[Multiple female protagonists + daily sweet stories + non-brainless coolness + micro Shura field + cyber city + development power]
(The scores have just been opened, so the scores haven't had time to increase yet)
The awakened ancient monk Lu Jianxing is still confused:
Why do you always have to live with all kinds of weird girls?
…
One hundred thousand years ago, he was so high-spirited that he killed the great demon with great force.
One hundred thousand years later, he worked as a nanny for the girl with twin tails, took bullets for Iceberg Heroine, and finally had to play marriage first, love later, with the eldest daughter of the chaebol.
It wasn't until he was forced to watch the girl group perform live that he finally couldn't help but blow up the support light sign:
"I am not here to be a toy for you because of my alchemy cultivation!"
...
When Lu Jianxing returned to his cozy home with the seriously injured and unconscious iceberg beauty on his back, the little maintenance man with two ponytails finally began to face his own heart.
He... He brought another woman back? !
…
"From now on, you will also feel my pain."
It was only when the yandere rich man's daughter put a lock on his neck that Lu Jianxing realized how crazy this world was.
…
When Su Yanxin fought for love and successfully separated Lu Jianxing and the little repairman with two ponytails, looking at the girl's resentful eyes, the yandere young lady couldn't help but laugh.
The next day, the cold heroine smashed the glass curtain wall of Su Yanxin's office and came to the door with a sword:
"Senior Brother Lu, come with me!"
...
One hundred thousand years ago, the starry sky monsters invaded, and the human race's great powers perished together with the invaders' fleet at the cost of their spiritual energy being cut off for one hundred thousand years.
As the last fire, Lu Jianxing wakes up after sleeping for a hundred thousand years, waiting for the stars to return and the spiritual energy to revive...
(It warms up slightly in the early stage
Reader comments
The low score mainly comes from some plots that have restrictions on the protagonist. The author may do this to suppress the plot, or to create a fuller character image, but this will make readers feel aggrieved. This is a big taboo in online writing. It is difficult to balance the purpose of writing and the reader's feelings, but once you gravitate towards a certain side of the book, you will fall in love with it. Apart from this shortcoming, everything else is great. If this is the author's first book, that's great, but if not, the author will have to wait a while.
Although I haven't read it for a long time, I still give it 5 stars for fear that this book is dead. Please give the author a big boost. Novice authors have this kind of trough period. As long as there are no poisonous points (you can read more comments) and the characters are not blurry (you can prepare the main characters in advance, and then integrate the characters with the plot). Also, don't rush to push the plot. If you want to write about love, you should use daily routines to pile them up one by one (especially for the kind of eldest lady, whose status and vision are different by birth. For example: "Tian Ying" although this book is different, it is the smoothest plot of "the male protagonist saves the female protagonist and later cultivates into a positive result")
I also recommend the author to refer to the book "This Miss, I'm Really a Good Monster", which has a very similar background.
Originally I just wanted to encourage the author, but I ended up writing so much without realizing it. Big boost to the author😁😁😁
New wine in old bottles, with a unique charm. Elements such as "corporate", "immortality" and "cyberpunk" are very common, and this book combines them well. The plot is obviously a bit abrupt and deliberately pushes the plot in many places, but it doesn't hurt. The character's personality is relatively distinct. Next, it depends on how the author manages the growth of the mechanic girl (it can't be like this now), handles the emotional line (it can't be a single female protagonist), and promotes the main plot (it's very grand, now in the novice village, there will definitely be an advanced village and a monster-fighting tribe later) without letting the combat power collapse.
I love reading it, it is refreshing and clear, the logic is clear, and the writing is better than 80% of the peers. The shortcoming is that it is not enough to read. Also, the advantages of the protagonist who is an immortal cultivator always feel a bit boring, and is a bit unworthy of the evaluation of "The Last Fire". I hope the author can add some patches to the protagonist in the future, such as the protagonist's bloodline, magical powers, alien talents, etc. In the former cultivating civilization. The current golden finger is still a bit weak.
It's not bad. There are many female protagonists, the protagonist is decisive in killing (compared to other novels), there are no too many poisonous points, the plot development logic is reasonable, and everything is there [smile], I hope the author can stick to it until the end.
It's okay. There aren't many tracks for cyber + immortal cultivators to travel through. The writing is okay. It's a good casual novel. But please be aware that although it is a cool novel, the protagonist is not a demon cultivator. You can't stop eating beef in the early stage. You won't stop eating beef until about 30 chapters. If you look at the villain who doesn't eat beef at the beginning of the novel, you don't have to worry about it before complaining.
It's beautiful. The writing is delicate, the narration is superb, and the heroines all have their own strengths. It's super beautiful! It's just that the author updates too slowly, only updating one or two chapters a day. Even the dogs in the production team don't dare to be so blatantly lazy!
It's quite interesting. It combines the ancient cultivation of immortality with the modern cyberspace, and the world view is also very big. I have several love lines, and I really like the little maintenance man.
This is my first time writing a book review. How can I put it? As a fan of Xianxia and 2D nerds, this is the first time I saw a book with a similar background to Night City on Tomato. Overall, I am very satisfied with it and hope to keep it.
The subject matter is novel, the writing is very good, the descriptions are good in all aspects, and there is nothing poisonous about it. I hope the author sticks to it
It's really good, the story is quite novel, and it's quite enjoyable to read.
The subject matter is okay. If you can recover your spiritual energy later and join forces with cultivators from outer space to fight against the enemies who caused the catastrophe, it will feel good [smile][smile][smile][smile]
It looks very comfortable, logical and emotional, not awkward. In short, I want to go to Kangjiaopei👿
The quality is very good, it has surpassed most Tomato novels, at least 8.5 Points or above. I hope the author can keep writing.
I can't figure out why it's not popular
Not bad, come on
A masterpiece, I must give it full marks
It's beautiful, you must work hard [Admiration]
So far it looks good
If nothing else, this golden elixir is delicious
Why are there so few book reviews? Also, author, you haven't updated for three days, so come to the comment section to summon your soul. . .
Will you persist to the end @KAgantuya
Not bad... It's too little and I don't see any problems...
If the protagonist is really bound, it's time to withdraw the book [face covering]
It's so good. I haven't found such a good book for a long time.
Feeling good so far, looking forward to the follow-up
Already read, it's okay. Except for the protagonist's cultivator's bad taste, everything else is okay.
Looks good, feels very interesting
It looks good, I love watching it, I want to become a veteran! ! ! (The few people the protagonist spared were a bit poisonous)
I just realized that the cover is Yuxiang, Hakiya, you guy [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
The subject matter is okay and there is nothing surprising about it. Good luck to the author.
The low score mainly comes from some plots that have restrictions on the protagonist. The author may do this to suppress the plot, or to create a fuller character image, but this will make readers feel aggrieved. This is a big taboo in online writing. It is difficult to balance the purpose of writing and the reader's feelings, but once you gravitate towards a certain side of the book, you will fall in love with it. Apart from this shortcoming, everything else is great. If this is the author's first book, that's great, but if not, the author will have to wait a while.
Although I haven't read it for a long time, I still give it 5 stars for fear that this book is dead. Please give the author a big boost. Novice authors have this kind of trough period. As long as there are no poisonous points (you can read more comments) and the characters are not blurry (you can prepare the main characters in advance, and then integrate the characters with the plot). Also, don't rush to push the plot. If you want to write about love, you should use daily routines to pile them up one by one (especially for the kind of eldest lady, whose status and vision are different by birth. For example: "Tian Ying" although this book is different, it is the smoothest plot of "the male protagonist saves the female protagonist and later cultivates into a positive result") I also recommend the author to refer to the book "This Miss, I'm Really a Good Monster", which has a very similar background. Originally I just wanted to encourage the author, but I ended up writing so much without realizing it. Big boost to the author😁😁😁
New wine in old bottles, with a unique charm. Elements such as "corporate", "immortality" and "cyberpunk" are very common, and this book combines them well. The plot is obviously a bit abrupt and deliberately pushes the plot in many places, but it doesn't hurt. The character's personality is relatively distinct. Next, it depends on how the author manages the growth of the mechanic girl (it can't be like this now), handles the emotional line (it can't be a single female protagonist), and promotes the main plot (it's very grand, now in the novice village, there will definitely be an advanced village and a monster-fighting tribe later) without letting the combat power collapse.
I love reading it, it is refreshing and clear, the logic is clear, and the writing is better than 80% of the peers. The shortcoming is that it is not enough to read. Also, the advantages of the protagonist who is an immortal cultivator always feel a bit boring, and is a bit unworthy of the evaluation of "The Last Fire". I hope the author can add some patches to the protagonist in the future, such as the protagonist's bloodline, magical powers, alien talents, etc. In the former cultivating civilization. The current golden finger is still a bit weak.
It's not bad. There are many female protagonists, the protagonist is decisive in killing (compared to other novels), there are no too many poisonous points, the plot development logic is reasonable, and everything is there [smile], I hope the author can stick to it until the end.
It's okay. There aren't many tracks for cyber + immortal cultivators to travel through. The writing is okay. It's a good casual novel. But please be aware that although it is a cool novel, the protagonist is not a demon cultivator. You can't stop eating beef in the early stage. You won't stop eating beef until about 30 chapters. If you look at the villain who doesn't eat beef at the beginning of the novel, you don't have to worry about it before complaining.
It's beautiful. The writing is delicate, the narration is superb, and the heroines all have their own strengths. It's super beautiful! It's just that the author updates too slowly, only updating one or two chapters a day. Even the dogs in the production team don't dare to be so blatantly lazy!
It's quite interesting. It combines the ancient cultivation of immortality with the modern cyberspace, and the world view is also very big. I have several love lines, and I really like the little maintenance man.
This is my first time writing a book review. How can I put it? As a fan of Xianxia and 2D nerds, this is the first time I saw a book with a similar background to Night City on Tomato. Overall, I am very satisfied with it and hope to keep it.
The subject matter is novel, the writing is very good, the descriptions are good in all aspects, and there is nothing poisonous about it. I hope the author sticks to it
It's really good, the story is quite novel, and it's quite enjoyable to read.
The subject matter is okay. If you can recover your spiritual energy later and join forces with cultivators from outer space to fight against the enemies who caused the catastrophe, it will feel good [smile][smile][smile][smile]
It looks very comfortable, logical and emotional, not awkward. In short, I want to go to Kangjiaopei👿
The quality is very good, it has surpassed most Tomato novels, at least 8.5 Points or above. I hope the author can keep writing.
I can't figure out why it's not popular
Not bad, come on
A masterpiece, I must give it full marks
It's beautiful, you must work hard [Admiration]
So far it looks good
If nothing else, this golden elixir is delicious
Why are there so few book reviews? Also, author, you haven't updated for three days, so come to the comment section to summon your soul. . .
Will you persist to the end @KAgantuya
Not bad... It's too little and I don't see any problems...
If the protagonist is really bound, it's time to withdraw the book [face covering]
It's so good. I haven't found such a good book for a long time.
Feeling good so far, looking forward to the follow-up
Already read, it's okay. Except for the protagonist's cultivator's bad taste, everything else is okay.
Looks good, feels very interesting
It looks good, I love watching it, I want to become a veteran! ! ! (The few people the protagonist spared were a bit poisonous) I just realized that the cover is Yuxiang, Hakiya, you guy [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
The subject matter is okay and there is nothing surprising about it. Good luck to the author.