female protagonists are also very well grasped, and the female protagonist's yandere performance is very reasonable. I can only say (I like it very much anyway). Although it is a yandere novel, from the perspective of cultivation novels, the novel highlights the beauty of human nature and can be considered a breath of fresh air in the cultivation world, hahaha. There are some parts of the plot that are not very clear, such as the part where Liu Yiyi seeks out Lin Xuan, and what kind of authority comes from it. Although it does not affect the overall perception, if you want to go further, such as making an anime or something with a clear plot, wouldn't it be better?

I feel like I'm reading an outline

It's really good, I really like it

Is the author a cat? [Sinister smile]

I want to see the dark room, hurry up

Very well written, very enjoyable to read, I finished it in one go

The writing is okay, it's my favorite type, but sometimes it's rainy and foggy. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Pure love and cultivating immortality, I've seen Chapter 14

Overall, it's very good, but the pace is a bit slow in the early stages, which makes it look a little uncomfortable.

Haokan, come on, Haokan