Wishing System: Make a Wish to the Goddess Fellow Practitioner at the Beginning

The writing is very good. If it had been written ten years ago, it might have been a new platinum movie [laughing]. The pace is okay, a little slow for the current mainstream, but it is still good. I think the author's portrayal of the simplicity of human nature is one of the highlights. Attracting so many real people [laughing evilly]

It was a popular thing in the 2000s. Now people may not like this kind of "rapist" protagonist too much. This part will dissuade some people. However, the progress has accelerated later and the protagonist has begun to pretend to be cool. Besides, how can this kind of setting not have the plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger and getting slapped in the face [sneaky laugh]

Not recommended. But overall it's okay, just a little bit toxic. You can still read it if you are in a book shortage. When I saw Chapter 17, the plot was so classic. The protagonist sees a new junior sister practicing kung fu (she is a royal princess, and she has joined the clan leader's sect. Ps: the protagonist has killed the clan master's son before). Then, he gives her instructions and pretends to slap her in the face.

The writing style of this book is good, the author does not look like a newcomer, and the writing is a bit like a certain book. The hook setting is also good. There are no mindless creations of the void. The protagonist can achieve his wishes in a reasonable way through causal tampering and divine induction, without being too abrupt and blunt. However, the setting of martial arts is relatively stingy. The names of the realms and techniques are very loud, but the effect is not satisfactory. It can be regarded as a fantasy floor tile. Warriors cannot fly in the air until the fifth realm. Moreover, the life span of warriors in the first five realms is seventy or eighty years, and the seventh realm of immortality is only two hundred years... As for the protagonist, there is not much to stand out. A lucky guy who can cheat, at least dares to fight hard, is low-key and tolerant, and wants to show off at the same time. It feels a bit like being cheap and good. The three female protagonists mentioned in the introduction have also appeared. They are all good and have their own characteristics. They give people a good impression. I wonder if there will be more female protagonists in the future... Well, the current score is 6.2, Five stars to improve the score. Don't be discouraged, author. Come on [top post]

The treatment of multiple women and the description of the emotions between men and women are just right. The male protagonist is not described as a succubus. At the same time, the protagonist is not the kind who is extremely smart in other things and is like a wooden block in controlling the development of the emotional line. The description of the emotional line is not perfunctory. The rhythm is just right so far, which makes me feel comfortable watching. In terms of character description, not only the protagonist, but also the supporting characters are well described. Many characters in the novel can reflect the author's consideration of the person's position and status, instead of being arrogant in important positions like many novels. Seeing the rise of the protagonist, he actively provokes and seeks death. People who looked down on the protagonist before will learn to adapt and respect the protagonist. In terms of the pseudo-invincible setting, there is no "pseudo" in name only like other novels, and the protagonist's sense of invincibility is not the earthy Return of the Dragon King-style pretentious slap in the face. I haven't seen a protagonist image that can be settled in a long time. The artist's setting is also very novel, allowing the protagonist to develop in many ways without appearing to be a single description: storytelling can bring people closer to each other; preaching can enlighten others and convince people's hearts; playing the piano is a good bridge to the emotional line with the Ninth Princess, one of the heroines (it also brings the protagonist's personality to another level [laughing]); wine tasting (wine tasting) not only serves as a hub with the protagonist's master, but can also replace the role of medicine and elixirs in other novels, and good wine can repair injuries and improve cultivation and understanding.

This book definitely slipped through the cracks of the rating system. It's a great book with excellent plot and writing. You'll be hooked as soon as you read it.

This book is the first novel I have seen in Tomato that has a strong sense of lightning protection, and the writing and story are very good. If you like harems, just jump right in. And the plot is very exciting and progressive. I feel like I am no worse than a chicken in the world of mortals. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I think it's very good. Although it only has more than 100 chapters (currently reading 147), the characters are mostly well-drawn, especially the main characters. The most fleshed-out one is the current suzerain (villain). However, I personally feel that the protagonist's image and character design are not the best. Overall, it is a good-looking novel. I abandoned it for a while while waiting for an update, but it is still easy to read when I picked it up. There are many other books that I abandoned because of waiting for the update. Moreover, the author's description of the characters' appearance is better than that of most novels. The diction is beautiful but not vulgar. It seems that he has a lot of writing experience. Each harem has its own personality (although it has not been completely determined), but it is definitely more three-dimensional than most multi-girl novels. I personally still like to watch movies with multiple women, but I don't like to watch a lot of them. First of all, there are too many and I can't remember them. Secondly, many authors have more than one female protagonist. Either the image is flat or the character is repeated, or even the character is inconsistent. The author has handled it very well so far. I feel like the only character whose portrayal is bad is the protagonist. This should be considered a bit toxic, but it's not that bad. Also, this book reminds me that I just want to be a quiet and honest person (read + material). I have the same feeling, and the development of the main heroine is somewhat similar, and the writing is good. It would be great to have this book one day. Moreover, this book is not so violent, nor is it so depressing. Many refreshing articles like to do this kind of thing just for the so-called feeling of happiness, but if it is not handled well, it cannot relieve the depressed emotions at all. This book is very good, the refreshing is more natural, and the refreshing is relatively fast. These are all personal opinions. If anyone has different opinions, please respect me.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, Weiwei's praise begins to speak out, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you finish the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty years old, the memory of the bookworm has a place for you. Even in the long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of them The problem all comes from insufficient updates.

The character creation of the clan leader is really full and controversial. First, it is written that the character is extremely paranoid after the death of the parent and child. The image of the selfless clan leader and the image of the father are intertwined, making people admire and understand but difficult to empathize with him. Until he learns who died at the hands of the parent and child, he is entangled and conflicted, swinging between the sect and family ties, highlighting the psychological contradictions of the characters, hoping to drag things out. In the end, when I saw the male protagonist taking revenge, my inner psychological defense completely collapsed. I went from being selfless for my sect all my life to not caring about revenge for my parents and children. The extremes of things must be reversed, and the extremes of yang give rise to yin, which reflects his identity as the leader of the Yin and Yang Tao Sect. It makes people "love" and hate him at the same time, as if Sect Master Xu is as real as real existence.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, but the number of words is too few, please code quickly

It's super good-looking. So far, it's basically not toxic. The emotions between the characters are very delicately grasped. The more I watch the plot, the more I want to continue watching. If I want to talk about any shortcomings, it is that I encountered this book too early and it was not enjoyable to read. It is best to read it after more than 500,000 words. It will definitely be enjoyable. Of course, it is also good to slowly read the book. I recommend it, highly recommend it.

This book is already very good. Originally, I thought this name was as silly and cool as most of the wish-making novels. I couldn't find the book and read it, but I found it to be somewhat logical. At least it's acceptable. It's worth reading if you are short of books. Xiaobai still recommends the next pavilion. The high-scoring articles in the pavilion are relatively valuable and worth a look. 🍅In fact, it is more recommended for old bookworms. Although there are a lot of novice texts, there are many new books that are very imaginative and have novel themes and are quite interesting.

The gray line of grass and snakes, the veins that lie thousands of miles away The author's writing skills are amazing! ! The protagonists, supporting characters, people of various personalities and models, monsters, Taoists, Buddhas, and magicians are written in a brilliant way, complementing each other and achieving each other's achievements. Although the protagonist Ning Yi is very cheating, his realm has not collapsed, the combat system has not collapsed, the plot has not collapsed, and there have been no picture changes. There are a lot of people with high realms, all scheming against each other, the triangle is stable, and the grand background is slowly revealed, kicking off the thousand-year change in the world. As of now, I have finished reading the latest chapter of the Demon Abyss. It is still a hidden mystery. I feel that there is no problem in writing so many words! ! !

So far, it ranks among the best. The emotional line is pretty good. At least it doesn't give in. It's logical. The golden finger is also very interesting. I can already imagine the scene when cultivating to the ultimate state. It's really a hexagonal warrior, impeccable.

I feel like there are quite a few sugary people in the comment section. Is it wrong for Xuan Nu to resist because she doesn't want to lose her virginity? It's also right for the clan leader to avenge his son. Is it wrong for the protagonist to kill Xu Peinan when he sees something he shouldn't have seen and wants to silence him? Even if Xu Penan succeeds, the heroine will not be killed when she is promoted to the eighth realm, but the hero will intervene in the cause and effect and witness the crime scene. A group of people in the comment area were calling out how miserable the male protagonist had done to the sect leader and how much he had double standards. Everyone is self-interested, and everyone is making choices that are beneficial to themselves.

The writing is quite interesting and the plot flows smoothly. In my opinion, there are two shortcomings. 1. I really don't like the relationship that is pushed forward due to the helplessness of Chun. If you don't know how to write about emotions, you can just leave it without a female protagonist. 2. The overall style is a relaxed style of writing, but the beginning is the main line of suffering, great hatred, and deep hatred.

It's beautiful, it's beautiful, but I found it too early [crying][crying][crying] The writing of this heroine is so disgusting. She obviously got a lot of benefits from practicing dual cultivation with the protagonist. It seems as if the protagonist did something wrong. At that time, the protagonist could only be regarded as an emergency escape. It is really outrageous for you, the protagonist, to feel that you are wrong [face covering] [OK]

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty years old, the memory of the bookworm has a place for you. Even in the long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. In the novel, the protagonist Ning Yi travels to the Great Zhou Dynasty where martial arts are respected, and obtains the "Great Artist Wishing System". As long as he studies art, he can improve his martial arts realm and obtain wish points. The way he makes wishes is very strange, such as the dragon girl from the Dragon Palace receiving compensation for touching porcelain, and when wishing for a heaven-level skill, the system directly arranges a double practice and sends a saint from the Holy Land, etc. This unusual plot setting is full of fun and unexpectedness, attracting readers to keep reading.

This is one of the few novels that I can give five stars to. A novel does not have to be perfect in all aspects to get five stars. What can get five stars is a work with novel themes, solid content, solid writing and smooth writing. The most important thing is that the author has a clear understanding of his own abilities. For example, some authors clearly only have a high school level of knowledge, but they always want to write about political games and business wars. Some authors clearly only have school experience, but they always want to write about the dangers of society and the unpredictability of the human heart. Therefore, they expose their own childish and stereotyped views. This kind of work is undoubtedly a counterexample, and it is also the most common fault among many high-scoring Tomato works. This work has achieved the ultimate in the author's own abilities in terms of subject selection, plot design, conflict construction, overall control, and detailed writing. The author also deliberately avoids smearing private information in areas that he has no knowledge of at all, causing readers' disgust. Therefore, it can be considered that this is a very good work, which is very enjoyable to read and very worth reading!

This book is quite novel, but the author's writing style needs to be improved. He likes to use some four-character idioms, but he uses them incorrectly in many places. It is recommended that you read the meaning and usage of idioms before using them.

In the early stage, the background description was a little stiff, and the protagonist's image was slightly fragmented. He was tough and weak for a while, and then he gradually became a real villain. Some parts should be modified as much as possible, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. However, in the later stage, the plot design is obviously more skillful, the transition is more natural, and the refreshing points are well grasped. Generally speaking, as long as the early stage is passed, it is still one of the few Tomatoes with good writing style, and it has the feel of a novel in previous years.

This is a rare book, don't be fooled by the ratings! The first is the characterization, and the second is the system. The former is very emotionally detailed, whether it is a supporting role or something, while the latter is very good in terms of system functions. Most of them just play a role in promoting the development of the plot, and the combat power will not collapse.

Patrick: Spongebob, if you can guess how many candies I have in my hand, I will give you the two candies in my hand. How about that? SpongeBob: OK, I guess five. Patrick: Great, you guessed it right. I will give you two first and owe you the remaining three. . . . , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , Why don't you leave? , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,,, Stranger, what are you waiting for? , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , I understand, you are waiting for someone who can tell you a story, then I will tell you another one. , , , , , In fact, Squidward also helps Spongebob sometimes. , , , Once, SpongeBob delivered food without a drink, and was scolded by the customer so that he could not lift his head. SpongeBob lay on the ground crying, and Squidward picked up the pizza. Just throw it in that person's face............ People who don't like you tend to help you more...................... , , , , , , , , , , , , , Still not leaving? ? ? ? , , , , , , , , , , , , You spend too much time playing with yourself! , , , , , Last story: Do you think the cat in Tom and Jerry really can't catch mice? Do you think the Big Big Wolf in (Xi Yangyang and Big Big Wolf) really can't catch sheep? Do you think the bald Qiang in "The Bear" really only chopped five logs in three years? You are wrong (Tom and Jerry) In the first episode, Tom is the world's mouse-catching champion. (Xi Yangyang and Big Big Wolf) Big Big Wolf once opened a sheep-catching company (Bear Infested) Bald Qiang has various logging medals It's ironic Send you a message Like is to meet an opponent, but love is to be defeated , , , , , , , , , Stranger, it's time for me to go , , , , , , , , , Still watching? ! , , , , It's already 2025, have you thought about taking him (her) home for the New Year? , , , , , , What? You haven't? Still not looking for it? ! Still wasting time here! , , , , , , , , , , , What are you expecting? Can this comment give you a friend of the opposite sex? , , , , , Still not leaving? I go , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , Thank you, stranger, this is the first time I feel expected Now that you've seen this, give it a like I typed for three days I don't even get likes, please. Finally, I wish all the brothers, sisters, uncles, aunts, grandparents and grandparents who are seeing this good health and getting better year by year.

I have read thousands of novels and read more than 4,000 hours. I am considered an old bookworm. After reading novels for a long time, my eyes are too heavy. The chapters I have read so far are just like that. They are slightly poisonous and micro-cut, giving readers a feeling of being useless and making them feel uncomfortable. I won't say too much, respect the author, and cheer for the author (the above is limited to my personal feelings and opinions)

Summary: The sect's face, the sect master's face, the pig horn's revenge, the sect master's forbearance, the saint's practice, the princess's freedom, and the greatness of the system. That's pretty much it, I'll add more later [Thinking]

Tell the truth! Let's just say that the child in my cousin's family feels like he has been reborn. My cousin is from Wuhan. She has been married for 7 years and has always wanted to have a baby. Both of them have had physical examinations and both are fine. They have tried local methods but they are not pregnant. Later I found an old Taoist priest. After looking at it, the Taoist said that I just had to wait until I was destined to have a child. Then last fall, I finally got pregnant. Everyone in the family is happy, well fed, well taken care of, I did a color ultrasound two days ago and found that the child had abnormalities, and the mouth and nose kept moving. I've done all kinds of tests and can't find the cause. Later, I found an old Chinese medicine doctor. The old Chinese medicine doctor said that the child had something on his mind in his previous life, and his mouth was actually talking all the time. Later, he asked a professional to watch the color ultrasound video and record the mouth shape, and then he realized that what the child was saying was: "Update quickly." When will it be updated? Hurry up! Hurry up!

It's really good. So far, the emotional drama seems to be okay. Pig's feet are more in line with my ideal. Recommended to take a look. But everyone is different. Hope you will like him too. I have read several books before and they were all quite good. It's just that the author didn't update it later for some reason. Otherwise, it will end hastily.

There are flaws, but the score should not be 8.0+. Based on the current content, storyline and settings, it feels like it can be considered a 9.0+. So far, Shuhuang can catch up. You can also raise it.

This novel is essentially a conventional systematic fantasy novel, but the author has a very delicate grasp of the emotional changes between the female protagonists and the male protagonists. It compares favorably with most novels of the same type. Give me a five-star review and hope the author will continue to work hard [love]