[Harry Potter fan work, lots of HPL, Arknights System, Fantastic Beasts, includes GGAD]
After somehow ending up in a completely unfamiliar place, the amnesiac version of Lorian, who knew nothing about anything, looked at the cardboard-box bed in a dim alley and couldn't help exclaiming: What kind of disastrous start is this?
When he was burning with a high fever and about to give up on life, he unexpectedly got the golden finger from his favorite game. Lorian rallied again. Now, it seemed he might just be able to scrape by.
After looking into things, he discovered that he had actually arrived in Britain at the end of the nineteenth century. He also received an admission letter to Hogwarts, delivered by owl.
Lorian: Who hasn't dreamed of becoming a little wizard? I'll get packed and head off to Hogwarts!
But wait... it's 1891, not 1991!
Harry won't be starting school for another whole century! If he wants to fulfill his childhood dream with his own eyes, he'll have to live for another hundred years first.
Thinking of the Goblin Rebellion, then Grindelwald's revolution, and Voldemort's reign of darkness...
Lorian: Let's start with a small goal: survive to the age of one hundred!
But the cruelty of war always strikes without warning. When Lorian awoke from his long sleep once more, the scene before him felt both unfamiliar and strangely familiar.
His eyes, shut away in darkness for so long, were blurred by the light. He couldn't make out who the figure standing against the light in front of the stone coffin was.
Lorian: Wait, no, did I really become the Doctor?
[Doctor, this is a journey for you alone, but we are all right behind you.]
Overall, it's pretty good, with no problems but no highlights. It's quite novel to start from Huo Yi's timeline. It seems that the more than seventy chapters have basically nothing to do with Arknights. The few props I got are rarely used, and most of them are used in daily life at school. I think the connection between the protagonist and the operators can be appropriately increased. In fact, the article does not have a very clear main line, it only talks about living a hundred years later and experiencing Harry's timeline. So overall it is actually very everyday. It looks good but may not arouse the interest in following updates. The tag has two male protagonists, but currently I can't tell who the cp is. I hope the author can explain it clearly.
The protagonist is a good person. Good is a neutral word. The protagonist is kind, but in my opinion, he is too kind. There are several paragraphs in the article where the protagonist hopes to save Dumbledore's family after learning about the tragedy of the Dumbledore family. This is nothing, but the reason It's not convincing enough to the readers (I think), it feels a bit too spacey, and it's too kind to make the protagonist worry about Dumbledore's family just because of the tragedy he saw in the information or books, and even before going to bed he was thinking about how to save it. Since things get better with the Dumbledore family later in the article, the order of the cars can actually be changed. After things get better with the Dumbledore family first, we can then bother to find a way to recover. I think the friendship between the protagonist and his friends in this book is very moving. All in all, the author's writing is quite good, and I felt quite open as I read the whole book.
I like it, it's good to watch, and I urge you to update it. I'm a little afraid that the protagonist will fall asleep directly until the child age. I really hope that the protagonist can live a wonderful life for more than a hundred years.
It's a very novel theme, but after reading dozens of chapters, I didn't see anything new in the Arknights system. At first, I thought I could learn things like Xiaoluo's mantra and Xiaoyang's volcano, but after reading it, I felt like it was just like going to school. Then I heard about the incident of the transfer student. I only started to work on it later.
Great! It's so logical. I can't wait to see the operator's expression when he sees the doctor playing magic. Doctor: This is magic. Operator: No, this is the doctor's unique Source Stone skill.
It looks good! The author seems to like Dumbledore very much, and has mentioned the two wars between Grindelwald and Voldemort many times. Although he has always wanted to be an outsider, will his kindness to Dumbledore change the two reform wars? After all, both times originated from Dumbledore, once because of Dumbledore's ideas, and once because of Dumbledore's suspicion or even "guidance"? I don't know if this word is used accurately or not. It is not like a principal or a teacher to send a sensitive and gifted genius astray. Keep reading and wait for my follow-up review~
I'm surprised that the timeline is set at the end of the 19th century. I really like starting from the timeline when Dumbledore was young. It can tell a lot of things, plus a little bit of Huo Yi's plot as a background. I highly recommend it 👍
I would like to ask if the protagonist will have cp?
It's very beautiful, very smooth, and the heart-warming story makes people feel warm in their hearts. I recommend it.
It's very interesting to write, as very few people write about Dumbledore's time period. I haven't found any before.