Armor Hero: Transmigrating to the Hundred-Day Oath Ceremony

The author is great, the writing style is very good, the concept is rigorous, and the plot is good, but there is a bit too much foreshadowing. The plot is quite good, but the story progression is a little chaotic, that is, the kind of progression without reason. Of course, this has little impact. The most important thing is that there are too few plots for the protagonist and too many plots for the supporting roles, which leads to a bit of confusion, such as the main character. I don't need to mention whether I should think about ways to improve my strength and plan for the ultimate armor, or seek revenge from the God of Oxel. In short, the author can focus on increasing the plot of the protagonist and improving the protagonist 😄 (Personal review, if there is any inappropriate expression, please forgive the author and readers, thank you here [salute] [salute])

I've finished reading it. The writing is good and the plot transitions are okay. It's not embarrassing. Although there are some small shortcomings raised in the comment area, it is worth reading as an armor novel. In terms of my personal selfishness, I still hope that Captain Qiao can have a better ending. Among the three captains, my favorite is Captain Qiao. The ending of his original work is too tragic. Of the three people, he was the only one who was completely forced to go uphill. He was completely cornered and had no way out. As long as principles are broken, they will be gone. So he went crazy in the back pass. If we only look at the results, Team Qiao can only say that he deserved it. But if we look at the process, Team Qiao didn't have to suffer these crimes.

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Too short, not like a man

The book is very good, standard and refreshing, suitable for reading in a squat 👀

It's well written, I hope it gives Qiao Shefei a better ending.

Looks good, support it

Very good. Nice writing.

There are many shortcomings, but the new book supports it

In terms of plot, it's okay