Quick Travel: the Cannon Fodder Did a Good Job and Defeated All the Male Protagonists.

The writing is crisp and the narrative is clear. Although I think words like "parents" and "men and women" should only be spoken by negative characters or unawakened characters, narrators and positive characters should use "mother, father," "woman, man," etc. But the shortcomings do not hide the good points. The author has given the female characters a sound personality and the ability to stand up. They are no longer pale dolls under the male gaze. Thanks to the author for his creation and looking forward to his new work. I selfishly hope that the detailed text can be more "equality between men and women" instead of the usual "equality between men and women."

I like it very much. There is no male subjugation. The heroines finally get what they want. A few suggestions, such as men and women. It would be better to replace these female-oriented vocabulary.

Overall, it's pretty good. The one minor flaw is that I think the progress of the plot may be too slow, and some scenes of contact with men could be reduced. Now that the heroine has a new job number, and her force level has become higher, I hope that in future books, things related to men can be solved more quickly, and that the space can be more focused on helping women (a personal personal suggestion). I hope that the next book will be longer, and it will definitely get better and better.

The writing is quite good, and the camaraderie between women helping each other, as well as not deliberately beautifying a certain male supporting role, are very good. It is this system and the Chuanshu team behind it that makes me wonder. Although the system claims that it is gender neutral and has no obvious gender divisions, every move he makes behaves too much like a man. I will temporarily use the term "male" to describe the system. Although it was said at the beginning that some of the comments about this system were based on the comments of some people in the comment section of this book's world, after seeing the true face of some of the male protagonists, he still felt distressed and even blamed the female protagonist for being cold-blooded. Although I know that standing in the absolute middle on an inherently unbalanced seesaw means leaning towards one side, I still feel that the underlying code of this system comes from a transmission team that is not so affectionate, and is more like copied from the AI ​​of ordinary society, with private goods included in it. If this fast-traveling team really has this sense of mutual assistance, then the resulting system should not have this character. So does he have any growth potential? Although I know that awakening consciousness may be a long process for AI, he is already quite intelligent. Now he still only says some inexplicable male-biased words. After knowing his true face, I still feel sorry for the male protagonist after witnessing the male protagonist trying to push the female protagonist into the sea. I'm so speechless. I'm not sure how this system is positioned in the text. He even made me doubt the book threading agency in this article. The more I read it, the more it seemed like a scam. So have you set the system to grow? If not, then why is he so anthropomorphic? The image setting of this system affects my reading experience too much, so I will deduct 1 point here. Of course, if the follow-up book-traveling organization was originally a big conspiracy and the system itself was crooked, then I didn't say it.

It's super, super good-looking. Many of the plots written by the author are very attractive and interesting. There are also many cute babies. I really love it. I don't understand why the rating is like this. Anyway, it's good-looking! No shortcomings except being short Posted on September 29th, the second time, it still sounds good. I feel that people are still too superficial about loving their daughters. Those who write about forced love with a bright and upright wife are generally praised. It is not easy for someone who is truly sane to be given a negative review. The author's less precise control of vocabulary is also to take into account the perception of ordinary readers. Besides, there is no plot to humiliate women, right? Really not worthy of this rating

It looks good, but it doesn't last long. Note: This article is not female-oriented. It should be suppressed first and then expanded (that is, there is content about women enduring hardships, but the author has brushed it off). There are no words that insult women, and many words have been modified, such as jealousy being changed to jealousy. Very excellent novel.

It's very interesting. The characters in each story are very real. It's reasonable for them to make corresponding choices. The original heroines of each story have their own characteristics. They don't abuse women or humiliate women. They have very upright views. It's really worth recommending [Sending Hearts]

The writing is really good. The plot is very smooth and the characters are very vivid. The girls are all super good. Each baby has its own growth. The heroine is gentle and firm, like the afternoon sunshine. How to describe it, but I really like it), I like this book very much, but it is too short and not enough to read. I hope the author will write more ❤️❤️❤️ (please forgive me for any inappropriate wording when writing a review🧎‍♀️🧎‍♀️🧎‍♀️)

Is this book maliciously rated by a wife and a man?

In fact, it should be 9 points, but this option is not given here. The plot is pretty good, it's a love story, it's the kind of story where you solve problems by your own strength. There are some logical problems in some places, but it's acceptable.

As a novel about love for women, there is nothing bad about it. As a novel, it is slightly lacking in plot design and connection. There is no problem with the writing style. It does not seem too streamlined or stagnant. The concept is also good. The overall direction is good. The faults are not hidden, but it is a little short. However, the author's attitude of preferring to end the story rather than writing is greatly praised. I look forward to the author's next book [Blow Kiss]

It's well written and has few story bugs. It's a refreshing read that doesn't feel boring, and it doesn't use too many cheats to affect the viewing experience. Moreover, there are too few good books like this that rarely describe the appearance of female characters. Overall, it's worth reading.

It's very interesting. The author is very sympathetic to her characters and treats the original heroine very well. Although the villains have made mistakes, they also portray their good sides. They have flesh-and-blood love and hate, and the characters feel more fleshed out. Secondly, a very important point is that the author did not put any effort into insignificant male characters, which is better than many books! Support the author to continue writing new books

A very good article, a new sprout that breaks out of the stereotyped setting. It's relatively short, but I also understand the author's desire to stop the article when it's still unfinished. I'm looking forward to the author's new article, so I must keep writing it. [Cry][cry][cry][cry]

The characters seem to be living in reality. Female videos just want heroines!

It's a pretty good article, there are no insulting words about women, the important professions are all played by female characters, the protagonist punishes evil and promotes good, and the heroine of the plot is also very up to date. It's just that I always write about sadistic moments that make me cry, and it's a bit uncomfortable to watch.

Nice! It's all torture anyway, and it's much more interesting to torture the male protagonist than the female protagonist.

The writing is superb, the plot and the characters are well designed. This article is very good in all aspects. The only shortcoming is that it is short and not enough to read. I have already followed it. I like to see the author's new work soon. I have already taken a screenshot and posted it to Moments 🍠. I would like more people to read this good article. Nice looking, second brush

It's a good book, but it's a little short. I haven't had enough of it yet.

The writing is very good. When I read those sadistic and male pornographic articles before, I felt that these authors claimed to love the female protagonist, but in fact they always tortured the female protagonist. They just kept enchanting the male protagonist. This article saves the female protagonist very well, so that they can return to the life they deserve and get everything they deserve, not just a stepping stone for the male protagonist. But why is it so short? Angry, it only has three worlds. I read it in one go and I didn't see enough.

I love reading it. I hope the author won't finish it too quickly and write more worlds.

It's quite good to watch. Although it's very short, the plot is quite coherent. There's no brainless vicious female supporting character, and there's no Kurohara heroine. The positive and supporting characters are basically women. Even if there is a female villain, they won't be completely vicious. They will have a little conscience and won't be very disgusting.

The pure heroine has no cp, the women help each other, the original heroine is also very good, the shortcoming is that it is too short.

The original male protagonists and male supporting characters who committed crimes against laws and disciplines were all solved by the female protagonist. The original female protagonist and female supporting characters were given a new life with the help of the female protagonist. The whole story was very satisfying, first using theoretical and legal means, and then using force. There is no part about breast hyperplasia. The plot logic is realistic and normal. The shortcoming is that it is too short [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Very good, very good! Help a heroine take back the story that belongs to them. There is no competition between women, and the mutual help between women is very well written! Looking forward to the next book! !

I hope Tomato can have more authors and novels like this, and realize that the women who write about women are women. I don't want the women written by female authors to always be abused by male protagonists. Taking the pen in your own hands should give women in the small world more possibilities, instead of all kinds of artificial female suffering, and women unite instead of dividing each other.

I don't know why the rating is so low. It's a very interesting novel and I love girls. There's no other problem except that it's too short and I can't read enough!

Yes, the values ​​that the author wants to express are basically stated at the beginning. Simply put, it is women helping each other. Although it is not flawless, it still has to be affirmed. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Although there are not many words, the story line is concise and smooth. There is basically no nonsense in the three worlds, and they preside over motherhood in classic female abuse novels. The heroine is also ruthless and doesn't talk much, and she feels happy online. I finished it naturally, it's a great read and I highly recommend it!

It's very interesting to watch. The protagonist shares the same uniform with the heroine of each world. The writing is emotionally delicate and the protagonist's character is very empathetic. I haven't seen it in a long time. I love my daughter, complaining about the romanticization of criminals/criminals and the excessive glamorization of male characters in anti-human literature. The female characters are called "boys" and the male characters are called "boys", including the use of "jealousy" instead of "jealousy". It can be seen that they are avoiding the use of sexist words, but I still have some suggestions. For example, "vicious" can be changed to "evil", the author, please give it a try!