Become Toneri and revive Lin at the beginning. (Naruto if, changed some plots and settings. Newcomer, thanks for watching.)
The timeline will jump directly from the Battle of Kannabi Bridge to a period of time after the beginning of Shippuden at the beginning.
Make changes to the original plot.
Early main plot: The protagonists join Akatsuki, get close to Fei (Obito), kill Danzo, and let Lin and Obito recognize each other.
Romantic line: Lin and Obito will become lovers, and there will be a happy ending.
The protagonist Liang Yuan will develop a romantic relationship with Xiaonan in the early stage. (This world is set to have friendship between Konan and Yahiko)
Ray:
At this point in time, Obito already has a lot of lives on his hands. This article is inclined to forgive Obito and allow him to atone for his sins to a limited extent. (Be careful to avoid lightning!!!)
Also, the main perspective will be on Lin's side, the original characters will be a bit outsider, and the length will be less than that of Lin. (Also protect yourself from lightning!!!)
Danzo must die;
Neji lived from beginning to end.
I'm a newbie, my writing is poor, so please forgive me, I'm mainly interested.
Reader comments
Naruto's character is slightly separated from the original work, as is Obito's character. The protagonist's character description, detailed description, and emotional drama description are not clear enough. The protagonist's ability comes from Toneri, but except for one Ginlun Reincarnation, no other moves are seen, but the puppet technique is used to make up for the regret. The method is too rigid. After the shortcomings, let's talk about the advantages. The regrets make up for most of it. Although the description of Lin's strength is not clear enough, the gentleness is written. It's not bad. Although it's not as good as my two favorite books, I love Lin, so I give it a five-star rating [Sending my heart]
I finally found one. This is the kind of Obito I want to read. Instead of traveling through time and becoming Obito, there is an indescribable feeling that seems quite uncomfortable.
Author Kedai Lin
we are friends
Come on!
Teacher, you are my god
A good book, with a compact plot and enjoyable reading. Take Lin Dang to charge with confidence. The author should be careful not to get banned. There are several books on my bookshelf that have been sealed.
Suki! After a night of catching up, you can clearly see the author's great progress. The writing style has made breakthroughs and evolved so fast. I really like the author's portrayal of Dai Lin. How can these two people get along so sweetly~~~ I am so happy eating sugar!
Dailin fans really recommend watching this
It's really great to be with Lin Dang. It's the only one that suits my taste. Come on, author, don't give up. I will always support you [blowing kiss][crazy]
The plot is good and the author has quite a lot of imagination. I don't understand why no one is watching it.
Not bad, I feel very good, at least it is mid-range among the many Naruto movies I have watched. Keep at it, I believe more people will come to watch it. Keep at it and don't give up.
This book is so good, I finally found the excellent Dai Linwen😁😁, I hope the author can keep reading, come on😘😘
Okay, it looks good [like]
Super pretty, okay?
It's really beautiful
A very good novel
Looks good, Sasuke said Kirin in front of Obito
I like it so much that I'm addicted. If I don't look at it for a day, it looks like there are ants crawling on my body.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! Bring Lin Niufu! Do not accept refutation [admiration] [admiration] [admiration]
Not bad, I quite like it 👍
I don't know, my figure is very graceful
Super nice. Dai Lin and Dang Lin are not weak either.
Naruto's character is slightly separated from the original work, as is Obito's character. The protagonist's character description, detailed description, and emotional drama description are not clear enough. The protagonist's ability comes from Toneri, but except for one Ginlun Reincarnation, no other moves are seen, but the puppet technique is used to make up for the regret. The method is too rigid. After the shortcomings, let's talk about the advantages. The regrets make up for most of it. Although the description of Lin's strength is not clear enough, the gentleness is written. It's not bad. Although it's not as good as my two favorite books, I love Lin, so I give it a five-star rating [Sending my heart]
I finally found one. This is the kind of Obito I want to read. Instead of traveling through time and becoming Obito, there is an indescribable feeling that seems quite uncomfortable.
Author Kedai Lin we are friends Come on! Teacher, you are my god
A good book, with a compact plot and enjoyable reading. Take Lin Dang to charge with confidence. The author should be careful not to get banned. There are several books on my bookshelf that have been sealed.
Suki! After a night of catching up, you can clearly see the author's great progress. The writing style has made breakthroughs and evolved so fast. I really like the author's portrayal of Dai Lin. How can these two people get along so sweetly~~~ I am so happy eating sugar!
Dailin fans really recommend watching this
It's really great to be with Lin Dang. It's the only one that suits my taste. Come on, author, don't give up. I will always support you [blowing kiss][crazy]
The plot is good and the author has quite a lot of imagination. I don't understand why no one is watching it.
Not bad, I feel very good, at least it is mid-range among the many Naruto movies I have watched. Keep at it, I believe more people will come to watch it. Keep at it and don't give up.
This book is so good, I finally found the excellent Dai Linwen😁😁, I hope the author can keep reading, come on😘😘
Okay, it looks good [like]
Super pretty, okay?
It's really beautiful
A very good novel
Looks good, Sasuke said Kirin in front of Obito
I like it so much that I'm addicted. If I don't look at it for a day, it looks like there are ants crawling on my body.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! Bring Lin Niufu! Do not accept refutation [admiration] [admiration] [admiration]
Not bad, I quite like it 👍
I don't know, my figure is very graceful
Super nice. Dai Lin and Dang Lin are not weak either.