Quick Transmigration: Healing the Sickly One? Ah, I'm Dead

Baby, the pace is a little faster, it can be slower, the writing is a little immature, I need to keep working hard, the plot line is okay, baby can pay more attention to details, the language description can be mixed with facial expressions and movements, the environment can be described appropriately, the mood can be expressed, foreshadowing, and other facial expressions can be written such as "lips slightly pursed", "frowning", etc. It can be divided into volumes for quick passage, and it can be divided better. (I haven't read much of this article. I'll read a little and make some suggestions. If your baby finds me annoying, you don't have to read it. I don't have much to say, but I've read a lot of books. [Sending my heartfelt wishes])

It's nice to watch, love to see [adoration][adoration][adoration], like [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration], it's the first time I see this setting and it feels good, and the plot of each world is also very fast [adoration][adoration][adoration] ], the author is also very lively [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration], I wonder if the baby can update 100 chapters in one day to scare me [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

The male protagonist's mission comes first, and the system has no sense of existence other than modifying some settings. The plot is short. To put it simply, there is no problem with the male protagonist and the target he conquers, but the reader is a bit of a waste. If it's a bit sadistic, there are definitely some, but after all, there are only a dozen or so chapters per plane, and there aren't any that are particularly sad. It's refreshing to read, and it's much better than the seventy or eighty chapters per plane I've read before. I actually don't really like that kind of time travel. Each dimension almost becomes a short story. I can't stand it, I can't stand it at all. This book is a standard whitewashing guide. There are diseases everywhere in it. I wonder where there are so many diseases. One of the cute things about this book is that the author is Da Da. Almost every comment I read has a reply from Da Da. It can be seen that the emotional value is very high, and the opinions of some readers will be listened to, which is very good. To put it simply, there are no surprises. If you like it, you can take a look. The author will refresh it from time to time every day. You are welcome to capture it ~ "Escape with the lid on the pot"

Sickness + Death Escape + Fast Time Travel + Two Male Protagonists. It perfectly matches my xp. It's like a fairy tale. The writing is also good. Every world is beautiful. Highly recommended!

I quite like this genre. A Small World contains more than ten chapters and is quite complete, which is very enjoyable to read. Most of the stories are about letting the target fall in love with the protagonist, fall in love sweetly, and then fall ill and die. I love this kind of story. In many worlds, when people are in love, they are clingy and squeamish (probably), and sometimes they have a crybaby image. They have no feelings outside of tasks, and they dote on each other more. It suits my taste very much. It would be better if there could be some extra stories where Shou is reborn with memories and gets along with Gao after Gao dies [shy]

In fact, I think the protagonist is like Xiaoxiaole, if the two of them come together, they will die (Sorry [laughing awkwardly]) It's beautiful [Like] [Like] [Like] It's very sweet. I'm talking nonsense earlier, don't believe it's very sweet

It's good. Currently, only one world is sweet, and the rest are sad. The author's writing is a bit immature, but the more he writes, the better. In fact, I can give it five stars, but the one star is missing because the author has a low word count at the end of each chapter [face-covering] [face-covering]

It's super sweet, all sweet and no cruelty, and there is no misunderstanding between the protagonists. Really, super pretty, super sweet, highly recommended.

As far as the content is concerned, I don't feel that there are any particularly big surprises. Well, it's actually not very sad. Each world is very fast. The "sickness" in the introduction refers to the serious illness and death in each small world. My feeling is that reading this book is very enjoyable, and it's a cookie in one bite.

This is the feeling of sickness that I like hahahahahaha, I love it so much. The system is powerful, and there is no way to abuse someone without a long mouth. I like it so much. I believe you (bushi), who is as perverted as me, will also like it. That's why it's so small. Update quickly. Update quickly. I'll write a million words tomorrow. Hehe. After calming down, I said a few words. It is true that the plot has some loopholes, especially medical science. Don't be too stupid, but it doesn't matter. I am a local dog and I like to watch it. I also just discovered that the other book on self-abuse acting that I am reading is also written by the same author. No wonder it poked my XP so hard. It seems that they are probably the same book. Author, you update very quickly. You are much better than me, a pigeon. I envy the update speed. In the first world, the reunion was okay, but in the following worlds, it was obviously the first time they met, and the relationship between the two people progressed a bit too fast, and they were about to die before they even got there, which was a little embarrassing in this regard.