A Flat Peach Trying to Gnaw on a Lotus Root

I don't know how to describe it, it's really beautiful. The heroine's character is quite out-of-the-box, and the first-person perspective of the heroine is even stronger. It can be seen that girls actually care about the people around them that they care about, and the description of the heroine is very vivid. I can also see that Nezha's feelings for the heroine are changing little by little, is he looking for a gradual feeling? It's the least OOC Nezha fanfic I've ever seen on Tomato. This book can be picked up by fans of the original novel. The plot before Nezha becomes a god is also described in detail, and the supporting characters are no worse than the protagonist. After reading it for the second time, I found that the author's writing skills are also very good, and the integration of poetry into sentences is not obtrusive at all.

Our writers are typing every day without eating or drinking. They are very hard-working! If you starve yourself, you will never starve us! 20 Chapters can be updated in one day! ! Of course, all the above are just my words. I only dreamed about them... Hehe

The main theme is light and humorous, and the plot will not make people feel bored. Writing from the first perspective is a test of writing skills, but surprisingly, each character's personality can be considered full-fledged. I was surprised that some characters have been changed compared to the traditional images, such as the Jade Emperor, Guanyin, and Yang Jian. The changes fit the humorous style of the article very well, and there are a lot of laughs. However, I always feel that the world view is not very complete. I look forward to improving it in the future. The whole text is sweet and there are very few abuses. I feel very happy after reading it. There is no misunderstanding. The latest chapter's text also makes me feel a little itchy. Well, actually a big part of the reason why I stayed here is that I am actually half Nezha. . . Very good. . . My favorite Zhaer fanfic😭

Wow, it looks so good. I even realized after reading it for a long time that it was written in the first person. I don't like reading novels written in the first person after reading it for so long. The only novel I have read is Tomb Raider Notes. I feel that those who can write the first person in a non-contradictory way are great! ! ! Give me more updates! ! The heroine is so cute! Nezha is also described so handsomely [crying] I like it [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Super invincible and beautiful, the following content may involve some spoilers: First of all, I think there are a few highlights of this book: 1. The characters of the protagonist group of Journey to the West are very funny. They have abandoned the stereotyped impression of some characters in the original work and turned them into a more relaxed atmosphere. 2. Nezha changed from being relatively indifferent to being gentle later on. You can see the transformation process, especially how to write. 3. There are many places that make you cry in this book, such as friendship, and whether it is the emotional line between the heroine and Nezha, it is very, very tearful. 4. In this, the heroine saw (participated in) Nezha's past and present lives, and then participated in his life process, making him go from ruthless to sentimental (of course, this is in a secret realm, not actually entering the past). It was really easy to cry, the monkey brother and the heroine's peach sister, and some really touching parts. It can be seen that many of the characters are actually relatively relaxed, and then when it comes to the time when Nezha committed suicide, it is a big piece of writing, and it also touches on a very relieved place, that is, his father did get the "punishment" he deserved. Throughout the whole book, although there are many emotional lines between Nezha and the heroine, there are also many friendships and help from people around him, which makes it a very, very warm atmosphere. There is a feeling that everyone is a good person (except Li Jing). It's so heartwarming. Although there are some sad moments in the middle and some places that make people cry, you will feel that it was worth the crying after reading it. This book seems to be a very good one for me (in my opinion). It is the joy of suffering, the warm help of people around you, and the life-saving rescue of friendship. This book has many interpretations, many opinions, and complicated emotional lines, but I can seriously say that his emotional color is indeed very good! Finally, I would like to say that this book is generally a bit sadistic, has desserts, and feels very comfortable to read, but don't worry too much. This cruelty is not some misunderstanding between the abusive heroine and Nezha, but some experiences before the abuse of Nezha. It is really good to cry, and it is a joy after all the hardships. (Why did you say too much again)

I really like it. It has elements of both Nezha and Lingzhu. Especially when I see the Lingzhu, I suddenly think of Lingyin's Lingzhu. I feel like I want to cry but can't stop crying. Oh my god, teacher, I love you so much

This is already my second or third time reading. It's so beautiful. Especially the chapters where the heroine enters the Linglong Tower to save Nezha made me cry all the time. I really feel sorry for our third prince, and I can't bear to part with the spirit bead. If possible, I still hope that the spirit bead will survive. But after all, the spirit bead is Nezha's previous life. I can only think about this kind of thing haha Regardless of whether the heroine is strong in martial arts, she is also a very strong and brave Big Pantao! She protects Brother Monkey, protects Nezha, and protects Tao Fei. She is a great and powerful heroine. Don't abandon the book just because her force is not strong enough. It's very interesting. It's very interesting and highly recommended. There is some abuse in the sweet novel, but the abuse is not the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists, but something that Nezha has experienced before. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good, but the narrative may be slightly lacking. This is what I compared after reading the second book and then reading the first one (the author has been writing books about Nezha, and I am very happy to have such a wife!) The author's control over the characters is very precise, and every character is very lovable. Nuwa, Jumang Shen and others make people fall in love with them after seeing them. Of course, Li Jing is still as annoying as ever, haha. The portrayal of Yang Jian is also very interesting. It is the first time I see a character like Yang Jian and I feel like a real person.

How should I put it? In the early stage, the heroine is quite relaxed and funny. The heroine has a lively personality. The heroine is not invincible. Nezha really doesn't feel OOC. I really recommend the original book party to watch this. There will be a little bit of knife. The author's writing is very good. I saw it yesterday at 4 o'clock in the morning. There is a knife that has been chasing behind. First of all, Xiao Nezha followed the original one and clicked to death. The ups and downs showed me how good it is to die. Then there are Lingzhu and Madam. They really just clicked and killed me. "The relationship between Li Nezha and Nezha" Really [crying] I really want to cry. I have been crying. Show your weapons. I want to challenge you [crying] People who meet will always meet again at some point in the future. I really like this sentence. It's really good. "I am a weak and timid peach" Good night Mama Yin In the early stage, I even worshiped the great sage Yang Jian. When I saw him reading novels, I just wanted to laugh. He is a fan of the novel Journey to the West. The great sage is also a real male father.

Really super pretty. Xiao Qingtao and Nezha are so close to each other. Even without enlightenment, it still looks so beautiful. It's even more amazing after I regain my consciousness. And the author, can you update 100 chapters in one day? Scared us to death

I like Qingtao, I like Nezha, I like Brother Monkey, I like Lingzhuzi, I like Jumang, I like Empress Nuwa, the author writes well