HP Old and New

The original male protagonist × Sectarian, the description of Snape is not OOC, and the male protagonist is white and black, smart and studious, with a lively eye and a sense of inferiority and unworthiness (one of the small climaxes made me feel very happy), with an authentic Slytherin flavor (referring to his behavior). Hypocrisy, he is willing to hide his students and his professor who is good at revealing people's hearts. Can the author write 5 chapters in one day? Don't be tired and don't be idle (๑--๑), especially if the subsequent double scenes with them can be a little more intense? (Emotional and verbal content, not necessarily behavior) Please pull, pull, and pull with their emotional drama. I like, like, like the author and I will follow you until the end.

Immortal products are neither the parent generation nor the child era (it is our era hahahaha, I don't know if anyone can get this joke). It is the first term of Sri Lanka's teaching, the original male protagonist CP Snape, the male protagonist is considered to be reborn through time travel, right? It's very powerful. You have strong abilities, and you are strong and you can continue to work hard. It doesn't look boring. I think the development of the emotional line is relatively solid. Although it is a bit slow, it is very readable. It is a brand new story, not the old cliche of love and love and then the soul of Sijiao is redeemed. He has his own main story. I really want to know the plot behind it [crying] Some descriptions are super interesting, cute, and I find them funny? That's not right, it just has a playful and warm feeling~ Come and take a look, come and take a look, I have a lot of bad points, but I haven't found any yet. Personally, I think I am very serious about recommending and rating books, and I don't fool people. The only shortcoming of this book is that it is not finished yet, but it is updated steadily twice a day. (I quietly tell you that it is more suitable for fattening, but I can't stop reading it. Anyway, I come here every day)

I'm honored to see such a mature work. This calm, complex and simple narrative is so realistic. So many creative plots show the author's great love for the original work, as well as his rich ingenuity and unparalleled imagination. In this somewhat impetuous platform, such works are really rare. I really like the male protagonist and look forward to his future bond with Snape.

Needless to say, another masterpiece of Sijiao has appeared. The author's writing is coherent and logical, the characters are three-dimensional, and their actions and actions have reasons and are in line with his own personality, without being abrupt or outrageous. The overall plot is smooth and coherent, and the plot connection is natural and smooth. It has more than 700 chapters and is very enjoyable to read without feeling protracted. It is very smooth and enjoyable to read. The more you read, the more immersed you become. Moreover, it combines the supplementary settings of HP other than the original work, and many of my own original plots. It is also very good. It is a very high-quality fanfic (off-topic: I have to say that many of Sijiao's fanfics are very well written and high-quality plots with deeper depth and more three-dimensional characters) [Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned]

Ignoring the focus, I think the author has made it very clear in the introduction. It is said that Xiao Lu's target is the Sri Lankan religion. The author must like the Sri Lankan religion to match him like this. If he feels that he is partial to the Sri Lankan religion, then if you click on the article whose CP is the Sri Lankan religion, are you looking for abuse? If you are dissatisfied with the paragraph review, please close it with a flick of your finger. That is because the readers' ideas are not the author's. If you think a certain character is OOC, then discard it quickly and don't make yourself uncomfortable. It's so good. From less than 100 chapters to now, I really can't get enough of it. It's even more painful to watch it one day after the holiday. The author's writing style is excellent and it stands up to scrutiny. I really like it. I like it very much. Very beautiful. Edit: I was so rude before, but this article is suitable for people who are familiar with ss. It is completely focused on the original protagonist or is very controlling of the original protagonist. It may be a bit aggrieved for you. Anyone who expresses dislike for this article, please speak after reading the main text. For those who only read a little bit, or even didn't click on it at all, and just read the introduction and stepped on you, please stop commenting. Grateful. Comments can also affect people's mood. You can choose not to read them, but this is very painful for people who like to read comments. For example, I love reading comments. Some book comment sections are always uncomfortable to look at. I will turn off the short reviews or not open them, but sometimes I still want to read the comments like a masochist. However, I don't feel uncomfortable in the comment section of this book. If you're coming for SS, why don't you close your eyes and flush? Even if I come to SS, I will still fall in love with Xiao Lu and the author. The words written by the teacher seemed to be written according to my wishes and came from Kami. Am I going to meet my natal author too? When my friend said something about her goddess in the future, I was not sad at all because I met the teacher. Everyone has their own charm. Every time I watch the young couple, I feel elated. It's a feast. It's the time of boredom again. I can't read any other articles. I rely on reading the teacher's updates every day to stay alive. Ugh. Edit again: The main text has been secretly finished like this. I have been crying. I am still tired of it. Why did you finish it? I think of the first time we met on March 30, 2025. We have known each other (I am one-sided) for more than a year. I have been reading it intermittently since I was a senior in high school. Now I am reading it every day. It is the first time I have spent money to give gifts, the first time I have read an article repeatedly, the first time I have followed a long story, the first time I have been so diligent in commenting, and the first time I have written a long review. I came in this morning and wanted to take a look again, but I saw the newly added text. It was so sudden and I wasn't prepared. The teacher's completion flag finally came true, woo woo. Bad morning. The text is finished and flowers are sprinkled.

It's so beautiful that I have no words to say. I'm not saying that the content setting is necessarily novel, but it's the same thing. This author is able to write it so that it feels natural! Is this a talented player? ! Love it, there is no meal replacement writing on the entire internet [I'm about to cry] Mom, the CP I'm chasing are finally together! The bookkeeper can come back [shy][laugh]

Hey, the character of Xiao Lu is so cute... [Crying] [crying] Such a charming rational thinking protagonist, the more I look at it, the more I feel like an old man Zi. He often teases his friends about the fact that Xiao Lu stays up late to work, hahaha [laughing] I have been deeply attracted by Xiao Lu's cute personality and the author's writing style! At first I was confused by the setting because I didn't understand HP at all, but now I'm interested in the original work because of the fandom. Every time there is an update, you have to calm down and read it slowly to make sure you take it in! [Congratulations] I hope the author has prepared the stock and can continue to update it until the end. After finishing the book, I quit this book and look for new books to read. I have been frustrated by the low-fat plot and poor writing style many times... [Face covering] I will follow it until the end! I'll add comments later ~ [love] [love]

Very nice. The author's writing style is very good, and the Sri Lankan religion in this time period is a blank in the original description. I am looking forward to the next development of the plot! How do two people who are relatively reserved in their relationships advance their relationship lines [Sending Hearts]

It is definitely a good product, the writing style is very calm, and it is different from the domineering male protagonist who changes everything from the beginning. He does not have an outstanding appearance, but he has enough ambition and planning. He is a perfect Slytherin. It is a pity that it is not finished yet. I am looking forward to the follow-up.

Looks good! Worth recommending! The writing style is also good! The image of the protagonist is full and three-dimensional, Slytherin Lord + scholar attribute + unlucky attribute + alchemist master + house elf (temporarily?) + Thoughtful, sensitive + vest... The characters are pretty good. There are no messy cheats (referring to the system and some inexplicable settings). I really like the feeling of the protagonist (I can't quite describe it, calm or alienated?). The plot is now more relaxed and funny, and the characters are not broken. I can feel that the protagonist is really caring and loves to learn. I am looking forward to the future development~ I hope the protagonist runs to Knockturn Alley without being discovered, otherwise it will be very miserable based on the current development of the plot... More, more, more! (Currently 45 chapters, one review)

The male protagonist appears to be cowardly, but is actually the type who pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. However, he is also a real Slytherin, so he hides himself very well in everything he says and does, at least in the lower grades. Looks pretty good now

Treasure book! Since there are no ratings yet, I'll write something if I want to. Check it out! [Laughs] I feel that the language of this book is very beautiful. It is light and does not make people feel gorgeous, but it always makes people subconsciously feel the emotions in the book. The daily warmth, the occasional deep sadness, and the unique personal charm of the protagonist as a Slytherin always capture my heart [cry]. Now I don't have anything to do with Harry and the others, but this is really good! I was even more immersed in the book itself, rather than the repetitive plot. I loved the smooth yet turbulent relationship between the two protagonists! The author should update quickly [laughing]

It's really beautiful! I have never read Harry Potter, so I was still annoyed when this book was always on my recommendation list. I finally couldn't help but read it, and it got out of hand. It was so good! This is the first book that I haven't finished reading, and I can't help but read it again. I have been promoting career lines in the past, which makes me feel tired. Later, I started to push the emotional line, and the whole development felt relaxed and smooth. There is not much to say in other lessons, anyway, it is a strong push! Add the author for faster updates

It feels like the author has been in the magical world hahh The main quests are so fulfilling, it's a bit hard to understand without thinking. The teacher-student relationship between Lucas and Snape is very interesting, and watching each other protect each other warms my heart. It's just not enough. I hope the author will add 800 chapters a day [face covering]

One of the best HP fanfics I have ever seen. The TvT is so well written. The two people cherish each other as if they see another version of themselves in each other. I really don't feel too bad about it. The SS described by the good author is really not too vivid, and baby Lucas is not too cute anymore! I'm looking forward to the love story in the future. I'm a little reluctant to watch it and it's not finished yet. The author will do his best to update it🥹🥹😋😋

It's super pretty, and there's no OOC in Sri Lanka. When will our protagonist become a handsome man [face covering] It's not OOC at all, it's tied, please update chapter 100 [crying][crying][crying]

This article is really well written, and the characters don't feel OOC at all. The relationship between Si Jiao and Lucas didn't rush into love from the beginning. The love line is really well written, a kind of long-term flow. The process of pushing and testing back and forth between the two parties is very enjoyable, and the daily life without advancing the plot is also very interesting. I am looking forward to the ambiguous pull when the love line really enters later. I really like the author's writing style and the characters in each chapter. It's really interesting. Lucas is also super cute and handsome! Occasional straight shots, white and black inside, although the whole article says that Xiao Lu's appearance is not outstanding and even looks like a house elf. There are only one or two paragraphs that can reflect his future handsomeness, but the actions and words described make people unconsciously ignore it, making people feel the charm of his personality. This type of description captures people's hearts more than a long description of handsome and beautiful appearance. Off-topic (I hate why I discovered this article when it was a cub! I climbed into the manuscript box all night and punched myself unconscious until I was done with bushi)

I felt so happy, so warm, so comfortable, and I wanted to cry. I clicked on this book to read it because I am an omnivore. Halfway through the book, I knew that the rest of my life was over and I could not accept CP other than Luce. I will cry every time I read a chapter. Xifu is so fresh and vivid. I have been working on him for almost ten years and no one can make him so happy. Everyone, please read it and give it five stars. The writing is very good, the details are well detailed, the plot has ups and downs, and it's really intriguing. It's already finished, but two people haven't gone any further (hateful). I hope you can provide some support or support for the fan base. I'm so uncomfortable with withdrawal. Goodbye everyone, I'm going to play the second game. I brushed the love line again and I feel so comfortable. The two hearts are getting closer and closer. Both Si and Lu have changed because of each other. Lucas has gone from being insecure at the beginning and rioting because of uneasy magic power to now confidently asking the professor to act coquettishly. Si has been self-destructive at the beginning and is now willing to analyze his own emotions and accept Lucas's love. Have you finally come out of your cold childhood? Have you grown from a scarred and anxious child to an adult who has learned the subject of love. I'm so happy, I want to cry. My treasure family property, the most suitable episode. It's so beautiful and the author's control over the character is so comfortable. It's the first time I've seen someone write about Snape instead of treating him as a tsundere but analyzing his self-destruction and inferiority. I also have a very good understanding of HP. I can write original characters without feeling any sense of dissonance that doesn't match the wizarding world. How many times have I read Harry Potter (with emotion)? It can definitely be said to be one of the masterpieces among HP fans. Everyone, give me a thumbs up

It's really good. The main character Lucas is very charming, and he and Snape are a real match. They are two powerful characters! The author's writing style is profound and his mind is mature. You don't have to lose your mind to read this kind of fan fiction and you can just enjoy it.

This is my favorite HP fanfic I've seen so far🥰The author's writing style is very good, and the key is that the atmosphere of the whole book is well grasped. The atmosphere of the magical world is very strong, and there is no sense of violation. The storyline is very logical, the protagonist is smart and rigorous (this is obvious from the layout of his plan and the protection he gives himself), the characters are also very distinct, and the plot is so creative that it often surprises me. In terms of the emotional line alone, the progress is not hasty at all. It can be seen that the professor is slowly influencing the professor. Although the author did not write some plot words that obviously imply ambiguity, the most amazing thing is that even without these straightforward sentences, the reader will feel very excited💗 os: What Xiao Lu is best at is how to make trouble unreasonably (cross out) and obediently make the professor helpless [shy] In the end, the professor discovered that 80% of his friends were the same people [laughs] I've been following the update, I really like it, cheers up [blowing kiss]

The plot is not cliché, and the career line is because Lucas is a very smooth person. Lucas is really talented, scheming, and skillful. He is also very strong as a master of alchemy. There are not many real academy scenes, because Lucas basically doesn't have the twists and turns of his age (physical age). It's really " The emotional line of "If you bloom, butterflies will come" is also very natural. Two people fall in love after touching each other's hearts. I have never read other hp fanfics before. When I first read the article, I didn't care who the cp was, but the teacher's writing is really good. It's delicious and you can eat it as much as you like! ! Second comment: The character of Lucas is really charming. Today I saw someone say that Lu has been coaxing SS to feel that he feels wronged. In fact, Lu really doesn't feel wronged at all. He never regarded SS as an elder like a teacher from the beginning. All the coaxing behaviors, including binding the master-disciple relationship, are just to get closer to SS. As for SS's poisonous tongue and cold face Ridicule, to Lu, is really like a kitten scratching its itch but not stretching out its paws. Lu has endured the greatest malice, been tortured by a scumbag mentor for several rounds, and still managed to hold on to himself. He survived and was able to fight back and achieve success. He is really strong. Compared with the pain and injuries he has suffered, SS, who is cold-faced but teaches and protects, really has no lethality at all.

The writing style is very good, concise and not mentally retarded. This kind of light narrative is very comfortable to read. The protagonist is very eye-catching, the settings are just right and exciting, the descriptions are beautiful, especially the small details, and the logic has no mistakes and will not make the characters suddenly lose their minds. It can be said that it is a rare good article in Tomato. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that I knew it was really interesting to me. I opened the table of contents and saw that there were only forty chapters. Then I finished reading it with the despair of reading one chapter and missing one chapter. Update it soon. Please update it soon.

This book is really huge and beautiful. The author's writing style is delicate, and some small details are handled particularly well. The author uses a eloquent way, and the magic scenes are described very delicately, vividly on the paper, and some lines are well filled in. The imagination is very big, and the plot is very attractive. There are corresponding main tasks for each grade. Although there are many chapters, they are not boring and complicated at all. The plot is compact and the rhythm is well grasped. I have to say that the author's writing skills are really deep. The emotional line is relatively slow and focused. It starts from the first grade of the protagonist and is written in each grade. There is no time jump. The protagonist is called Lucas. He was an alchemy master in his previous life and entered Hogwarts after the war. He is a few years younger than Harry Potter. Later, he died in an accident and was reborn in the first year of Severus' teaching. At this time, the protagonist has already He just entered school at the age of 11 and became the first little wizard guided by Severus. At first, the protagonist's appearance was not outstanding, and his stature was relatively short due to long-term lack of nutrition, but he gradually improved. He became super handsome as an adult, and the protagonist was super smart. He worked hard and managed to get in front of Severus, and became the professor's only apprentice. The protagonist was careful to test in the early stage (because the protagonist met many unscrupulous mentors in his previous life, and was miserably cheated, so he is not good at accepting the kindness of others like Sif), but in the later stage, after getting familiar with it, he awakened the tea skills, often teasing Si Fu by retreating, and he is very skilled at comforting Si Fu when he gets angry. He also has full exclusivity and rejects all attempts to get close to Si Fu. He is a very double-standard person. In short, there are many cute points. The protagonist also has many vests. He is super good-looking, has an online IQ, and has a slow-burning emotional line but is also very cute. It is super, super good-looking. I logged into Tomato just to post this article. Believe me, you will not lose money if you invest in it. Just look at the ratings and you will know that it is a masterpiece. It is really super good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡[Blow kiss][Shy]

The characters in this book are fleshed out, and the characters speak in an organized manner. They don't express their deep thoughts clearly, which gives people a very strange feeling. The writing style is very refreshing and neat. It's not that cool writing is better than cool writing, it's growth-oriented and doesn't make me feel aggrieved. The male protagonist is really smart and rational, and his interaction with the potion master is great. [Sending Hearts] This two-male protagonist novel really touched me, and I hope it gets better and better.

The writing is so awesome🫡I can still see such fine chaff in tomatoes. Teacher, you must keep on writing more🥺 I can't bear to read it at all😭There are only 150 chapters to go and I'm already starting to feel anxious. I'm used to reading every chapter in lof, I hope the teacher won't find it annoying🥹🤲🏻

The framework of Routh's writing is very mature. As an omnivorous casual fan who only watched the series of movies in his early years, I didn't feel that it was obviously OOC. It is difficult to write everyday articles, especially writing such vivid, smooth and relevant writing requires a lot of skills. The character creation is very comfortable. You won't feel that any character is here just to advance the plot to brush up his existence and lose his IQ. The emotional line is smooth and flowing, and the transition from CB to CP is delicious throughout. Especially for a Hotnerd like Lucas, who is the master of scientific research and has a mouth, you can just watch and see if you suffer a loss, it's a state banquet level. The first time I listened to the book, I skipped a lot of chapters and quickly tied it up. The second time I read it carefully and took in the details. Now I am ready to play the third time in order to wait for the update. No meal replacement. I had already started reading Rowling's original novels when there was no update.

Delicious! 🍅Sijiao fandom is a fairy tale. Fans on the right side of Sijiao are always prone to OOC. After all, SS himself is a strong and arrogant person. It is difficult to control how to develop so that he can be willing to sink into dependence in relationships. Sauron's line is the highest pursuit of Sijiao fans in my heart. I think Sijiao fandom is because of this. I feel sorry for SS in the original work, and want to see him find happiness in the fandom. Sauron is strong enough, tolerant enough, and can give SS a sense of security. At the same time, SS is also insisting on his pursuit, but is no longer alone and helpless. The plot design is clever and the writing is full of tension. I love you, the author teacher [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The protagonist's IQ is online, and the plot is reasonable. I feel that the author has life experience and a lot of social insights. The writing is really realistic. The characters in it are also more in line with the original work. Some of the added settings are also very interesting. Recommended It's really great. The characters in it feel very consistent with the original work, and all the characters are smart. The plot is colorful and a bit nurturing. I feel that the author has no OOC in daily life, emotional parts, and professional terminology. Strong, strong! Highly recommended!

The story starts from the first year of SS coaching. I have always wanted to find articles about this blank period in history books, and finally I came across it. Apart from the plots of parents and children, all the plots are original, and it is full of surprises when reading. The author has a strong imagination, and every "copy" is perfecting a corner of the magical world. The writing is concise and calm, with a sense of humor. Lucas is really a qualified Slytherin, and his character is not flat. From protecting himself wisely to changing his mind and deciding to fight against LV, he wears many vests hhh. The relationship with SS is gradually warming up and flowing smoothly. SS is also very alive. The interaction is really cute. Both of them take good care of each other! I have to say that the part about bidding farewell to Myrtle is really clever [Myrtle is a situation, they may all become Myrtle] It not only allows Blake to participate in the game and allows him to reflect, but also truly bids farewell to Myrtle. This is the first time I have seen an author think of helping Myrtle escape. It also gave Regulus the opportunity to say goodbye to his relatives, which was very tender and touching. As for the shortcomings... The emotional line develops very slowly. Firstly, it has to wait for Lucas to grow up, and secondly, it needs to give them enough time to understand each other. If you think about it carefully, for Slytherins like SS and Xiao Lu, who have extraordinary personal experiences and are very defensive, it is even more wrong that the emotional line is very fast.

The protagonist of this article is an original character, but what is really surprising is that this original character is well integrated into the background of the times. It made me feel dazed for a moment. It is as harmonious and natural as the original work, without any abruptness. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good, and he writes very carefully, especially the small details in life, which make the characters come alive. In addition, the emotion between them is very delicate, which is completely in line with the character of Severus in the original work. It also allows me to see the possibility of Severus' happiness. Although this is a fan novel, it also makes me happy. There are very few such good books in Tomato, but I am lucky enough to read such a book.