When Li Erfeng Randomly Drew the Luan Bird Space Carrier

Emmm, this kind of subject matter is generally a cool genre, so for ancient people, such an outrageous situation can be easily transitioned. The subject matter is quite good, but I personally feel that the items and cognition brought by the protagonist are too flat, without a feeling of ups and downs, and the things the protagonist gives them are also very flat. Just accept it if you are quiet, these are common problems in most Shuangwen and it is not too difficult to accept, but the style of getting along is very... How to say, it is a group of people eating and taking, giving the protagonist whatever he wants, and then behind their backs they are all thinking about how to control the protagonist, this walking treasure house, and the emperor also wants to conquer her! ! I can't imagine that if the protagonist is really a great beauty, they will just ask the emperor to make her a concubine. It's scary to think about it. Asian elders are indeed very strong, and it is normal for modern people to worship them, but there is no need to write like this. It has almost been written into romance novels. If you want to help your ancestors change history, you can use modern knowledge or be in line with that era. Unfold the items you are wearing little by little. Don't go too big and your crotch will be torn. (The above are all personal opinions. If you don't agree, don't comment. Thank you.) Finally, author, you have great courage and perseverance. At least you dare to write it yourself. I haven't had the writing style to try to write it since I read novels in junior high school. I have great courage and keep practicing. Come on, author👏

This is the worst article I have ever read. I was really hungry, so I wrote it myself (๐•̆·̭•̆๐), and I was asked to write a review of at least 100 words for myself. In fact, I just want to make my own life more joyful. If it can also bring a little difference to the lives of some treasures, then that will be even better. It's my first time writing an article. I'm afraid I won't be able to stick to it, so I started posting it after I finished it, so I can rest assured that it's stabilized now. I'll update one chapter each at 6 a. M. And 6 p. M. Without any surprises, which is more than 4,000 words a day (#-.-). I have abandoned many familiar things described in detail in time-travel articles. After all, they are things to please myself. So, what would happen if you went back in time? I have already opened the next book, and there is not much room for changes in this book. Please be gentle! Thanks for all the gems! Remember to use your little hands to get rich, pay attention, remind updates, and generate electricity for love for free, the more the better, thank you

It's a very interesting dog licking article, you must read it! ! ! [Stare]

Looks good! What a novel setting. The heroine wears the Tang Dynasty but still has no cp. It hit my head. The heroine is so handsome! Everyone in Datang is so cute! [Sending my heart] I would like to ask you, is this a full-length novel or a medium-length novel?

It is much better than the novels I have read before about time travel to the Tang Dynasty. Li Shimin did not force the time traveler to surrender to him as soon as his tiger body shook, the queen did not treat the protagonist as a junior and suppressed him, and the minister did not use force to be worthy of beating him.

A good drama that respects the ancients, it has the feel of a Qing Dynasty palace drama from the Tang Dynasty.

Super pretty! ! ! The heroine's double business is online, and she writes about the Erfeng in my heart! ! ! Love Erfeng so much! ! !

It's nice. I always like to see this kind of stuff. It's very nice [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It is a particularly beautiful book. You can see the collision of ideas and the impact of technology on social progress. The characters are likeable, the plot is complete, and it is a pleasure to read.

Very good and beautiful

It looks great. Keep writing!

Very good, well written

I love it so much, the subject matter is novel, the heroine's character is well-developed, and the plot structure is very good. Like it

It's really good-looking. Don't stop updating it. It's too good for my taste. I recommend it.

Novel genre and appropriate logic

Look good @

Nice! I feel pretty cool ~

The writing is smooth and there are no surprises so far.

It's pretty good, come on