The Soul Travels to Become an Immortal, and Is Pampered by the Villain's Elder Sister

So far it looks very good, the plot is very smooth and not draggy, the relationship between the two is also very sweet, and the 1v1 is very enjoyable. It can be seen that the author's pure love is written very well, and it made my body spots warm when I read it. Give it four stars first, and then decide after five stars. I would like to give the author a few suggestions, but don't step on the bad points: 1. Don't collapse the character. The invincibility of the senior sister must not be broken, and there should be no such thing as the senior sister compromising with the male villain for the sake of the junior sister. Don't forget the crazy character of the heroine, who is gentle and obedient to the senior sister, and the crazy torture of the murderer. 2. Since it's Lily, don't have close physical contact with men later, as it will affect the impression.

Qing Mimi gives myself five stars. By the way, do you think this update time is too late? Especially the second chapter, but there is nothing we can do. We code and post one chapter without saving it [cry][cry](ू˃̣̣̣̣̣̣˂̣̣̣̣̣̣ ू)

Thank you for the author, I like it very much

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Never use a knife

The author updates so fast that he even found the dentures for my breasts [laughs][like]

Beibei promised me not to use a big knife. Xiaodao Yiqing suggested stuffing candy into my mouth [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Looks good! ! ! [Laughing] That's great [laughing]

I gave one less star because I was afraid that the book would be gone [crying]

Good, the speed of progress, but I don't know if there is a knife behind it.

Yeah, it looks good. I remember what I commented. Why was it deleted? [Thinking]

The author's writing is very smooth. Now it seems that there is a bit of a knife hidden in it, but if you use some of the knives, you will have more twists and turns and a sense of ups and downs.