Collapse When I Broke My Fate I Forgot Everything

It looks good. I would like to ask the author why he added more time travellers. What is his intention?

The continuation of the writing at the beginning is pretty good, but it gets a bit sloppy at the end, but when it comes to writing fan fiction, it's pretty good to be able to write it like this, and I can understand it. However, there is one paragraph that impressed me deeply. The brother of the protagonist returned to the original world and accidentally swiped it on my phone. [Collapse Bad: I forgot everything after breaking my destiny] If I remember correctly, when a certain possibility of the tree produces branches, that possibility can be recorded. After some brothers returned to the original world, they directly encountered the protagonist of this book. This part is very well written.

I feel like this novel is pretty good. It's worth keeping in my library. I'll read it to my heart's content next time [smile]

Not enough to watchＯ(≧口≦)O

Not bad, pretty good

Don't know what to say

To the fall of the car king

Looks good, can continue to follow up

The plot is well handled and looks good

Not bad, it looks good but there is a little ink stain at the beginning

I think it's pretty good

Very good, but can you put double quotation marks on the dialogue between characters, otherwise it will be really difficult to distinguish?

A very good book, but the ending is a bit regretful