A Flat Peach Trying to Eat the Lotus Root

I don't know how to describe it, it's really beautiful. The heroine's character is quite out-of-the-box, and the first-person perspective of the heroine is even stronger. It can be seen that girls actually care about the people around them that they care about, and the description of the heroine is very vivid. I can also see that Nezha's feelings for the heroine are changing little by little, is he looking for a gradual feeling? It's the least OOC Nezha fanfic I've ever seen on Tomato. This book can be picked up by fans of the original novel. The plot before Nezha becomes a god is also described in detail, and the supporting characters are no worse than the protagonist. After reading it for the second time, I found that the author's writing skills are also very good, and the integration of poetry into sentences is not obtrusive at all.

Our writers are typing every day without eating or drinking. They are very hard-working! If you starve yourself, you will never starve us! 20 Chapters can be updated in one day! ! Of course, all the above are just my words. I only dreamed about them... Hehe

The main theme is light and humorous, and the plot will not make people feel bored. Writing from the first perspective is a test of writing skills, but surprisingly, each character's personality can be considered full-fledged. I was surprised that some characters have been changed compared to the traditional images, such as the Jade Emperor, Guanyin, and Yang Jian. The changes fit the humorous style of the article very well, and there are a lot of laughs. However, I always feel that the world view is not very complete. I look forward to improving it in the future. The whole text is sweet and there are very few abuses. I feel very happy after reading it. There is no misunderstanding. The latest chapter's text also makes me feel a little itchy. Well, actually a big part of the reason why I stayed here is that I am actually half Nezha. . . Very good. . . My favorite Zhaer fanfic😭

Wow, it looks so good. I even realized after reading it for a long time that it was written in the first person. I don't like reading novels written in the first person after reading it for so long. The only novel I have read is Tomb Raider Notes. I feel that those who can write the first person in a non-contradictory way are great! ! ! Give me more updates! ! The heroine is so cute! Nezha is also described so handsomely [crying] I like it [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Super invincible and beautiful, the following content may involve some spoilers: First of all, I think there are a few highlights of this book: 1. The characters of the protagonist group of Journey to the West are very funny. They have abandoned the stereotyped impression of some characters in the original work and turned them into a more relaxed atmosphere. 2. Nezha changed from being relatively indifferent to being gentle later on. You can see the transformation process, especially how to write. 3. There are many places that make you cry in this book, such as friendship, and whether it is the emotional line between the heroine and Nezha, it is very, very tearful. 4. In this, the heroine saw (participated in) Nezha's past and present lives, and then participated in his life process, making him go from ruthless to sentimental (of course, this is in a secret realm, not actually entering the past). It was really easy to cry, the monkey brother and the heroine's peach sister, and some really touching parts. It can be seen that many of the characters are actually relatively relaxed, and then when it comes to the time when Nezha committed suicide, it is a big piece of writing, and it also touches on a very relieved place, that is, his father did get the "punishment" he deserved. Throughout the whole book, although there are many emotional lines between Nezha and the heroine, there are also many friendships and help from people around him, which makes it a very, very warm atmosphere. There is a feeling that everyone is a good person (except Li Jing). It's so heartwarming. Although there are some sad moments in the middle and some places that make people cry, you will feel that it was worth the crying after reading it. This book seems to be a very good one for me (in my opinion). It is the joy of suffering, the warm help of people around you, and the life-saving rescue of friendship. This book has many interpretations, many opinions, and complicated emotional lines, but I can seriously say that his emotional color is indeed very good! Finally, I would like to say that this book is generally a bit sadistic, has desserts, and feels very comfortable to read, but don't worry too much. This cruelty is not some misunderstanding between the abusive heroine and Nezha, but some experiences before the abuse of Nezha. It is really good to cry, and it is a joy after all the hardships. (Why did you say too much again)

I really like it. It has elements of both Nezha and Lingzhu. Especially when I see the Lingzhu, I suddenly think of Lingyin's Lingzhu. I feel like I want to cry but can't stop crying. Oh my god, teacher, I love you so much

This is already my second or third time reading. It's so beautiful. Especially the chapters where the heroine enters the Linglong Tower to save Nezha made me cry all the time. I really feel sorry for our third prince, and I can't bear to part with the spirit bead. If possible, I still hope that the spirit bead will survive. But after all, the spirit bead is Nezha's previous life. I can only think about this kind of thing haha Regardless of whether the heroine is strong in martial arts, she is also a very strong and brave Big Pantao! She protects Brother Monkey, protects Nezha, and protects Tao Fei. She is a great and powerful heroine. Don't abandon the book just because her force is not strong enough. It's very interesting. It's very interesting and highly recommended. There is some abuse in the sweet novel, but the abuse is not the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists, but something that Nezha has experienced before. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good, but the narrative may be slightly lacking. This is what I compared after reading the second book and then reading the first one (the author has been writing books about Nezha, and I am very happy to have such a wife!) The author's control over the characters is very precise, and every character is very lovable. Nuwa, Jumang Shen and others make people fall in love with them after seeing them. Of course, Li Jing is still as annoying as ever, haha. The portrayal of Yang Jian is also very interesting. It is the first time I see a character like Yang Jian and I feel like a real person.

How should I put it? In the early stage, the heroine is quite relaxed and funny. The heroine has a lively personality. The heroine is not invincible. Nezha really doesn't feel OOC. I really recommend the original book party to watch this. There will be a little bit of knife. The author's writing is very good. I saw it yesterday at 4 o'clock in the morning. There is a knife that has been chasing behind. First of all, Xiao Nezha followed the original one and clicked to death. The ups and downs showed me how good it is to die. Then there are Lingzhu and Madam. They really just clicked and killed me. "The relationship between Li Nezha and Nezha" Really [crying] I really want to cry. I have been crying. Show your weapons. I want to challenge you [crying] People who meet will always meet again at some point in the future. I really like this sentence. It's really good. "I am a weak and timid peach" Good night Mama Yin In the early stage, I even worshiped the great sage Yang Jian. When I saw him reading novels, I just wanted to laugh. He is a fan of the novel Journey to the West. The great sage is also a real male father.

I like Qingtao, I like Nezha, I like Brother Monkey, I like Lingzhuzi, I like Jumang, I like Empress Nuwa, the author writes well

Really super pretty. Xiao Qingtao and Nezha are so close to each other. Even without enlightenment, it still looks so beautiful. It's even more amazing after I regain my consciousness. And the author, can you update 100 chapters in one day? Scared us to death

Each character has an independent personality. The relationship between Nezha and Taozi is also gradual and has a reason. It is not a cliché of love at first sight. After watching it, I can still remember the three plots that Taozi went through when he rescued Nezha from the tower. The writing was very good and the portrayal was very touching. I cried to death! ! ! ! Mrs. Yin is very pitiful. Li Jing made me happy. It was so good that she was almost dead! ! ! Tang Monk is so cute to me! Haha, and Brother Monkey is an amazing nanny! Although Erlang Shen has a good character, it is difficult to stand up because of the lack of plot. Huang Tianhua has very few plots but I remember him as a very gentle big brother. There are also the Jade Emperor, Ziyun, Xiaotian, Crying Dragon, Lanlan's Guanyin, the sinister Dragon Girl, and the red boy who deserves a spanking. Thank you to the author for giving Nezha a family. Although he has no father, his childhood is still beautiful with friends. He has a brother, a mother, and a master who all love him. When the heroine enters the memory, it is so good to cry here. Nothing can be changed, but it has changed again. The result has not changed, but the heart has changed. No wonder the lotus root has grown a heart. It is worth it. Taozi deserves Nezha's love for her. Wuwuwu, although Taozi has poor magic power, she is really brave, and her heart is stronger than her magic power. She is loved by so many friends, and it is worth it.

It's very interesting. The heroine comes from time travel and has a cause and effect with Nezha. The most important thing is that the logic behind it is perfectly closed. It's very warm, and the gods created in it are all very special, including Guanyin who doesn't want to work, Red Boy who is very capable of working, Yang Jian who likes to read Boss Ba's novels, Mrs. Yin who blows up the kitchen, Brother Monkey who is the gentlest and kindest, and the Jade Emperor who is the little shot. Of course Li Jing is as annoying as ever.

The author's writing style is quite good. The relationship between Qing Tao and Nezha is gradual and really slow to develop. If you want it to be sweet at the beginning, this may not meet your expectations, but it will be very sweet later on, and it is not the kind of mindless pet. The protagonist is a very kind little girl, and she has shining points. Although compared with gods or other ordinary people, she may be too ordinary. But people are complex yet simple, ordinary yet shining! Everyone has different shining points. They have ordinary parts, but they also have their own shining parts. It can be regarded as a redemption novel. Xiao Taozi travels through space and time to redeem Nezha and, similarly, redeem himself.

It's very interesting. The author's writing style is very good. I feel that the memories are so cruel. I feel so bad for Nezha. It's hard to think that this is a tomato novel. It's so beautiful. I can't stand it anymore. I have to go to school today and have to wait for another 5 days. I'm going to wither.

The relationship between Xiao Qingtao and Nezha in the book is very sweet. I rolled on the bed while watching it. The plot is clear and sweet, yet sadistic. When I saw the author torturing Nezha, the corners of his mouth turned up crazily. Sure enough, a naughty person and a straight ball are a perfect match! Also, baby Lingzhu, you are so innocent ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

This Dudu is so good-looking, both the branch and the main plot are good-looking. The heroine is Pantao, who was discovered by Monkey as Bima Wen, and then became sworn brother and sister. The talkative Tang Monk is also Dudu, and the relationship with Nezha is also super sweet. She is definitely my favorite fan of Journey to the West.

It's a sweet article. If you like it little by little, you can read this. If you like it, you won't like it immediately but you will have to confirm it repeatedly. The emotional line is very thin, and the characters are very lovable and bold. After reading it for so long, I felt that it was sweet but not greasy, and it felt fresh and refined.

It's beautiful, super nice. I think the author's writing style is very beautiful and the pictures are very warm. This is the second Nezha fanfic I've seen. I didn't expect the content to be interesting and funny. Anyway, I just give it a thumbs up!

Embarrassing in front, funny I was very moved later It's obviously not torture, but I still can't stop crying. Maybe I'm moved. The writing is very good. In the early stage, the heroine was too bold, which made people feel embarrassed. In the middle and later stages, I got used to it and felt that this was the heroine's characteristic, and she no longer felt awkward. The writing is very good and delicate, the characters are deeply portrayed, and overall it's funny and heartwarming.

I've finished reading the main text of part 1, and I've also watched the 4 extra episodes of "Myself in the Shura Field," which are super sweet. Throughout the whole process, my emotions followed the novel. I cried when I needed to cry and laughed when I needed to laugh. It's really beautiful and the writing is also very good. I highly recommend it. Teacher, please hurry up and update. I will almost finish reading it in a few days. Please, please don't abandon the article. Please don't leave it without a finale. I beg you. Please keep being sweet from now on. It's over, it's over, the whole story is super sweet. This is one of the best and most interesting fanfics I have ever read, regardless of the series. I love every word in every chapter of this article very much, Teacher. You are really great, your writing is very good, the plot is also very good, and you are super, super cute.

It's super good-looking, funny in parts and touching in parts. I like the rhythm of the article and the characterization of the characters. Each character has its own characteristics [Love] [Love] eg: The little bird in the Lingzhu period [shy] Kangzi in the Little Nezha period, the little fat boy with squinting eyes [shy] Lei Zhenzi and Huang Tianhua in the Conferred God period (I cried when they died) and Kangzi who returned in the middle [cry][cry][cry] There are also Monkey Brother, Marshal Tianpeng, Sha Monk, and Tang Sanzang all have their own characteristics At that time, Shu Huang happened to see the author promoting books in the post, and fell in love with [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

The writing is super good, with delicate emotions and foreshadowing. It starts with appearance and filters and ends with character. The writing is humorous and witty. It's just that the extras were written in a hurry and I didn't read enough. Although it's a bit slutty😂, it's more like a broken puppy, looking at people's softness. Brother Monkey is really a very good monkey. But why is our Erlang like this hhhhh

It's really good to read. The author's writing style is very good. Sometimes it makes people laugh like a madman, and also makes people like a madman cry. It's a very interesting book. It is basically the most satisfying book among the Nezha fanfictions that I have read.

Daily lighthearted and funny articles, you can basically read them without thinking if you like them, non-normal traditional mythological articles, the heroine is purely obsessed with Nezha, the foodie Tang Monk, the old father Wukong, the crybaby Bai Longma and the elementary school student Bajie Wujing, PS avoid Lei: When Nezha meets Li Jing, he will call him father. There are no bad words like in other stories, and he is relatively calm. In the early stage, the heroine named Li Nezha acquiesced, but later denied it, and Nezha and his brothers visited each other. This is a non-black myth in the West. After reading it, I will leave you with: There are jokes or jokes from time to time in the whole text. In the early stage, it is more interesting to chase the husband and make fun of it. In the middle stage, I went through everything from Lingzhu to Li Nezha to Nezha as the God. I took a brief look at it. In the later stage, it was sweet and sweet. Next, the heroine returned to modern times but reunited within a few chapters. I really liked the later stage. By the way, Nezha also broke up with Li Jing in the later stage. He was not called dad but the tower was broken. He was equivalent to an immortal person, but he was fine with his brothers and mother.

It's super, super good-looking and sweet, and each character has its own unique personality. The author's writing is super good. It's the only book I've ever read in its entirety. It's so delicious. Long live the author! [Blowing kiss]

I can finally put an end to this book. During the update period, I was still in my third year of high school and would go home to catch up on it every week. I was looking forward to tomorrow when Qingtao and Nezha would be together. After the college entrance examination, I couldn't calm down and read it. Maybe because I had nothing to do after the exam and nothing I wanted to read. The impulse of the novel has been retained until I have finished reading the remaining 20 or 30 chapters. Xiao Qingtao is very interesting. I think that even if she was born in modern times, she is the type of girl that I particularly want to make friends with. Such girls feel that they can always create happiness for others and themselves, as well as our Xiaolian. Hua Nezha, how should I put it? In fact, I have liked him very much since I was a child. The legend of Nezha was in my childhood. There are so many versions of Nezha that I can't say which version I like best. I can only say that I have really liked this one since I was a child. I think the description here is very close to my heart. The image he has in my eyes has been finished for so long. I didn't expect that the article I collected a few days ago is the second article of Da Da. Let's say goodbye to Qingtao Nezha here. Although this book has been completed, when we can't see it, their long life has just begun. Note: 2025.7.28 3:00 Pm

The whole article is not a boring love story, it is a step-by-step process, and it once again embodies the mythical stories seen in childhood. Especially under the impact of Nezha movies now, many people have forgotten what the original Nezha was like. This article combines multiple versions of characters, but it does not appear messy. Instead, it is refreshing. It is an excellent fan article. My favorite sentence in the whole article is "Don't cry, don't cry, little Qingtao's tears are pearls."

It's very interesting. The author describes Journey to the West from a novel perspective, and describes the characters of each immortal very delicately. It's very different from the original version of Journey to the West, but it's also very interesting to read. I almost cried while reading several chapters (╥╥) I highly recommend reading it.

I have read the whole story. My objective evaluation is, don't read it with your brain. The other characters may be different from what you remember, but if you read it as a sweet story, it is still great. The writing style is quite good, and the main characters are not too OOC. I won't say that I have read more of Nezha's fanfics on Tomato, but I have read about 70 or 80% of them. Relatively speaking, this book can still be read. I recommend it.

The author's writing style is really very good, and I think the characters are very vivid. I read the part about Nezha removing his bones to return to his father. I cried when I read it. The author wrote about the difference between Nezha and Li Nezha. The writing style is really good. I like it very much. I highly recommend everyone to read it.